Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: I'm Really Not Born Lucky for My Wife

I finally understand why so many authors don't write about family members. These five or six chapters made me feel numb all over, so embarrassing. I feel like it's a thankless job, so I don't write about my relatives.

Since we are going to write about little Huo Niang, let's just use Huo Dongxiao as the female protagonist 😏

Little Huo Niang

At the beginning of the chapter, he is useless and has zero soul power🌚Can you give me a half level or a first level? 🙄It's enough to feel uncomfortable while reading a novel

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. When writing about twin martial souls, you have to have zero innate soul power. Even if you have seven or eight levels, you can accept it.

Forget about being a master and a rebel, sisters, mother and daughter. Gu Yuena, Snow Emperor, Zhang Lexuan, Han Ruoruo, Meng Hongchen, these five girls are enough, especially Gu Yuena, who is a master and a disciple, come on.

Sex change is so disgusting. Obviously a person is a man in the reader's mind. You changed his gender. Then go play the love game with him. Then penetrate him. So disgusting 🤢

In the future, don't write these touching stories about the characters' families and their relationships. You won't write the preface and the like, and you won't really make people feel embarrassed. Moreover, the original purpose of reading the novel is to feel comfortable and refreshed. When you describe how bad the protagonist and Huo Yuhao's family environment is, it really makes people uncomfortable. In your novels, you often lose the desire to read after reading the first five chapters. You can't even attract people from the front, so how can you let people see the back? How do you get people to subscribe? No matter how good your writing is at the back, your front is unreasonable and looks like a desire. Brother, please listen to me. Don't write this kind of beginning in the future. You are not suitable for this kind of writing.

Little Huo Niang

Qidian still owes me a dislike for the author. It's not enough to just block a novel, but just block the author. One novel written by an author can tell the level of his other novels. If you really hate one book, don't read anything else.