Holy Grail War? Dragon Ball Wars!

The First War: I give it nine out of ten points. After reading this, the only feeling I have is that everyone is alive and there is no feeling that the author is controlling them. They are all acting according to their own will. The Second War: I am not qualified to rate it because I just watched the beginning and skipped it. I felt very bored. Anyway, after reading the comments, their general feeling is that people who have watched Inuyasha and those who have not watched it are silent. As for the reason, I don't know the reason. The Third War: I can only give a score of six points. If the air conditioner did not become the author's incarnation in the end, I can mention it at six points and five points. Overall, it is interesting at the beginning, mediocre in the middle, and slightly dull in the later period, but it is still a qualified work for JOJO fans. However, if compared with the first war, I can only say, is there a different author? The style has changed too much, especially the sense of inconsistency and deliberateness brought about by the author's manipulation of the story. There are also many plots that are too routine. I am really disappointed. Maybe it is because the excellence of the first war made me give the author too high a starting point.

A group portrait novel has no so-called protagonist. This book uses the setting of combining the Holy Grail and Dragon Ball to engage in a two-dimensional war. It has indeed changed a lot, which is hard to reconcile. I'm not very good at talking. But this book is really great.

Inuyasha is still too old, and the characters summoned are not popular characters. I am not interested in the chapter names in the second volume Every war should choose a world that has become more popular in recent years, and match it with servants with high abilities and popularity This is the only way to attract people.

In addition to Swordsman Duel and Immortal Duel, I have also read other volumes. Although not every character is understood, and some have only heard their names, but it doesn't affect the story very much. I really like the description of the behavior of each servant and master involved in the Dragon Ball War, as well as the communication outside of battle. It's not just a cricket fight, the choice of different characters, whether to go to war or negotiate, or the conflict of values, or the chemical reaction between the characters, the mutual sympathy is also very attractive to me. What I like most is what I said at the end about the symbolic meaning of the dragon balls. A treasure that can fulfill any wish without side effects or pitfalls. It is a dream that the characters in the book and I long to have in reality. Ending with the meaning of Dragon Ball, my personal feeling was sublimated. Every favorite character comes out, and those who are upset will also smile knowingly. This is probably why I like to read fanfiction. I want to see a good ending for my favorite characters. Thank you, author, for the time and effort it takes to write such a book is unimaginable. Thank you for bringing me a work that is excellent in my mind, and thank you for giving a good ending to the characters I like.

It's better to have some fire heroes in a world that's on fire

It's very well written, I haven't seen anything like this in a long time.

Looking forward to it, Gawain vs Escanor at noon

Three times, two times, and then gone

In fact, I think the biggest problem in these two volumes is the homogeneity. In the Inuyasha chapter, the characters are homogeneous. Most of them are similar monster characters, and the backgrounds of the characters are very different. The Jojo chapter is about the homogeneity of skills. There is nothing new in using a large number of time-based skills. The first volume is completely different. The character backgrounds and skill sets of the parties are basically not similar, and the collision can produce different excitement. In my opinion, since this book has chosen this kind of brawling route, it has to be wild. It doesn't matter where the battlefield world is. What matters is the different characteristics of the characters on each side. You are the numerical monster and I am the mechanical monster. You are the hot-blooded type and I am the funny type. You are born to cheat and I have someone above me. Only then can we truly write a wonderful duel.

I have read some novels in which anime characters fight in the Holy Grail War, and yours is the best, beating them by a few blocks.

Most of the readers attracted by Holy Grail War have seen or know Fate, but the second volume suddenly jumps to Inuyasha, leaving Fate readers confused. I feel like it should be done step by step. At least the night battles should be written first. After a few Lostbelts, it will be suitable to jump to other worlds.

There is no protagonist, and the main storyline is just the Four Holy Grail Wars. I feel like this book won't be long.

It's really too messy. To be fair, the Cross-Universe Holy Grail War is a very good idea, whether it's to make up for regrets or to play Super Smash Bros., But why is the author's peak in the first volume? The biggest reason is that the Master in the first volume is the Master in the original work, and they are from the same world view. Even if the heroic spirits come from different worlds, they can be integrated into an organic whole under the guidance of the Master. For example, the light that saves Sakura, and the uniquely charming Emperor Lelouch, we can Feeling the bonds between people from different worlds and the changes they bring to the world However, later on it became more and more like a big fight, especially after the Jojo chapter, it was just a group of people fighting with their own abilities, and there was no longer the aura of the first volume.

