Darkmoon Lord: Start by Summoning Creatures from All Worlds

Due to the needs of the plot in the first and second volumes, the summoned creatures are more likely to be retainers and guards. Starting from the reconstruction of the port in the third volume, deep-sea race creatures will appear. There will be non-human creatures resident in the port, and there will also be humanoid creatures sent out by the protagonist to be pirates. In the future, there will be evil spirits, monsters and other creatures. In my current outline setting, I can only think of six or seven for the time being. If you have good ideas, you can bring them up, or you can create your own. If there are suitable creatures, I will use them later.

The three-chapter plot is divided into 30 chapters. It's so long-winded that it's like watching a modern TV series. I can't stand it anymore. Come on, author.

The plot of the battle is written in too much detail. It's all nonsense. As the protagonist of the story, that battle will not be won. It feels a bit like an early online novel, with one fight having several chapters. You might as well write about the daily life of the protagonist.

The author summons creatures, and then writes less original works and more villains from film and television dramas, such as summoning Megatron (super alchemical weapon), Pain, Majin Buu, etc.

Is the protagonist here extraordinary and has a lifespan limit? If not, it's a bit ridiculous. One count has lost too much. It's a bit ridiculous to rely solely on neighbors' small tricks to score points in less than 10 years.

I'm thinking about recruiting Uncle Ba, giving him a career as a doctor, and asking Uncle Ba to teach you how to be a good person.

Rotten Heart and Injustice

Passive talents

You shouldn't start with a count. In this case, the protagonist is probably a down-and-out baron. Any mercenary group behind him can crush him...

Let's make do🥺

Angel

What is this creature of yours? I thought it was a baby novel. It's not cute at all.

I'm really speechless at the beginning. I feel like it's purely a medicine girl setting. Only by taking medicine can you level up. It's all due to lack of resources. It's simply off the mark. Why call it a fantasy world? Let's just say it's a world of capital. It can be classified as a modern city.

Are there any big creatures being summoned? Big ones are good, giant ones are powerful.

The writing is pretty good, and I'm good at illustrating it, so keep up the good work

Bankai, why are summons basically from the League of Legends?

I forgot about the system after reading it. Can anyone tell me what the requirements are for the system to summon new people?

It's starting to feel a bit watery, like... Tasteless

I originally told you to chase slowly, but then, are you a eunuch?

It feels okay. Update soon 🔨

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