I Joined the Kaidan Game in Tokyo

There are a few minor flaws: 1. When the protagonist encounters the remaining clothes of the student who jumped off the building, he directly names them "Blood Clothes". The file in the police later is also called "Blood Clothes". It's a bit too taken for granted and too coincidental 2. Isn't it easy for players like the protagonist to stare at word games on their phones all day long to be exposed? The same goes for working in a convenience store. You have to pay people while staring at the mobile phone screen. It is easy for people to guess that you are a player.

I really can't afford to be hurt if I don't follow up on the new book. Pursuing the reading at the starting point is really important, especially when the results are calculated on Tuesday. The recommendation votes are rewarded with monthly tickets. Newbies don't force it, but I want to pursue it.

The author should take some time to check and fill in the gaps. The plot is too blunt and the writing style needs to be improved. Even if you don't do any of these, you still need to correct the typos.

How do you feel after reading it Can you eat it?

Does the author want to write a youth romance novel? Why is it that the protagonist jumps around in all kinds of ways, and then he can't hide anything well and is directly exposed?

The author's bug can always make the typos ridiculous.

I just saw a new book released. Is it still a single heroine?

There is a big problem in solving the fox fairy. The protagonist is too impulsive. It feels like I'm mindless.

There are too many typos. I suggest you fix them.

For one liberation, I can endure it by dressing up as a woman. For two liberations, I can't bear it by dressing up as a woman. Let's just change the personality of the male protagonist.

[Liberation] I still don't know how to complain about having a sex change. Can I liberate the blood-stained clothes, and then liberate the ax to cover the appearance?

The story is interesting and the writing is good, but some details need to be paid attention to.

Tapir, will the protagonist get into trouble with 123 for stealing jobs in the future? (Thinking)

Recommended book "I can refresh plug-ins in every copy"

If the author changes the paragraphs and some modifiers, the book's score should be much better.