This book doesn't even have a vase protagonist with a small role. I can't love this type of movie.

To be honest, the author, you did not choose the InuYasha chapter and JOJO well. Why is it not good? Let me analyze it from a personal point of view. InuYasha is not popular. I only watched this anime when I was a child. Now that you are writing this, I have forgotten what the plot is and what characters there are. To put it simply, the popularity of the book is low and passers-by cannot understand it. InuYasha fans alone cannot increase the popularity of the book. The problem with the JOJO chapter is that you added a lot of characters that are too buggy. Jotaro and DIO can't even stop for 15 seconds in total. You have a few characters who can stop for more than 10 minutes at a time, and you also added Accelerator and 100 Fighters who are absolutely defensive. The fighting power of Sun Wukong, the original characters in JOJO almost have no sense of existence. Originally, the biggest attraction of JOJO is the battle of wits and the plot. Once you start the fight, you stop the characters to use their skills, and only a few people can move. It is really boring to watch, and it is not as well written as the first fate. The advantages of your fate chapter are: first, the character creation is faithful to the original work, and the combat power is not too broken; second, the work is popular and popular with the public, and everyone can understand it; third, the famous battle theme, the magic tube. So I recommend a few ideas to you based on the advantages of the first article. For the first idea, you can write One Piece + Death + Naruto, refer to the 7vs7 Heroic Spirit War, let Naruto and Pirates each have 7 masters, and then pull 14 people from Death to fight the Heroic Spirit War. The second idea is to summon fate heroic spirits from ordinary comic characters, such as Great Teacher summoning heroic spirits, Brother Lu summoning heroic spirits for a big battle, etc. The third idea for Gundam Brawl is to find a few characters from UC, Seed, 00, and Iron-Blooded Orphans, and then let them summon each other, such as Amuro summoning Livontz, Mikazuki summoning Setsuna, etc., And lie to them that if they don't win the Dragon Ball War, your universe will be destroyed.

The ending is a mess, the plot is plot-killing and the plot-killing is plot-killing. There was no surprise in the final battle. After watching it, I felt like: Oh, yeah, it was just as boring as I thought. The first volume is the best written. InuYasha volume, when the Slippery Ghost enters the scene, it is just a boss fight plot, which is very boring. The jojo volume unexpectedly introduces the extraordinary combat power of Paradise Dio, and the ending is plot-killing, with some surprises. Conan volume, I was originally looking forward to the chaos and melee, but I didn't write it clearly. It was too martial arts, and it was not finished. I felt that the effort was hit on cotton, and then disappeared. Overall, it was not bad. overlord volume, a lump. When cheating characters were introduced in the casting, there was no check and balance on the cheating characters. The non-cheating characters were all just for show (calling the eldest lady by name, what is she here for, and it is useless to set up a foreshadowing). The theme is about a brave man fighting a demon king. The plot kills an important demon king, which gives a very poor impression. There was nothing surprising about the final battle, and it was already over in terms of settings. Even if it's going to be a Demon King vs. A Hero, why not Rimuru vs. Seiya? What everyone likes to see in the melee novels is the Zhuxian game and the Immortal game in front of the cheating characters, rather than the dimensionality reduction attack. The viewing experience is very poor, and it is the least surprising volume. With improved writing skills, the look and feel is even worse than the InuYasha roll. Problems that should be avoided in the next volume: 1. I also said in a previous post that those who cheat and those who don't cheat should not sit at the same table. An overly unbalanced character setting will cause obvious discomfort, and you will need to patch it even if you want to choose. For example, in this volume, Gin is patched, and he happens to have the Soul King fragment that Aizen is studying. This at least gives a chance to disrupt the situation, instead of everyone just going through the motions. 2. Melee, battle, and their respective highlights must be written down, and they should be the main stage. In this volume, the battles between Sasuke, Gin, and the eldest lady are very good, why not write more about them. The author's own setting is that God started the war just for fun. For this setting, he even changed the ending in the JoJo volume. According to this setting, there shouldn't be so many orthodox and boring stories.

