Siheyuan: Starting Out as a Refugee

This author has written two books in a row. What else is there to read? The writing style is as good as kindergarten. The timeline is not clear and the plot line is not good. I don't know how the editor approved his outline.

Do you know why there is a genre called Siheyuan? It's because it's real and the era is too recent. Writing that is not in line with the era will only cause trouble.

I don't understand anything, so I just write random things. At any rate, at least have a general understanding of the social background, humanities, and life of the 1960s before writing about it.

The sentence doesn't make sense at all. Go to the factory and tighten the screws!

It's outrageous. Each chapter was more poisonous than the last. After reading the first three chapters, I chose to lose my mind. But after reading Chapter 20 like this, I still can't stand it. It's so outrageous, so ridiculous.

In this era, you need a ticket to buy things, right? Damn, did you buy so many used tickets?

When I heard Chapter 22, it was okay. It was well written. It wasn't very good at catching mice at the beginning, but it became fun once I entered the courtyard. Although catching fish and changing furniture, I didn't sleep all night, and I was hungry until 3pm the next day, freezing to death in the winter. However, I have a high resistance, and noble listeners will automatically ignore the unreasonable parts. Generally speaking, it's quite fun to listen to these people's grievances, hatreds, partings, intrigues, petulances, anus on top of anus.

Stop writing it, it really doesn't look good. Mo pulled his butt and gave it to a big fish, thinking that he is a thief. Then you write Qin Huairu earlier, how disgusting it is, come in and screw it.

I quit until Chapter 13. The most important thing about a period novel is the description of some aspects of life. There can be loopholes, but not too many. The bill system has been implemented in the 1960s. Basically, you need to pay for everything. The protagonist in the book has various problems with buying things without mentioning the bills. It is simply poisonous. There is still food to buy a bunch of fine grains, which is even more poisonous. It's a year of food shortage! ! ! Not to mention that the protagonist came here to escape famine, so he probably didn't even get the food supply! ! ! Too many questions, flashed!

People who don't count bills when buying things are writing in the 1960s. Don't forget the bill era.