The Homeless Man of Teyvat

"The Homeless Man of Teyvat" - Liangcao (Note: The following content is suspected of spoilers, please watch with caution. Also, the evaluation is very subjective. If you have any objections, you can discuss it. The relatives are not guilty and have some moral integrity) Highlights: 1.The protagonist has a strong sense of morality, which is good. The world always needs more people like this. Reading the book review, to be honest, it made me a little nauseous. Maybe readers have read too many murderous protagonists, which made them disgusted by the protagonist in this book. Alas, to be honest, I don't understand why they are disgusted? I hope this world can have more people like the protagonist of this book and fewer readers in book reviews; 2.The writing is quite good, and the author's words make me feel comfortable reading them, with a sense of letting nature and flow flow; 3.The description of the protagonist makes me very happy. From his distrust of other people when he first entered Teyvat, and testing others all the time, to later remembering God's love for his people, he began to trust others, made friends, and integrated into Teyvat. The author really describes the protagonist very well; 4. (The author's way of writing, the protagonist and Wendy feel a bit like Nantong. How should I put it, is it popular to write like this? Why do you feel so good when getting along with Wendy...😂 Brother, you smell so good. Jpg) (The brackets are added because I think this is not a highlight) Disadvantages: 1. The emotional scene is not well written, and the heroine falling in love with the hero is a bit abrupt. In my opinion, the plot written by the author is not enough for the heroine to like the hero so much. Then there is a problem with the number of female protagonists. In the early stage, I thought the female protagonists were Yelan, Ying and Youla. They may be added later, but they may not be added later. But in the end, the plot of Youla is gone. Are you serious, author? You use pictures of Youla on your cover! ! ! In the end, there were only two heroines, Ying and Yula. We even just wrote a little thunder movie and Funina had a crush on the protagonist, and then the book was over... Ah? I can only say 6; 2. It's a little bit unfinished. Although for me, a reader who only plays the original game, the plot is just right. If Bengtie is followed up, I won't be able to understand it. But, there is much more that can be written. The protagonist and heroine haven't had their wedding yet, and they haven't even met his people yet. It can only be said that it is a pity, but it is not completely unfinished; 3. Regarding the plot of Xumi in the book, really, the way you wrote it, the author, probably many readers who followed the update at that time abandoned the book. Although everyone is criticizing the original 4.8Nt plot, most people still have a pity attitude towards Nasida. You made the protagonist and Nacida have a hostile relationship, and I even felt that the protagonist was torturing Nacida. Although the reason will be explained later, but... Your move made me want to give up the book😂 4. People on the Internet said that Azar was rehabilitated, but Azar was a bad person in the first place, and he had to die. The Azar you wrote is indeed more reasonable than the original work, but most readers, including me, probably don't like it. Maybe the time when you wrote these chapters was the plot of 4.8, And you, the author, were trying to cater to the readers at that time, or maybe the author really thought so. Anyway, I think the author has washed away Hazard a bit, which I personally find unacceptable. Summary: Score 7 to 8 points (out of 10 points). The writing of Mond, Liyue, and Dao Wife is really good, and the author's writing is very good. After reading Dao Wife, I always thought that this book could be put on my 9-point bookshelf, but the plot of Xumi... I deducted 1 point. All in all, it is still a book worth reading. Supplementary 1:I am personally not very satisfied with the fact that Dotore is not dead; Supplementary 2:The plot focuses on Mondstadt, Liyue, Inazuma and Xumi, and Fontaine only wrote about ten chapters. The plot of Abyss is not written much, and many places are a bit far-fetched. However, because the plot of Genshin Impact has not been completed, I personally think it is acceptable; Additional 3: A total of 616 minutes of reading.

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An undercover agent without a country, a journey with no return!

At the beginning, he was caught by a treasure-stealing gang. In order to survive, he joined the gang and signed a certificate to kill a fool who was trying to save his mother. I couldn't stand it. To be honest, the writing was not bad, but Genshin Impact is a 12+ easy game. You will abuse the master and suffer a lot. Ordinary people often see themselves in real time travel without the help of Goldfinger, but this is not what I want to see.

The first part was actually pretty good, but the scene where he met Ning Guang felt a bit weird. Logically speaking, the protagonist was forced to kill Yuan Mu in order to save his life. The main responsibility did not lie with him. He sent Yuan Mu's ashes back to Liyue and asked a doctor to treat Yuan Mu's mother-in-law. It was already considered kind. There is no need to have so much moral pressure, right? If you really care about it, if your moral bottom line is so high, then you won't be able to do it when you were in the treasure thief group. I feel that the protagonist is a bit hypocritical, and you can't help it. When the protagonist negotiates the terms with Ningguang afterwards, it doesn't matter to fight for the interests of Granny Yuan Mu, but it doesn't mean that he has no desires and desires, and only wants swords and horses? Don't want a salary? The protagonist's previous character doesn't look like he's not interested in money. Personally, I prefer the character of "Ask me to do things for you, and you have to pay me to succeed". There is no need to put too much moral pressure on yourself. Being a saint is too tiring. Being an ordinary person is very strong. Reading novels is just for entertainment. It is difficult to accept this kind of hypocritical character. He can't look away from a very simple thing and carries all the guilt on himself. As far as the protagonist of this book is concerned, in order to survive at the beginning, he can be flexible and hypocritical with the treasure thieves, tell lies, and stab the knife into the chest of a stranger in order to survive. In the subsequent plot, even if the protagonist encounters a treasure thieves in the future journey, he would rather kill one by mistake than let go. As far as the plot is concerned, it is not the protagonist who is at fault, but the treasure thief group, so why does the protagonist keep pretending to be the perpetrator, taking on unnecessary moral pressure and acting like he is about to suffer from depression?

