Time Travel at the Same Time: I'm the Only Normal Person?

No, I understand that you like the protagonist after watching anime, but if you think about it, just like Zhang Chunan in front of you, for his own safety, he will sell to anyone, and he also has a small cock protagonist, and then the protagonist protects him like a son. Writing the protagonist in this way cannot make him a fun person, he can only be a fun person.

Do you want to lick Chu Xuan as long as Infinite Horror? I have read a few books recently and it is normal if Chu Xuan doesn't come in. As long as he comes in, Chu Xuan is above all else. I am almost invincible but I still want to lick him. What's wrong? Is he finding his long-lost biological father?

After reading the comments, I thought he was a fun person, but it turns out he is working as a thug for the company.

When Feng Chaohuang wrote Tongchuan 99, he also had the experience of rushing to finish the book. He only wrote more than 2 million words at that time, and his talent was very high. Later, The End of the World reached its peak.

The conflict is forced at the beginning, or is it caused by the mentally retarded protagonist, who has no strength. In order to survive, he has to be a pug. Do you like being a dog? There will definitely be no revenge later.

How should I put it? From the beginning, the protagonist has never left the village in his life, his life history can be checked, and he has never committed any crime. After awakening his superpower, he immediately forcibly creates a conflict with the company. When he first saw Xu San and Feng Baobao, he felt that they were going to kill him. . .

In the early stage, it was too confusing to be alone. I didn't understand the purpose of arranging this plot. Are you close to Feng Baobao?

Books written by people who enjoy themselves must be invincible, at least semi-invincible, and they must be safe, otherwise they will not be entertainers but people being entertained.

You don't need to watch Naruto, he's ridiculously bad. For example, when Zabu slashed Orochimaru, Orochimaru avoided the Substitute Technique. He spent more than two pages using the Substitute Technique before entering the next plot. There was no plot advancement or mental description in the middle. It was all science fiction about the Substitute Technique.

There's been a lot of AI flavor recently, it's all about plot characters encyclopedia, one sentence can be written 8 times.

The first part is pretty good, but the further you go, the more boring it becomes. Originally, this genre of simultaneous time-traveling abandoned the process of defeating monsters, upgrading, and strengthening one's strength, and just started to enjoy this world and then moved on to the next world. As a result, it was already in the later stages, and I was still doing this and that. In order to strengthen my strength, I don't know anything about the pictures. It's a bit tiring to look at them. I can't follow the last few pictures.

I have read two books on the Bankai Clone Ryu, both of which started with one person. After a few chapters, it became boring. One person is poisonous! The plot is hard to explain in one sentence. It's not fun to feel so frustrated after cheating.

There is too much decline in the later part, and the magnetic field maniac can still understand it as the author's self-pleasure, and it is a plot that can be watched. As a result, the further you go to the back, the more it directly consumes the popularity of the original work. People who have fun can't see the fun, plot fans can't see the plot, and harem fans can't see the harem. The protagonists in each world are becoming more and more confused, and they seem to have their own careers. In fact, readers increasingly have no idea what these people are doing, blindly pursuing meaningless things, destroying the original plot without explaining it. Compared with the first few volumes, the author's mental state becomes more and more like a social animal, and he writes for the sake of writing.

It's a bit interesting, it feels like an anorectal doctor.

The Conan chapter is not well written. It is inappropriate to drastically change the characters of the original plot characters. Good fan fiction should rely on the personalities of the plot characters to write things and choices that fit their personalities, rather than letting themselves go and breaking the characters of the original plot characters. This kind of writing is very unpleasant.

A seriously mindless self-pleasure article. Every thought comes to mind.

It would be great if you write about fighting well, but you have to create some kind of villain, and it looks really awkward to distort the personalities of the daily protagonists.

I skipped reading this book because half of it was about introducing the plot, analyzing combat power, and introducing characters. It was too boring. With all due respect, cutting out half of this book does not affect viewing at all.

Why did this smell start to smell weird? In other worlds, just use your brain. Does One Piece need a brain? It feels a bit like educating the Uchiha clan on how to become normal people in the world of Naruto where there are many serious diseases.

You are really hungry if the first few chapters are so poisonous and people can still read them.

The first part is at least the story of the protagonist. The more I read later, I found that the protagonist no longer has a story. The later part is written as the story of the protagonist watching the original protagonist. I write a lot of the original plot and characters. The protagonist makes me feel like the audience. I do some science from time to time. Personally, it is very dull anyway. The meaning of the protagonist's existence is very mysterious. It is a more refreshing writing. It's not very satisfying either. After all, the descriptions of the protagonist are sometimes not as detailed as those of the original protagonists in each world. There is a feeling that the protagonist comes just to watch the show, giving you the feeling of watching the original novel again. Of course, there are no changes at all, but the changes are very average, so it's not that exciting at all. This is the feeling that I can't see half of it. It's weird. I hope the author will write better in the next book.

I really want to skip all of that one person, and I have no desire to watch it at all.

Water and water. Your latest volume has something to do with Digimon. It's as if it couldn't be done with another clone. A bunch of introductions, a bunch of concepts, Wanjielou still wants you to introduce it, and also wants you to introduce that he communicates with all the heavens and the worlds, isn't it a buddy, isn't his name written down? Besides, whoever reads your book doesn't know this concept.

Awesome, you are really good at it. I spent more than 200 points, and it's like I didn't watch it.

If there is a world you want to see and some cool operations you want to see, you can make appropriate adjustments and add some to it.

I feel that the plot has no ups and downs, even if it is a different world, it is all about the future, or the development direction of Hakoba, or something else. It is just killing enthusiasm, bro 😅

When you look at it, you get the same feeling: chaos

I feel like covering the sky is not as good looking as before

Does the succubus protagonist in the catalog have succubus blood or something?

It's not too much to ask for more refinement