Football: Star Template System

Is it Banana Man? If so, I won't watch it. I just want to watch Chinese players abuse their sticks and trample their lives.

Come on, if you don't write about the national football team, just follow it

After reading the descriptions of several players, is this a base article? !

Okay, bye bye to the talking system.

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I don't know if the author has read his own book from the beginning. I really can't read it anymore and would like to make some suggestions. The writing style is too stiff and embarrassing to read. To use an analogy, there are only lines and no pictures in the hot-blooded comics. Do you understand what this means?

To be honest, the pace is too slow. Football, without passionate words, what can you write? To be honest, I really don't see it. It's just the same old routine of starting the game and then slowly upgrading, but you can write with a little passion. What's the point of being plain? Who can watch this? The protagonist has no personality and no character. Go and raise pigs.

If the author's writing style is correct, he should have been writing basic articles before.

The writing is not good, it's very dramatic, and it's a serious third-party God's perspective. However, there are very few football texts, and even fewer that don't have any major problems, so just give it a try.

The author's writing style is quite ancient, and it feels like writing in junior high school.

Entered the national football team? If you don't want to watch the national football team, you don't have to watch it.

. . . . Why is the main character a baby? Baby to the gym? What to practice? Isn't it good to go home and nurse? Chapter 2 made me laugh. . . High EQ means a promising future. Low EQ means you are just a piece of shit now . . . The protagonist's reaction speed is greatly accelerated, his strength is improved, and his experience is increased. This is only one percent of his strength. . . The protagonist's data in the following are all a little above 60. In other words, without this wave of bonuses, the protagonist's value is between 40-50, because the early stage is the best to improve, as is any kind of sport. . The protagonist is 20 years old and works out very hard every day? Uh-huh-uh-huh-uh-uh, if this doesn't eliminate you, who will?

Does the author care about Lin Qian? The writing is full of Lin's taste.

Templates are the most enjoyable thing to use as a coach.

The author is very helpless. Angry youths who join the national football team won't watch it, and moral bitches who don't join the national football team won't watch it.

This writing style is too bitter and hateful, completely unsuitable for football that requires passion.

This writing style feels a bit like a web game

The protagonist is Chinese, not a banana man, good review! But it is not divided into paragraphs. Each sentence is a densely packed paragraph. The viewing experience is extremely poor and the review is negative.

A few hundred words of description of the character's appearance, but he's not the protagonist, he's still a man! Unheard of!

Before I know it, the time has come for it to be released on the shelves. I have been reading your book reviews. To be honest, this book is not well written, but I still want to finish writing the first novel in my life and give this story an ending. Thank you all. As for the paid VIP, it will be added for free after the book is completed. If you are interested, you can wait and read it after it is completed.

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Is the author a foreigner? Just say it so I can support you!

When I first started writing your book, I was quite hopeful. It felt like a young man was full of love for middle school, and then slowly rose up, and then developed little by little. Such an arduous process, he is not proud and very humble, but at the same time I found a very big problem in your writing grammar is that you write this kind of novel as a prose poem, always being lyrical or lyrical, lyrical, lyrical, lyrical. Still willing to sing a high note. Later I saw that when you wrote about the national team, you wrote about the protagonist like a licking dog, about Gao Hongbo, your love for the country, and all kinds of messy things. It's fine to write about the national team, but obviously you made the protagonist as despicable as a licking dog. Come on. Well, bye bye then, it really doesn't look like a book written by a normal person.