Difficulty: Liang Huang's World

For example, if Liang Huangxiong rises, he will not be qualified to become a talented and strategic emperor to unify the world in distress, end the endless wars long ago and bring about peace and prosperity. The emperor can have a harem, queens and concubines instead of just a female protagonist. In addition to fighting for hegemony, he can collect some popular beauties, such as his fiancée Hongchenxue. After all, you don't want to be a tauren with a green head, right? It is said that the original Hongchenxue has no good results, only children, and the reincarnated life trainee of the devil goes to the fairy mountain to sell dried tofu!

Isn't it written about the Grand Master?🙂🙂

The enhanced version of the powerful Emperor Yulianghuang based on the mind of a time traveler, this little Bai Hanhan and Teddy are not even as good as the original masters. They are so lustful and want to add a ferocious side effect. It is better to build the emperor's pure yang body, and make a dragon double cultivation secret technique. The pure yang body has It is particularly attractive to the opposite sex, because the pure yang energy attracts the unique yin energy of the opposite sex, which is opposite to yin and yang. The pure yang energy has a very attractive effect on women, which can increase the favorability of women. It also has the effect of actively stimulating lust. The more time you spend with the opposite sex, the more favorable you will be. The more you have, the more you can naturally capture the heart of the goddess with high quality. Your protagonist's character and personality are not well established and well drawn. It has been dozens of chapters and it has not been established yet. It always loses character and looks like a loser teddy. There is a lot of nonsense in the word count and it is useless to explain the narrative. Talking about the writing method of the composition, Shui Xin's thoughts, inner theater and off-site punctuation, etc., The protagonist has nothing to stand up and has no depth, such as how many turns are set for the Nine-Nine Dragon Body, what level is the protagonist's cultivation level, experience in practicing skills, moves, etc. Are you familiar with and mastered it? If the protagonist is not invincible, then don't be so arrogant. I have an ideal plan for future goals. I can modify my skills and techniques to create more powerful moves, etc. After mastering the memory information of the characters in the future plot, I can use the resource information that can quickly become stronger and expand my own dynasty. I can't always think like a teddy, and only accept women and conquer them. It can be a condiment, and getting stronger is the most important thing. After all, you want to dominate the world. The heroic emperor has a grand mind and a strong mind. It needs to stand up and take action. It must have its own main plot arrangement. You are a dynasty fighting for hegemony. If you don't go back to improve the official system, laws and regulations, etc., And don't deal with policies and control and dispatch people, will the country become strong? As you slowly conquer the surrounding small and medium-sized countries or forces, your dynasty has problems that you cannot fully control and deal with. Do you think the struggle for hegemony is as simple as recruiting some experts? The operation of the state machine requires talents from many different professions. Officials, including civil and military officials of the third, sixth and ninth grades, or special professions such as doctors, casters, etc., No matter how big or small, can run it well. Civil and military officials can be divided into six departments in ancient times. The head of each department must find ways to collect talents and arrange them immediately, as well as the Prime Minister's Army. Divisions are also required, and there are at least 5 generals. At least five armies in the southeast, northwest, and northwest, and one general. If you have more generals, you can open more legions. To lead the army, you can't just recruit a master. At least you must have this talent and know how to arrange and fight the art of war. Doctors, doctors, etc. Must be like ordinary ~ miracle doctors , the same goes for forgers. Divine weapon forges cast weapons for masters and attract masters to come and make them. Those who owe favors or can join the dynasty are accepted. Ordinary forges make tools for military personnel or for common people. The dynasty personnel have not yet been controlled and dealt with. The protagonist just abandons the country and does not care about policies, etc., And it is useless. It makes sense. He always runs out to play alone. The emperor has no personality at all. Although he is a god, demon and martial arts. If you think about our ancient emperors in reality, you will know how stupid you are. The emperor is the leader who issues the command and has responsibilities. He cannot always run alone and have the protagonist do everything. The protagonist can only recruit a few points. Super talents, the main thing for the protagonist in the world of gods and demons and martial arts is to improve their strength. Only in this way can they be safe and dominate the world. The powerful subordinates are used to serve the protagonist. This is the emperor's thinking. You can't always do everything by yourself. It is better for the protagonist to have his own main plot and sub-plot. The protagonist Different tasks and avatars are arranged to promote the ideal progress of the protagonist's core goals, making it more three-dimensional and vivid. If you look at the classic harem novel of Yuan Wuji, the time traveler Yuan Wuji, which is the book "Bringing Martial Arts to the Thunderbolt", you will know what a forced pattern is. The arranged plot can be very vivid regardless of the wits and martial arts between the protagonist and the original characters. Life is very exciting. In addition to collecting and conquering beauties, the protagonist changed the plot characters and the original characters to fight wits and martial arts to become stronger through lottery. He also used the future knowledge of the plot to cut off all available profit resources to become stronger. The protagonist practiced and upgraded to become stronger and invincible. This ultimate ideal goal only took a few steps to become invincible in the finale. It was arranged in the year. In the past few years, the protagonist has been very busy in addition to acquiring a daughter for training and upgrading. He has also arranged many plot tasks and finally became invincible. After a few years, he became invincible. It can be said that although the protagonist has the help of the system, he is also very smart and hard-working. He arranges many tasks by himself, plans and completes the tasks, and the madman machine also contributes a lot.