The author should not fall into inertial thinking. Don't think that the further you go, the stronger you should be. Some low-level and middle-level ones are also very interesting.

The case has been solved. The author must like jjxx very much. He can write this kind of shit like 2.5 Chapters normally. I really think you haven't read the episode. I've seen most of the episodes of this type of article.

Why are so many people in this chapter full of malice towards the Bone King? I'm curious as to where this malice came from.

Do you like Conan so much? , When Conan is nearby, others will be powerless. What the hell is this setting?

It was well written and I read it in one sitting. The characters appearing throughout the play are portrayed in detail. I am satisfied with Lelouch's royal temperament, Jonuchito's straightforwardness and bravery, and other characters. This is the best two-dimensional novel I have ever seen. The only flaw is that Warrior of Light's Guang Dai, as a relatively niche game character, has too many pictures and too strong skills, leaving people untouched and confused. I don't know who he is, and even if I knew, I wouldn't feel anything. I hope there won't be such niche characters in the next Holy Grail War. After all, not all of your readers like to play games. Hope you understand. I rarely watch anime, but I have heard of anime such as Lelouch and Yu-Gi-Oh! Puella Magi Madoka, and I still feel a little bit involved in them. I hope that more famous heroic spirits will appear in the next Holy Grail War, such as the magician 2.5 Satoru from the Spell Return War, the swordsman Hawkeye from the Shichibukai, the Demon King from Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, etc.

The Conan volume is so boring that I just skip it. When will it end?

First, InuYasha's worldview itself is not bad in terms of combat power. The original Bakuzan performed a lot. Inuyasha, Sesshomaru and Naraku are all Bakugo-level characters. However, the strength of the servants this time is at best equal to or even inferior to the master. Shana's strength in the late Bakuzan and early stages There are many explosions in the street. Even if the red pupils are opened to the maximum, they can destroy the city the most. Lu Liang is good, Guimai can also link monsters. As for Chukulin and Muzan, it is just a matter of pure make-up. However, if the strength of the servant and the master is too close, many things will be difficult to write and there will be no drama. Secondly, Inuyasha is not popular enough. Many people do not understand the big setting, lack a sense of immersion in reading, and even do not fully recognize the master. Third, Inuyasha itself is a love-centered work, and the relationship between the characters is really not suitable for a "Holy Grail War"-style character story I think there are three points that should be taken into consideration when choosing a map: 1. Popularity, it must have enough popularity and dissemination, such as migrant comics, such as the recently popular Spells of the Dead and Demon Slayer. Blade, or even Dragon Tribe, a frequent fan of the Qidian fandom, is fine 2. The narrative of the main work should be serious, and the character conflicts are not deep enough to make it difficult to fight 3. The main work cannot be a completely protagonist-centered work (such as the rebellious Lelouch, although there are many profound characters, but they all revolve around Lelouch). Such a work cannot support the master of the seven Dragon Balls.

Inuyasha really can't stand it, now he can chase him!

Isn't this saber game too flattering about the country's fate this time? Sauron's power is no match for Yuanyi? ? ? Not to mention the skills that can make you win a thousand pieces of gold with four ounces, there are also techniques that can break through ten guilds with one effort. Others rely on their Noble Phantasms to make waves, but Zoro relies solely on his strength to create sword energy. How can he be no match? I am Suofu

Why do some people always want the villain to win?

Normal people can't understand the books that are heavily read in the second dimension. They're messy.

I stopped reading the second volume after reading part of it. I basically read through the table of contents after that. I can only say it was too confusing.

In order to understand the second volume, I finished reading InuYasha 🙂. I have to say that I understood InuYasha's story line. When I read the second volume, my perception really improved. Even the descriptions that were confusing at first can be directly visualized in my mind.

After watching the scene where Slime was inexplicably killed by the Bone King, I didn't want to read it anymore It's not that I can't accept that Slime was killed by the Bone King It's that there was no battle process and his death was inexplicable Why not write about the battle process? Is it because the author couldn't imagine how the Bone King killed the slime? So you can't beat the opponent directly by skipping the official one, right? It's not the Bone King who's awesome, but you, the author.