Rebirth 07: Starting from Primary School Students and Adding Points

Hope to see Nangong Boy. The author's remarks are so heartfelt that I want to say a few words. I started reading online articles in 2008, and it's been more than ten years since this year. The earliest online articles did not have so many rules and regulations. It can be said that they grew wildly. The author wrote whatever he wanted to write, wherever he thought. This also led to a series of accidents, such as describing the heroine too well, but the author came in and took it away. I think this should be able to explain some readers' demand for formulaic writing. Similar to the current "men don't play" and "women don't play" movements, the essence is that they are disgusting and fearful. As long as you can write a good story, these people will be attracted back. Let's talk about your thoughts after reading this book as of the second volume. Freedom, this is the most intuitive feeling this book gives me. Li Yan is a free person. For him, his interest is a guide and guides the direction of progress. The system (talent) supports his direction of progress and also saves him from the trouble of being too ambitious and too weak. The steps forward have nothing to do with obstacles. When encountering a river, we must cross it, and when encountering a mountain, we must climb over it. If he encounters a wild beast, he will fight, and he will win anyway. Finally, I have deleted, deleted and revised this long review. I hope this book can become a real Nangong boy. I wish you all a happy life. Goodbye.

It's good to read, and the best thing is that you can understand the charm of some words. After reading too much, imagination is king, which is rare. But the golden finger is too complex, a bit convoluted, and slow to enter. If the author takes over, the focus is entirely on studying the golden finger, and the reaction will be half a beat slower.

The author's writing is very touching, giving people the feeling of being in high school after running and doing exercises, and the first class is math class, which makes you feel dizzy and drowsy. I want to grasp the knowledge points, but there is nothing I can do. I can only escape to sleep and dream, dreaming that my life is like cheating, as if I can do anything, like the fat boy's body becomes like a model, the arrears brain is replaced by Einstein's, Picasso and Leonardo da Vinci have become my shadow. Haha, it's like a dream comes into reality, giving people a feeling of being able to easily catch the cool moments. Really, perhaps the biggest regret in youth is the feeling of powerlessness, but reading the author's novels gives us an anchor to use the power of fantasy to make up for those regrets and look forward to the future. The author's writing is really good now, and it can give us a very real feeling. If reality is really a superhuman genius, just like the protagonist in the author's works. Come on, I leave my dream to you.

I don't even know what you want to express. The government respects you and you can refuse, but you can't refuse and are even afraid of another capitalist or some kind of black boss who doesn't know who is half black and half white. What do you want to express? What do you want to express? How could such a person be able to reach such a bright surface? Unbelievable writing method

The writing is very good. It's quite interesting to be a reborn elementary school student. Nowadays, the streets in the city are full of people falling in love.

Don't you really understand readers? Your senses were fine before, but now you are writing and painting, falling in love, building mobile phones, competing in computer games, and now playing basketball. The key is all about a hammer in one place and a hammer in another. Before one is finished, another one comes. The most important thing is, does everyone like those plots? For those of you who don't like it at all, write less. From the beginning, you're going to be a top student + a primary school student. If you do this, it's neither like a top scholar's ​​article nor an urban article. Don't tell me that your outline is just like this. This book has fewer poisonous points, and the early stage is also very exciting, but the more you write, the more broad and broad you write, but it's all very shallow! It seems that the back is getting more and more watery! You have no outline at all, right?

A simple summary is that the author's upper limit is the protagonist's upper limit. According to normal development, when encountering this situation, Li Yan, who is very smart in terms of settings, did not do anything that he should have done. The author simply added a clown character for the subsequent plot. As a result, the protagonist also turned into a clown. When faced with such a situation that threatened his personal safety and threatened his weakness, he didn't think of any safe way. He didn't find all his contacts for help, and he didn't even ask Wei Yili clearly. Later, I added a forced explanation to Wei Shi showing his side as an investor, and then said that he would not pay back the money. Although it barely makes sense, I think it is better to delete it and rewrite it. As for the plot of going to the meeting with a knife, I can only say that it is unexpected, really

I gave you a reward for talking about it. Generally speaking, in my opinion, your cheating is not as good as real people, let alone how to change the world. Geniuses and monsters are everywhere. Your system inexplicably adds a stage limit. I can't think of why you do this. Do you think there are monsters in reality who finish their undergraduate studies at the age of fifteen? The mysteries of the human brain are endless. Even when you are young, you can hold endless knowledge. It is just that your understanding and memory are not in place.

Author, have you ever considered that it is inappropriate and impolite to draw a painting based on a friend and then send it to auction without asking her opinion? Not to mention girls, even boys, this behavior is very inappropriate and offensive. After completing a painting based on her, shouldn't the first thing you do is ask her for her opinion? Can it be circulated? They are friends, not strangers, and should have the minimum respect. This behavior is disrespectful.