I was stunned when I read the introduction. The author hated Su Huanzhen and others for the right path and gritted his teeth. Why did he watch Thunderbolt? Besides, isn't it normal for Gaowu World Dynasty to have no sense of existence? The classic Gaowu World Fengyun Dynasty has a weaker sense of existence. Should we also spray it? The mainstream of Gaowu fantasy and immortality online literature is all about sectarian family struggles.

Self-titled article, ancient novels destroy innocence and women fall in love with men. They are tasteless and make Guan Shan Lengyue even more nymphomaniac than Yao Xing. They also desecrate people's innocence. Not to mention that the Yuliang Emperor was able to compete with the sixth level of the martial arts before he mastered the Nine-nine Climbing Dragon Body. He was seriously injured and was not accidentally beaten to death.

I feel like there are too many explanations and too much inner drama.

The content, writing style, and characterization of the two writers about Yu Liang Huang are not as good as Yu Liang Huang.

As the title states, it's okay so far, but people nowadays don't have the patience.

After reading thirty or forty chapters, I kept writing about the author's inner thoughts. It was too messy. The number of words was not that great. Thinking it over before writing it is a good start. Don't waste it. Write it and then read it several times.

How should I put it? It's a lot of nonsense introducing this and that, and it's not over yet. They are here to see you adapt the plot, not to see your nonsense. There are some things that are not necessary to be written in the text. As the author, you will bore the readers.

Another person challenges fellow Pili Puppet Show fans 😠

Middle Palace: Three Sacrifice Huan

There are a lot of vernacular words, and many of them can be written as psychological activities with punctuation marks. Others are fine, ruthlessly pulling people out.

Come on and update, I hope this book can help Emperor Liang rise to prominence and not find a great master to take over the palace, unify the miserable world and end the continuous wars and killings~

You wrote this entirely for your own pleasure. You wrote too much nonsense. You can put the words in parentheses at the end where the author said it. After reading two chapters, I lost all desire to read. It is all explanation. Anyone who can read Pili has a basic understanding of the plot. There is no need to write those long and boring things.

The costumes and martial arts scenes of The Jade Liang Emperor are very distinctive, but it's a pity that the plot was wasted later on.

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The creativity is very good, but why does it feel incoherent in many places, and the paragraphs before and after it don't match up?

