Bringing Calamity to All Worlds: Starting with Tianlong Sword to Hold Back an Army

Those who write about cultivating immortals are most afraid of being caught up in the so-called national justice. In my opinion, when you embark on the path of spiritual cultivation, you are different from ordinary people. Mortals are as humble as ants, as insignificant as dust, and insignificant. Among the heavens, seas, worlds, and heavens, there are as many mortals as the number of imperial signs. When do immortal cultivators care about the world? Worldly mortals are nothing more than ants. If you change it to Fengshen Yanyi or the ancient saying, mortals have not yet developed their six senses, their bodies are mortal, they don't know the numbers of heaven, they don't know the principles of heaven, and they don't understand heaven's heart. It's time for them to die!

Start the inheritance of Nuwa? Nuwa teaches you martial arts?

Casting wisdom, casting plans, casting heart, another victim of Mo Cangli 😰?

Author, your writing skills are actually pretty good. Look at the top books on the current rankings and try to figure them out. See what readers like to read now. Your plot is too poisonous. The beginning is the classic evil slave who kills the master😓. There is an evil mistress at home. The protagonist who travels to a small world basically starts with the collapse of heaven in the beginning. Now readers don't accept this.

The writing is good, it looks quite comfortable, but the plot is not good. There are many big problems. The first one is cheating. The cheating in the opening chapter can be taken away by others and can be sensed by others. Even if it is only possible, it is very low-level. Are you a cheat in the story of a mortal cultivating immortality? The feeling is not as good as the plug-ins ten years ago. The current plug-ins are not written like this. They are all unknown, unknown, unfathomable, and then gone. To put it simply, when facing the plug-in, I don't know anything. I don't know how it came. I don't know why I came. I don't know what I came for. I don't know. Then I can get rid of it in the later stage. The second one is the Huntian Baojian. The Huntian Baojian is designed with Gao Wu in mind. It is also the universe of the Divine Weapon series. If it does not involve Gao Wu and the opening chapter is Jin Yong, then the Hun Tian Baojian should not be written. It makes people feel that it is too powerful because you can't use it. It looks very powerful and is a plug-in. In fact, it is restricted by the author and cannot be used. It is very baffling. There are a lot of questions in the first chapter, and there are still a few questions that I don't want to talk about, let alone the dozens of chapters so far. The writing style is very comfortable to read, and even though there are many inexplicable plots, it seems to be okay, but it is not attractive and can only be said to be tasteless.

How should I put it, The author has an idea, but the author cannot write it.

Li Chengqian: If you want to make the King of Wei the crown prince, let him live in Wude Hall! You want him to be Li Shimin 19 years ago, but I don't want to be Li Jiancheng 19 years ago! You ask me why I rebelled? In the ninth year of Wude, Emperor Daxing Gaozu was also asking you why you rebelled! Yes, I am lame, I do not have the appearance of an emperor, and I am not as good as King Wei in everything now, but do you really regard yourself as a filial son? Our whole family rebelled. Even if you make the Zhenguan reign the most prosperous in the world, the history books will not record that you are the eldest son. I will kneel in front of my mother's soul right now. Whether you give me poisonous wine or three feet of white silk, sit down in this position and don't give it to me. Don't forget that when you were holding your uncle's head in Xuanwu Gate, it was the queen mother who stood in front of me with a sharp sword to protect me.

Those who like to read Zhu Tianwen generally don't want to watch too many martial arts movies. It's enough to have a world to lay the foundation. You have written a few. The desire to watch it was generated by the title of your book, but it was worn away by your few martial arts worlds. It faded away. Once the readers lose interest and can't read the book reviews, they will leave.

The plot is a bit confusing and incoherent at all

Is your Huntian Baojian just a decoration?