Everything I watched before was quite enjoyable, but the basketball game was really bad. I almost got slapped in the face, and I was trying to comfort myself, but there was no result. I went back to the dormitory and shrank my head.

I was relieved to see that no one liked the basketball plot. I always pre-order the basketball plot. The main reason is that it's too fake. Basketball is a team game. I can accept winning a few games, but I can't accept being ranked first in the school. My suggestion is to delete this part of the plot.

The inexplicable evil forces replaced AI to write the book?

What is your common sense, author? One hundred thousand can be put in an envelope? And kick it in your pants pocket? What trouser pocket and what envelope? So awesome?

Author, I suggest you add a paragraph directly before the time travel in the first chapter: A strange voice appeared in Li Yan's mind, "If your memory is sealed and you can time travel to be a child, would you be willing?" (Similar to this) Then the poisonous point in your first chapter will no longer exist. Don't underestimate this sentence. Just like you picked up one million and lost 999,000, and you picked up a thousand dollars directly. Although both of them got a thousand dollars for free, there is still a big gap between them. The former must be depressed, and the latter must be happy. In the first chapter, if before time travel, it was described that sealing up memories can be used as a price to travel back to childhood, many people would still be willing. At first, I thought that I could travel back to my childhood for free, and then I told you to seal up my memory. That was still very depressing.

I was feeding myself to death, and I was very tough on the official department. Then a black businessman came out who was somehow more powerful than the officials. I was trembling with fear. This is because everything the official did was upright, and the black businessman would be ruthless to death if he tried to do something dirty. Afraid of being like this, I still don't approach the official, and I feel arrogant that as long as I grow up, I won't be afraid of this black businessman... This plot is too strange and illogical. I originally wanted to skip this plot, but the author couldn't write it anymore...

I like this kind of author, he doesn't waste our time at all. I traveled through time, but my memory was cleared hahaha 6

It's good-looking, but its shortcomings are also obvious. The economic conditions have not improved, and it is very toxic and refuses to give away girls. If you don't like it, don't flirt with it, and there is less description.

There are very few urban novels that I can read with peace of mind.

I don't know if the author knows that the strongest group of geniuses in key junior high schools have already studied high school and even completed high school content. Take mathematics as an example. We used to be the top student in the advanced mathematics class in junior high school, and he was a self-taught advanced math student in junior high school 😅. This kind of genius is usually put into a joint training program by the university after graduating from junior high school, or is specially recruited. The level of knowledge you write now can be higher. Mathematics, physics and chemistry are purely based on talent and are unreasonable.

It was amazing before I became a disciple, but as the network of various big bosses developed and all kinds of people were sophisticated, I couldn't book it anymore. It made me very irritated, and I felt like I felt disgusted with my colleagues and bosses at work!

Thank you to all the book friends who clicked on this book. Before reading the book, you are welcome to read some of the author's inner thoughts. As a newbie who is not familiar with the starting point recommendation mechanism, first of all, I am very grateful to all the book friends who have written chapter reviews, recommendations, and collections for this book. The names of several big guys who have provided sufficient support in the early stage are too long. I will thank the "writer's words" in the chapters. Let me give you a vaccination first. There is no task guidance in the system of this book. The protagonist uses the mind of a social animal to travel through himself in elementary school. He cannot use the memory of his past life to make a fortune through the information gap, so it is more realistic and more logical. How to develop the system and re-enter the campus life with the synchronously unlocked past life memories is the main focus of the early and middle stages of this book. This book has only one female protagonist, and she appears a little late. She will have different stages of roles with other female characters. I tried to write it as realistically, delicately and not greasyly as possible. After reaching high school, driven by various plots, the system has achieved a breakthrough, and the protagonist will move towards a new life. The book will break away from the campus atmosphere in the middle of the book. The protagonist changes his identity from an extremely outstanding student and begins to reach the top of mankind. This book essentially tells the story of a good kid with some talent, who becomes better step by step with the support of the system, until he changes the whole world. The protagonist Li Yan is a good student, so some of the cool points focus on the "amazingly outstanding performance". He likes to show off, and he also likes to slap people in the face with his strength, but he will not show off in a social style like fighting and beating people. I actually like to watch pretentious stories about slaps in the face, revenge, and playboy-style pretentiousness. I also like to watch stories about Goldfinger's invincibility and cheating throughout the whole show, but I think there are also people who like to read more realistic, step-by-step stories about exploring the use of Goldfinger, and stories about walking through life. All in all, it's relatively slow. But don't worry, it's still an enjoyable story. The protagonist has a temper. In elementary school, children can be tolerated making mistakes, but in junior high school, it focuses on one lesson. The first pot of gold will not be delayed just because of the campus atmosphere. It is difficult to make progress without money. Doing some bad things appropriately will not affect his being a good person. Because the protagonist will develop many skills, it will inevitably involve some areas that I am not very good at. My understanding is limited, so I can only write vaguely. If there are any mistakes, please correct me. Dear book friends, this may be a story that is different from the popular rebirth novels at the moment. The above has basically explained the possible "poisonous points" clearly. As the saying goes, it is difficult to agree with everyone. I will listen to everyone's opinions and modify it on the established route. I must also stick to myself when I deviate from the main line. I will be grateful for reasonable opinions, and I will delete negative comments about emotional output. Please understand. No matter what the final result of this book is, I will insist on finishing it. Maybe you may sometimes feel that the pace is not fast enough, but believe me, this book has been attached with an outline of the entire five volumes when it was submitted. It will not be a book that rushes through the beginning and then becomes a eunuch. Li Yan's life from elementary school, junior high school, high school, university, to entering the society, and even later becoming an all-powerful person in the society and standing on the top of mankind will not be written in a set of templates until the end. I have arranged completely different themes and story focuses for each stage. Even for several competitions at the elementary school stage and junior high school stage, I have arranged different focuses and contradictions. There is still a lot of room for development in the application of the system. I have also left some foreshadowings in the previous article, which I will recycle. By the junior high school stage, the role of the Internet will greatly increase. At that time, I will insert the familiar IDs that support this book into the plots that require online names. I hope that after dinner, this little book can bring you some rest, recall some precious past, or ignite some yearning and passion. In the next year, we will make friends through books and move forward together!

