I'm a Demon in Tokyo

This is too desperate. The strongest human being is taken away at will, and the protagonist's upgrade is slow. There are a lot of people in the top management who are raped, and there is no information gap with the big boss. How can this be done? Relying on the abuse of the master and the breeding?

To be honest, this world feels like there is no future at all. So far, there has not been any human background that is too strong. The most powerful one has been taken away. On the human side, high-level people like the protagonist's father are still from the big demon. The protagonist is still slow to upgrade. The big demon still knows that there is a person like the protagonist. Unless you forcibly intellect the big demon, otherwise the protagonist is a very weak hostile force in the face of high growth. Why not kill him in advance and keep him?

Let's have a fight

? ? ? Suddenly a bet came up for me, and it suddenly seemed like I was back to the routine I had done more than ten years ago. Why did I suddenly enter into a bet when there was a better way? ? To force a relationship with Jian Zong? ? ? It just feels like child's play 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

Is it "Visible Girl"? Too rare

Nowadays, cool writing is in the spotlight. Natsumi has too many plots and is a bit ambiguous. I'm afraid if you accidentally write her as one of the female protagonists, it will be a big deal. If you write a character who was bullied by a gang of gangsters and then parasitized by larvae all over her body as a female supporting character, it will be a big deal. I suggest you be careful.

1. Is the demon too strong? How do you fight the protagonist? Dear friends, in these latest chapters, Yuyu feels that the explanation has been very clear. ① The demons are also fighting within themselves. The three demon lords with different ideas are competing against each other. The weird lord who came first controls the cracks in the world and does not want too many demons to flood in at once, causing the world to be destroyed, and in the end there is no place to stay at all. ②The Lord of Weirdness himself is also trapped in Kotoko. She has eaten the soul and the poison of the witches of the past, and is in a bad state. Not only had to face the pressure of the two demon masters in the wild world, but also had to subdue the old resurrected demons who did not obey discipline, and they were also struggling to support themselves. (Especially when a certain Kotoko-san who acted unreasonably was poisoned...) ③Although evil ghosts like Suna Oni are being resurrected, heroic souls and juniors like Ida Iryuu are also working hard to move forward. ④The Great Miko is just a banner against demons, not the only reason why humans won thousands of years ago. There are other heroes and descendants such as Swordsman who exist, but they have not been written about in just twenty chapters. This can only be said to be a time race between two worlds and multiple different forces. It does not say that each world is a piece of iron, so the odds of winning are already certain.

Emmm, I had a strong sense of déjà vu. The male protagonist took the script of a Japanese comic heroine, similar to the heroine of Shana and The Three Doomsday Questions, and then met the hero of Asashi.

Why do the recent plots seem to be trying to whitewash the female villain? They always write about how the female villain is good-looking and arrogant. This is wrong. They forcefully occupy the body of the protagonist's fiancée and beat her soul to only a trace. Can this be washed away? Will he become the protagonist's harem again later?

As the number of words in this book increases, more and more book friends will see it, in order to provide a good reading experience for our lovely book friends. Before everyone reads the book, Yuyu will try his best to describe the book in order to avoid wasting the time of friends who are not interested in it. 1. Why is the first heroine Miko? Because Yuyu likes Jianzi very much. He has read anime, comics, and interviews with the original author. Yuyu likes Jianzi very much for his bravery in the face of fear, his care for his friends, his own kindness, and of course, his occasional a little lust. In this book, Yuyu tried his best to restore Mianzi's character, especially in the bat incident. Of course, due to writing skills, he may not have written the way some friends who also love Mianzi thought. I am deeply sorry. Yuyu is really writing seriously. You can read all the latest chapters and tell Yuyu where there are problems. Yuyu will work hard in the future. 2. The world view of this book. It's not exactly the same world view as Visible Girl. It still follows the big Japanese monster world view. Friends, please don't completely substitute the combat power system of the visible girl, although the original work does not have any combat power system... The background of the book Yuyu is that the demons in the wild world want to invade the human world. Then there are the resurgence of sealed ancient demons, reborn modern demons... And so on, Yuyu will unfold bit by bit in the book. 3. The protagonist of this book. Yuan Zhengxiu's character is two-faced. In the eyes of ordinary people, he is excellent but indifferent, and everyone's son. But in front of people like Jianzi, he is a little considerate, a little sly, and sometimes complains, but he never loses control at critical moments, and things will be arranged in an orderly manner. People involved in the incident will be consulted for their opinions, which is different from the traditional overbearing kind of "I don't want you to think, you want me to think" towards the heroine and the people around her. 4. Update. In the early stage, Yuyu kept updating 6,000 words every day, and sometimes I would update a little more if I could write it. Because Yuyu has to repeatedly check paragraphs and smooth out sentences every day, so that book lovers can read as smoothly as possible. Yuyu likes writing very much, the kind that comes from the heart. I have written a free dragon fanfic before about everyone going to retire. After writing 700,000 words, I often added extras. Yuyu really loves to read books, loves stories, and loves to share stories. I will work hard to improve my personal level. If I express inappropriate words, please forgive me.

It's just that some of the language and some of the plots are awkward, such as the Kitahara brother. I jumped when I saw him. Others are pretty good. I'm looking forward to the protagonist putting a knife on the neck of "Kotoko".

Updates are getting less and less, which is a bit scary

Dark Assembly, the cursed version of Pokémon, is very consistent with the world view of Visible Girl. The heroine mainly goes to top supernatural places, so it is very reasonable that the spirits she encounters are much stronger than those encountered by Yotsuya Miko

There are drawbacks to this strategy. After finally raising the 4-star level to the maximum level, if you draw a 5-star character, you have to start over with resources to cultivate it. During this period, the protagonist's strength will not improve at all. Which one is better, the high upper limit of level 0 or the lowest upper limit of level 0?

I have read Chapter 96 so far. Disadvantages: The rhythm is not very good. Always changing perspectives, after a while, the heroine, aunt, fox, junior sister, the sword sect person, and the boss behind the scenes, more and more people are described. There are fewer and fewer protagonists. I skipped a lot and went directly to the chapters from the protagonist's perspective. Too much text is given to the female protagonist, and it feels like a female protagonist. Something didn't feel right at Qingmei Tuogu's place. The description of the male protagonist is almost like the golden finger of the female protagonist. Advantages: The system settings are good and very cool. The combat is also okay, a classic leapfrog challenge. The writing is also good. The author should fix the perspective of the male protagonist and stop describing it in two or three lines.

The writing is good, but the plot is a bit delayed and contains a lot of foreshadowing. However, it is not recommended to bury too much in the early stage as it will appear redundant.

The writing is quite good, and the author looks old at first glance.

Dear friends, Yuyu has been catching bugs these two days, and also added some details that were not written in the previous chapters. Anyone who is interested can go back and take a look, mainly focusing on chapters 13 to 17. I would also like to thank some of the friends who helped Yuyu catch bugs and correct typos. Kiss mua.

I fuck Qidian Lao Feng, and he gave me a daily guide when he became a eunuch 😡😡😡