For some reason, I made do with writing this chapter, as an explanation to all the fellow Taoists who have read this story. Throw aside those miscellaneous branches, such as: Ji Wushuang completed the line of annihilation in the Brahma universe, asked Bodhi to join Jingxuan, and became Tianjijia Lanxing. Tan Wuyu joined forces with Hou Tianyu and Xiao Fengyun to quell the misfortune that brought disaster to the Yi clan. Yuan Wuxiang and Juanshoutian also broke through the dust-fazed Demon Tianluo and Binghe Jianwen respectively, and returned after the disaster was over. br> The last big drama is Jingxuan's "Seven Stars" fighting against the Lord of Heaven and Earth. The Lord of Heaven and Earth is beheaded and not dead. Yue Wuque plans to sacrifice himself to activate the Sky Fire, but is blocked by Ji Wushuang. At the same time, the strongest Assisted and the last of the Jingxuan Nine Stars, Youbi Star and Haotian Xuansu returned to their positions. With the assistance of Ziwei Sect Master, the Jingxuan Nine Stars directly wiped out the Grain God Xuangen, and the heaven and earth were dominated, and the heaven and earth were finally abandoned., … Mo Renxian and Yu Tianjian began to inherit the 'legacy': After witnessing the secret of Shenchen Lake with his own eyes, Yu Tianjian completely fell in love with the rebels of the Seven Counties and severely damaged the king of Bafeng County in the first battle. However, the Mo people have super tenacious vitality, and Xiang Nangong, who had recovered the next day, rushed to kill Pang Cangyuan before he exposed the secret of Shenchen Lake. Yu Tianjian fought against Xiang Nangong again, but was defeated by Xiang Nangong, who no longer concealed his identity as a Mo man and had no ordinary human weaknesses. He was hunted down by the Bafeng County Prince throughout the country. Xi Chuangyue secretly took action to counter Xiang Nangong's Mo people system. Yu Tianjian captured Xiang Nangong, the secret of Shenchen Lake was exposed, and the people who had escaped for many years were purged. Nangong swallowed and absorbed half of his son's life, drained the power of the world-killing ink, and launched a low-end version of the Mo Shang Zhuan. Yu Tianjian teamed up with Xi Chuangyue to finally defeat Mo Gui Xiang Nangong. However, although Xiang Nangong died, the ink of killing the world was immortal, and he annexed the two of them without any control. The dark source space is extremely dangerous. Even if Xi Chuangyue and Yu Tianjian work together, they are still unable to defeat the fierce flames of the ancient monsters in the realm. Yu Tianjian could no longer care about his face and asked his sister for help. As Yu Tianyu responded, the Blue Bird and Fire Hong reappeared in the dark source space. Thousand-year-old filth in the Realm has been purified, and the eternal monsters and ghosts have finally vanished into nothingness. However, at this moment, as a burst of dragon energy entered Yu Tianjian's body, changes occurred in the dark source space. Yu Tianjian and Xi Chuangyue's souls merged, and the yin and yang were harmonious... For Xi Chuangyue, the dual cultivation of soul and soul was no less than physical intercourse. This unprovoked, an extra 'husband' appeared in the second half of her life. It is impossible to let go of the 'murderer', that is, the owner of the dragon energy, the Yuliang Emperor. Is there anyone like you who is a 'family father-in-law'? Moreover, you still forcefully 'play with each other'. She will not admit such a 'mistake'! Emperor Yuliang admitted his mistake and said that all this was 'God's will'. You have also seen this boy's 'life', and he cannot support the Yuyu Dynasty at all. 'After the emperor left, Tianjian Boy and Yuyu Dynasty asked Lady Lu, Wolong, to take care of them. ' When Xi Chuangyue learned that Emperor Yuliang was about to 'ascend' in response to the calamity, it was difficult for Xi Chuangyue to accuse him any more. After all, in terms of 'age', she is the 'senior chewing young grass'. But there was one 'person' who disagreed. Ming Ke's halberd shook violently: The spirit of the weapon came to the world, picked up the mysterious god of Hongmeng, and was born into a flesh womb. It was called an unworldly creature. The 'birth' of the contemporary natural world, the story of swordsmanship and the metaphor of chivalry are born! Sister Control Xia Yu Fu appeared, and his first words were: 'I don't allow...' Because the sword said Xia Yu firmly disagreed with this 'marriage', Emperor Yuliang held it in place with one hand and tore up the space with the other hand, throwing the 'Sister Control Crazy Demon' to