It looks good at the front, but I obviously feel anxious at the back. It can be seen that it is a bit reborn, and there is a trace of who is still in love. It is not wrong to say that it is unfinished. Many lines are not explained clearly, and some very cool points are not written. For example, the painting skills are not used in the script, and the water is real water. Some pages can be reduced, and then describe some other extracurricular fun points, and it is too anxious. , I haven't seen the study committee member in the early stage, and the emotional line with the heroine is also very average. I didn't remember the name of the heroine at the end. The author probably doesn't know how to write emotional lines. There is a super poisonous point in the middle, that is, the one named Hou. I really don't understand the meaning of the author adding this link, and there is no revenge. To be honest, the first part is 70% fairy grass, and the second part is all garbage.

To be honest, the first and middle stages were pretty good. I've basically finished reading it, maybe 80% of it. I abandoned the book when Hou Xiaofeng came out, and the character design collapsed, and the protagonist became a child with a paper account. Moreover, the way this person appears is wrong. As long as you show a top red or something related, I can still watch it. But if there is an obvious black one, I really can't stand it. Even if it is red to black, there is a certain limit, and it is not red yet. The underlying logic of this person who writes about many talents is unjustifiable. The boss at this stage is inappropriate. Then I looked at the table of contents. . I chose to give up on life sciences and medicine. It's obviously an ending for the sake of the ending, so I won't watch it because I didn't spend any money anyway. Just follow normal logic. It should also be the technology city and then space after the end of mobile phones. It is only reasonable to intersperse life sciences. These are two paths. Sports have come to an end, and this is extraordinary. I can only talk about technology, which is mainstream after all. Whether it is nuclear fusion, artificial intelligence, science and technology cities, and space are all branches. . In life sciences, I can only write about it casually. If I write too much, I can't grasp it. . I forgot when the book was finished, so don't worry about my book review, after all, the time period is different. .

When will it be available? If there are too few, I can only read other books to support you. Can't I put a book with 180 chapters on the shelf? Don't let me look down on you! ! ! You can just update at this pace now. As long as it's on the shelves and the updates are hot, all my tickets are yours.

Hehe, this is all in Changdu. It's a pity that I set the 300 chapters before I ran away, but I only ran away after more than 400 chapters. I knew that I could let myself go as I wrote.

Highly recommended~ The beginning is a bit like an ancient novel, the protagonist has a golden finger but is not too dependent on it! ! It's fun to watch and not embarrassing! ! ! Highly recommended~

You and I will always think about going back to our childhood. Maybe there will be a lot less regrets. There will be too many pretentious moments. My heart is surging. Maybe you and I are struggling in life. Support the author

There are not many novels that can make me, a bookworm of more than ten years, stay up late to read. The author's writing is really good, and the ending is so interesting. Having said that, after reading novels for so many years, I still feel uncomfortable that I can't write a novel.

The King of the Daughter Kingdom: Holy Monk, am I beautiful?

I thought I was going to write about a wedding, but I didn't. There was no explanation about the system in the end.