
LOL: My Attribute Points Are Full, and the Alliance Has Closed the Server
LOL:我属性点满,联盟关服了
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Write more about games, less about green tea, and bitter relatives.
Alliance writing is not urban writing. You make me dream back to 12 years ago. 🥲
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Brother, your writing style is still good in storytelling, but unfortunately the direction is a bit biased. Alliance writing is not a traditional urban writing. There is no need to write so much reality. In addition, it is okay to have more reality, but there is no need to write such bitter and hateful content. It is tiring to read. Your writing style is a bit similar to the style of early alliance writing. Now alliance writing is more rigorous and joyful. Your realistic writing is a bit speechless.
I feel 10 years younger after reading the novel
It's very strange about the author's setting. The plug-in has already filled up all the attribute points, and it will become invisible even when playing in an Internet cafe game. I started playing with s2. LoL laning has been the top priority from the beginning. Faker was known for his laning ability from the beginning. I don't know how a person with a lot of ability can become invisible even in an Internet cafe game... So many attribute points are applied to a dog? Another setting is that in the past life, you have sacrificed everything to play a professional role and improve your attributes, and then after rebirth, you can live leisurely, fall in love and play games. Later, when I joined the royal family, I still couldn't get the right to speak, so I ended up with something like Uzi withdrawing from the competition. A guy who begged the referee to abandon the game in 4-on-5 because of his temper. Why don't you write uzi to fake the game? This is more reliable. Also, after joining the team, according to the setting, he was the core of the team, but in the end, he was just a transparent person watching the team split. Do you think having a career means working? There is a conflict between co-workers and you are eating melon seeds next to you? If someone is screwing a screw and sees his co-workers fighting, some people will still try to persuade them. A competitive game like the Alliance that requires cooperation ignores all the problems of the team. I just get paid and watch the team fall apart, right? The entire scene was focused on the scene, while he was talking about his love and dedication, as well as his uniqueness. Then the reality is just lying down and dawdling.
Good news: Your emotional scenes are ranked high among lol-related articles Bad news: We are an e-sports article about rebirth and invincibility. Da Fei led 4 soldiers to win the fourth championship. With your protagonist's current ability, I think it's unacceptable if you don't turn the 4 opponents into soldiers.
It's so messed up that I don't know what to say. Maybe the author is still complacent about this NT plot.
When writing about g8 stuff, I just write about games. It's understandable if I add some emotional drama, but games, fantasy, and business wars are all popping up. Can you still handle such a big structure with dual main lines that you can't handle? I was confused as I read it, and sooner or later the eunuch couldn't stand it anymore.
Why not just use a big move to send everyone to the hospital? Withdrew and couldn't resist anymore
Poisonous
It was okay before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, it was just a bunch of nonsense. I don't recommend reading further.
The pace is a little faster
Cloud players would like to mention a few points, I hope they can be of some help to you. 1. The pace is too slow, almost fifty chapters, and we haven't entered the official competition arena yet. Domestic competitions and S competitions probably don't have to write more than three hundred chapters. Unimportant games should be skipped. 2. Full attribute invincibility has not yet seen the invincibility effect. The protagonist should be crushed by various opponents. I saw it before The protagonist Koi Brother has this style. 3. In the Internet cafe game, you can consider playing wild core with the configuration you wrote. If you abuse food, the leopard girl and the male gun should be very fast. 4. Write less daily. The heroine's father arranges to go in early and step on the sewing machine. He drags his head very low, which is considered a poisonous point.
I ran away, I was so tired watching it. Reading a novel is quite depressing.
This is not an e-sports novel. If you come here for games and e-sports, you can leave.
I am an old LOL player. I remember that I started playing officially during the S3 World Championship. The current novels either start around S6 or around S12. When I first found this book and wrote about S3 LOL, I was really happy. I was just thinking about reminiscing about the past. , Reminiscing about youth, the result is that something is wrong, 12% of it is wrong, it is a bit fantasy and normal, many LOL novels have some kind of rebirth, panels, characteristics, but the main subject is e-sports, and the main purpose is to win the championship in e-sports, but this one... …I can't say what the current theme is, but it is definitely not e-sports or competition. This reminds me of another book I read called "I Became a Card God After the Suspension". It is said to be a card game. At the beginning, it started out similar to the Master Game. The protagonist was stabbed in the back and gave up. The account quit the club and found a job as a network administrator. He took a whiteboard account and planned to reorganize a team from scratch and return to the professional arena. The style of writing changed and he said that the protagonist watched the news that there were many mysterious disappearances in the city where he lived, and then went home immediately. I was attacked by abnormal monsters, and then my cards materialized. After solving the monsters, I joined the official organization and started to fight monsters and upgrade... Even though the introduction still says about going from an Internet cafe to the championship, and then the triple crown... The content in the book has nothing to do with e-sports competitions. No more, Urban Superpowers belongs to... As for this book, I am still chasing it, just because I am curious to know where this book will turn in the end. I will withdraw it when it is clear. As for other readers who came to LOL e-sports like me at the beginning, don't waste it. It's time to go. This is not an e-sports novel. Let me make a few final comments. In the latest chapters, in the S3 Global Finals, you can get high-tech "weapon spirit" equipment, and it cannot be detected by the official, and opponents can use money to solve the competition team, referees, and senior management. , Actually only thought of using high-tech equipment in the competition, and the article also said that the S3 Global Finals is the first large-scale event held by Riot Games. There is no experience, and the rules and regulations are not perfect in all aspects, so they can take advantage of loopholes... Well, S3, the first time, wow, great.
I just watch games, and you gave me a fantasy. Are there any urban superpowers in the back?
Alliance means alliance. What's the point of adding some weird real-life plot? Am I here to see the fantasy city?
Just follow your own pace. The most important thing is for text creators to clarify their own ideas. Being guided by too many comments can easily lead to confusion. If you feel it's a bit slow, go through the outline and take a look [If so Personally, I think the pace is just right, much better than many people who only make bad jokes about anchors and players!
It is simply contrary to Tiangang
What kind of emotional drama do you write? What kind of emotional scenes do you write for male videos? Didn't you know what you clicked in to see, or were you just pretending to be dumbfounded? Did I click here to see you writing about falling in love?
The story of rebirth with full attributes is just a dimensionality reduction attack on the four casualties. It keeps suppressing the protagonist, and it loses all meaning. I really have no motivation to read it.
I'm speechless. Is this a game or a fantasy city? I can add cultivating immortals at the end. I'm still not skipping poison.
Why is the external mouse missing?
Stop dragging around such disgusting things, drop the follow-up reading