Tianshou Lake. As the marsh of nature, you should carry out the mission of being the source of war. How can you have the nerve to hinder your sister's pursuit of 'happiness'. Then before Xi Chuangyue took action, Emperor Yuliang imposed the existence of Mo Shi and the responsibility of uniting all parties to catch them all in one fell swoop. As for whether the two of them can destroy Mo Shi and take over the Yuyu Dynasty, Emperor Yuliang is not dead or ascended yet. ...... Finally: What should come will eventually come. Although the eight tribes of Tianxie were completely wiped out, the evil dragon head was not saved after all. Fortunately, before the Baqi Evil God came to China, the Jade Dragon Hermit finally invited the Martial God Du Qianqiu to have a final martial arts debate with the Yuliang Emperor. Emperor Yuliang was able to fully understand and consolidate all the key points, and achieved great success in his field! The Eight-Digit Evil God has finally arrived. Because King Asura has brought about countless calamities, the first stop is to destroy the Holy Dragon's mouth! The heroes of the Taoist sect suffered a tragic loss at the hands of the invincible Yaqi evil god, Qingyangzi took advantage of the invincible dragon to attack. However, he was handsome for only ten seconds, and the invincible dragon was already beaten to death. However, all this is under Qingyangzi's consideration. The Nine Dragons War Soul enters the body and turns into the Nine Dragons Armor. It merges with Qingyangzi and the most powerful Taoist master in the world is born. With the holy dragon shirt on his body, Qingyangzi once had an inseparable fight with the Yaqi Evil God. However, as the "Seven Souls" of the Yaqi Evil God rotated, Qingyangzi finally knelt down. Whether it is the revenge of a thousand catastrophes or the threat of an invincible dragon, it is impossible for the Yaqi Evil God to let Qingyangzi go. After tearing apart the invincible war dragon and killing Qingyangzi who lost the holy dragon's robe, the next target of the Yaqi Evil God is the ancient Defeng Road. At the time when Qingyangzi's soul returned to Santu River, he met Xingxu Yiqi, learned the true method of opening the Danqing Prison Map, and set out to resurrect and return to the sun. In the Yang world, with the loss of the 'Long Nao', the soul of the Nine Dragons is about to spread across the world. Suddenly, Ying female doctor, Yu Cixin, Mu Lingfeng, Lin Ruomei, Jie Hongyan, Ling Yueyuanxingwangye,, The six palaces join forces and rely on the Dragon Realm to forcibly suppress the Nine Dragons in the mortal world.,, ... The Eight-Dimensional Evil God set foot on the ancient path of De Feng. He first laid a wall of evil contamination, but then fell into a trap with his backhand, ushering in multiple blockades from the elites of the Confucian sect, the heroes of the righteous path, the Yunhai Xianmen, and the Five Ways of Haozheng Relying on the rotation of seven souls, after sacrificing Yulu, the King of Death, and Yu Zhixin, the Eight-Digit Evil God came to Lin Tianxing. Due to the lack of the original operation of sending power and offering true energy, Huangru supreme used his full combat power to defeat Xiao Xiao alone. The Emperor Wu Jian Chang An finally appeared, just when Lin Tianxing was planning to launch the Emperor Tian Yuan Explosion, and activated the Holy Word Heavenly Waterfall with the help of the power of the ancient Confucian heroes within the Five Paths of Haotian. Emperor Yuliang broke the wall of evil stains and defeated Emperor Wu Jian Chang An! Then, Tianhuizong and Yezhu took away the remaining eight-dimensional souls. However, the failure of Yamato's soul caused the nightmare of the gods who arrived, and the God of Destruction appeared! Being defeated, Emperor Yuliang retreated to Yuyu, the capital of Wu, and the ancient Defeng Road was disabled.

I can't see the previous one anymore, has anyone saved it?

No, why was it banned again? Your writing is not very brilliant.

What happened? It has been removed from the shelves? The double monthly pass at the end of the month has been removed from the shelves? The author has crossed the red line!

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? I feel like it didn't cross the line, so it's gone.

I see that another one is still being updated. Why can't I see it?

I posted a post about Ma and deleted my comment 😰

Author, that book has been removed from the shelves. Should I write on a different website or start a new book? Let me tell you something! ! ! !

Author, wasn't that book taken off the shelves? Why is it still showing up? Can't even see it.