Why do you feel like all the character's skills are game skills? In reality, there are definitely not only three axes in the game! In the comics, Kaia can wave his hand and condense it into an ice wall, and condense the ice elemental power into darts at will. Why is it so rigid in the author's case? Can't the author create some character moves? If not, then just learn from them. It's very awkward to be in the real world and still be so rigid.

The heroine, especially Ying, has no way of imagining that the twins, who are immortals and can travel across the world on their own initiative, would "fall in love" with the indigenous people in the previous world. Even if the protagonist is not a native, and there may be problems with the protagonist's time travel, and it is very suspicious to suddenly appear in front of them, they can still "fall in love" under such doubts. I think the planeswalkers in Western Fantasy can have something in common with them. Also, I personally feel that the relationship between the twins should be the same as the relationship between Nuwa and Fuxi, they are brothers and sisters, but also husband and wife. The Gemini's view of the world is a top-down view. MiHoYo has always reminded us that the Gemini are travelers and they will eventually leave.

Dude, are you writing a female video, so gay?

The author's writing was really good at the beginning, so good that it made me empathize so much that I wanted to cry in just a few dozen chapters. But from the moment Zhongli got the power, the overall tone dropped. Of course, it was still very interesting, but not as good as the beginning, so I found It's not just the author who has this problem, many authors have it. When describing the suffering and powerlessness of small characters, it's so penetrating. But when the characters gain strength, the overall tone will go down. This may be because people can't describe things they haven't seen before.

It is indeed difficult to be regarded as a heroine. She is essentially a civilization traveler who is greater than the Seven Gods and Tianli.

It's better not to let it out, just keep it as a mascot. If there is a problem with the sage, replace it with a sage.

Many writers of two-dimensional game fans like Genshin cannot avoid obscene writing. At least this one is telling a good story so far.

It's quite beautiful in Liyue, but not so good in Mondstadt. In Liyue, the protagonist has some sense of control. When the protagonist makes decisions, no one interferes with him, and Yan Shen only observes secretly. After arriving in Mondstadt, especially from the moment I met the Wind God, I lost my sense of control. Although Fengshen will give you some benefits when you help Fengshen do things, it looks uncomfortable and gives the impression that the protagonist is being led by Fengshen all the time. I read novels to gain emotional value. In other words, I feel comfortable or happy. I don't like it, so let's just leave it alone! Maybe I'll come back to see it later if I get interested, but maybe not anymore. The previous section of Liyue is quite beautiful. If anyone is interested, it would be good to take a look.

The great sage Azar's reputation has been reversed

You can put it on the shelves at the beginning, but you can't let yourself go. You can play with memes in moderation. If you play with memes to the main line, the result will be like that. Take a look at the books of those great masters. Who can play with memes to play with the main line? If you have indirect convulsions, I can say that you are humorous. If you have convulsions all the time, you are crazy.

What the hell was Du Lin writing at the beginning of this paragraph, and that inexplicable dream. Really, I have no desire to read it.

How does the author prepare to deal with skirmishers and Dian Wang? If you plan to clear your name, tell me in advance so we can get together and part ways.

Mond wrote this paragraph as if he had lost his mind. Being played around. Withdrawn

It's okay to read in detail, but the details are too shitty, such as: the owner of the Fire God's Eye abandons his subordinates in order to escape for his life, a family owner on Kaiji Island wants to impeach the living God Miko after the resurrection of the snake god, and the great sage builds a "birdcage" to imprison the grass god. There are too many details.

Damn, Genshin Impact Sanjiang is so rare.

Among Genshin Impact fans, it's considered immortal grass.

I'm looking forward to seeing if the people in the Holy Spirit Empire, after hearing the name Kafka from Ye Lan and seeing the cosplay suit, will use their whole country to find the person, pack them up, and send them to the protagonist's room.

I'll talk to you later and write a follow-up😭😭😭

Halfway through, I didn't feel that I was happy. Except for Fengshen, who was sincerely good to him, the others used the protagonist as a tool. The protagonist killed a god in front of others and had to have his news blocked. He made some money and had it taken away by others. It was really a bit frustrating.

Don't you even want to write a side story?

According to the setting, the protagonist is Xia Die (violent theory)

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Why can't I suddenly find the author's new book?

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Ｏ(≧口≦)ＯAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't read the author's new book and I feel like there are ants crawling on me