Begins Liver Passive from Sword Proficiency

The male protagonist spent 5 days, wasted more than 30 years of life, and gained less than 20 days of additional proficiency gains without any deep grudges or important events? ? ? ? ? ? ?

This operation of burning decades of life in exchange for twenty days of proficiency is indeed a major poisonous point. The practice multiplier is too small, and the rewards are disproportionate to the effort. In addition, the author knows how much lifespan is given by killing a monster. But from the reader's perspective, if you kill a monster, you will only get one minute of lifespan. As your strength increases, only elite monsters and BOSS will give lifespan, which is outrageous. In fact, when the author awakened his talent, he added that beating a monster will give him a lifespan of one year. Things like life are not so spicy. In addition, the role of the younger sister is not lovable. It is also dangerous for the mother to go to the wild. She is probably the reason why the pig's trotters have lived so many years. Forcing one's relatives to die is no different from asking one's own father to sell his kidney for a mobile phone. In fact, it is slightly changed. Although I really want to go, but I don't say it out and cause trouble to my mother and brother, it will not be so annoying. This is a small opinion at the beginning. Of course, if you are willing to listen to the author, you can change it. If you don't, forget it.

At first, I didn't know how much monsters were killed and how much it cost. Secondly, it was an economic issue. How many gold do students need to play once? It only costs a few gold to fight monsters in a day. It would be strange if they would go there normally. This...

Spend ten or twenty years of life in exchange for ten or twenty days of experience. It's like you have 3,000 yuan a month, and now you use your life span of twenty years to exchange for this 3,000 yuan. If there is a huge survival crisis, and you may die tomorrow at any time, that's fine, there is no problem. It is recommended to make a major change before it is put on the shelves to lay the groundwork. If it cannot be changed, it is recommended to cut it directly, otherwise no one will see it and there will be no chance to practice.

Poison, a poor family can still have an ignorant sister

I would like to ask the author, what is the point of the protagonist being so eager to upgrade to level 2? Can a copy only be played once? Why don't you learn more about it when you play a dungeon after reaching level two? Why arrange the Wild Wolf Five? Apart from reputation, what good does beating them bring to the protagonist? Your plug-in is not invincible! Skills are the most important to the protagonist! Why can't weapons be dual-wielded? Does it require skills?

Me and my biology brother, right? 😅

Actually, I feel that there is a very big problem with this copy recently. That is, there are tens of thousands of soldiers in the Sanhun dungeon. Author, do you really understand what tens of thousands is? The protagonists are not inhumanly strong, and their numbers are still meaningful to them. Even tens of thousands of ordinary soldiers kneeling there for you to kill can still tire them to death. Not to mention the military. The protagonist and their teammates are neither invulnerable nor infinitely powerful. How do you defeat an army of tens of thousands? It is still the kind of army that is not afraid of death. You will be exhausted even if you are tired. So if you make a slight change and change the character from 10,000 to 100, it would be normal to kill several waves of hundreds of soldiers to disperse the soul. There are tens of thousands of soldiers. I feel like you, the author, are a bit ridiculous. After all, the protagonists are only as strong as breaking a stone monument, and they can blow up the sky. With this little strength, and no unlimited battery life, how can they spend tens of thousands of troops?

I didn't feel the pleasure of seeing the liver, nor did I feel the satisfaction of the results after the liver. It's just that the writing style is too plain and too everyday, and it doesn't have the wanton publicity and passion that young people should have!

Because of the splitting characteristic, the protagonist can only activate one sword energy at a time, and he has to wait for the delayed star wheel to explode before he can wield the next one. So, should the protagonist just watch during these four or five seconds? Wouldn't it be a waste to practice four swords per second at the beginning, and what if someone attacks you from other directions in the four or five seconds after you swing the sword forward? Do you think the protagonist should practice melee combat, and use it to passively fill the sword energy vacuum period by strengthening his body?

Why do you post your thoughts in the comment section and delete the post? I read other people's posts and deleted mine. Didn't I just tell me how I feel about the protagonist's sister written by you, the author? You write books and I read books. I think the characters in your works are unreasonable. Come and express your opinion. What's wrong? I posted an objection and you can reply if you see it. If the follow-up plot requires it, you can ignore my post. I can discuss or complain with other book friends. Besides, before it was deleted, I read it and a few book friends liked my post. At least my views are recognized by book friends. At least I didn't talk nonsense in my previous posts, right?

After reading the reviews, there is a reason why it is ranked so low.

The author said that after thinking about it carefully, is it the substitute sister? If this is the case, it is completely reasonable. Your life is not yours anyway, and it is totally fine if your body is injured after training and cannot recover.

This is the most peaceful fantasy novel I have ever read. I have read the latest chapter 123. So far, no adventurer or ordinary person has been maimed or died. The copy is more like an amusement park, without horror and blood, and you can come and go at will. You can just exit when you want to go home for dinner 🥱

Why do I feel that the author of the Sword Mastery Cup, which the protagonist spent so much effort to improve, wrote such a waste. What's the use of this improvement? That's just a little improvement after spending so many lives.

After reading dozens of chapters, I still haven't solved the problem of family difficulties! There is too little space about my sister. Why did you write about her? What do you want to highlight? The male protagonist's mother is a tool man! The most incomprehensible thing is why not just brush it!

I was directly dismissed in the comment area.

Why do you have to make a bad start? Isn't it a bad start to build a well-off family?

I have only read a few chapters, and I feel that without knowing the difficulty and extent of increasing life, it is a bit confusing to exchange more than 10 years of life for saving a few days of training. After all, there is no emergency event card time, and it feels like burning life should be done when time is running out or if the data of lifespan recovery is mastered. How many years will it take to burn in a day? How many days will it take to kill a boss without crying to death?

There are two copies in a row. Do you know what you are writing?

Not to mention anything else, the passive skills only have bonuses before level 10. After level 10, only the characteristic bonuses are left, which is very profitable. So I forcefully suppress the protagonist and turn the protagonist into a glass cannon. To generate sword energy, you only need to swing the sword, and the damage is proportional to the attack power of the sword. This means that if you take a wooden stick, the damage will be the same as hitting it with a wooden stick. It is outrageous. And that will, it is obviously an active skill, but it is said to be passive for the protagonist. Can't you write it as passive? It directly becomes a percentage plus attack power, and the latter characteristics become actively adjustable, which is better than your nonsense. When I saw that the latest chapter entered a new map, I had no desire to continue reading.

There is a high probability that it will be thrown into the street. I don't know what to write after it is put on the shelves.

Being a swordsman means you can only use long-range sword energy? Then you can just be a magician.

When I looked at the introduction, I felt that I would be crazy about it. It was too abstract.

I haven't read it since it was released, but I have a problem with the novel. The protagonist has burned his life for decades and has an attack speed of 4 swords in 1 second. Not to mention the charge-up move of sword force that appeared before, but later on, the advantage of 4 swords in 1 second was abruptly abandoned for the combined characteristic of splitting and surrounding. It is not as good as combining some special abilities and some ordinary abilities. There are also the characteristics of blocking skills. Generally speaking, the characteristics of blocking should be counterattacks, breaking moves and defense, so the characteristics of blocking should tend to be sword counter (attack the opponent after successfully blocking) or sword shield (the success rate of blocking is greatly improved). The idealistic ability of Heart Sword should appear in the swordsman's will (I don't know if I remember the skill name correctly). Now, if you turn on Violence and then switch to it again in an instant, it doesn't matter whether the operation is cool or not. If you hit it on the head, you will suddenly refresh the attack power bonus. Aren't you afraid that the opponent will seize the flaw and take it away with one move?

Exercise increases proficiency, but fighting monsters doesn't increase skill proficiency. Isn't this unreasonable?

Very well written! Those of you who read the book may have problems with your thoughts after reading it! The starting point is money, and there are all kinds of monsters and monsters.

The descriptions of fighting and same-sex friends are quite good, but there are too many meaningless things like the protagonist completing dungeons after level 2, which are watery and inconsistent. Also, the writing of female characters is very rigid and does not feel feminine at all.

A suggestion is that the protagonist's fighting style with infinite sword energy is like a wind blade expert magic swordsman holding a sword-shaped staff. My personal suggestion is that the setting of Sword Qi can be similar to Jian Gang, extending the attack distance. Sword Qi can be used as a mid-range trump card in the early stage. Otherwise the fighting scene will become a cycle where I dodge, distance myself, throw my sword energy, dodge again, distance myself again, throw it again...