The Martial Arts of Longevity Begins with the Scribe

You said that literature is valued over martial arts and martial arts are prohibited. After reading a few chapters, people are everywhere doing random things with the help of force. I don't see the emphasis on literature or the role of literature. The setting emphasizes text and prohibits force. The plot text has no effect at all, and force is king. , And my thinking, based on the level of the working people who eat bran-thick vegetables in your family, the illiteracy rate at the bottom of the world is 99%. You can copy books and earn one or twenty taels. This is probably a lot of income. Why are you still eating bran-thickness vegetables? , Besides, the retarded second generation is trying to trick your sister-in-law inexplicably, which is speechless. You eat chaffy vegetables every day, and you still have to support your family. Your sister-in-law is afraid that she will be skinny, with a yellow complexion and a full face. He is a black-skinned man with a weathered face and thick calluses on his hands. The brain-dead second generation has really good eyesight. He forces the plot to make people speechless. Just to highlight his badness? Baffling. In the village, hundreds of people fight for water and land, with countless deaths and injuries. In ancient times, those who dared to settle outside the city had the largest clan. If they could survive, they would endure it. If they couldn't survive, millions of refugees would cross the border. You can't survive with taxes, but you can double it without being beaten to death In short. Too many flaws

The first chapter says that practicing the Secret of Immortality is almost equivalent to immortality, and then in the second chapter it becomes a lifespan that is only several times longer than that of a normal person. In the second chapter, it is said that martial arts are banned by the imperial court. From the third chapter, except for the protagonist and his family, all the cats and dogs know martial arts.        ，，，？

After reading about thirty chapters, I really have no desire to continue reading. First, the so-called emphasis on literature over martial arts means that scholars can be bullied by gangsters? Then the scholar ran out to hunt. Second, there is the price issue. The purchasing power of silver is too low. You can earn more than ten taels or dozens of taels a month, but you are still eating glutinous rice? Pay 20 taels of tax for half a year, and then randomly increase the price of your home by 40 taels? Don't regard money as money at all? Third, the author is too high-minded and low-key. The county magistrate is a son of a big family, the Lu family has a big background, and then he just lives in a small county town? Fourth, the funniest thing is the Yuanyang Sect, which is at least a large sect, and most of them are members of the Deng family. The Deng family who came out is not ordinary, and then he is just an old servant... This identity was suddenly lost. Fifth, the most incomprehensible thing is that after the blood exchange, the Martial Saint will become? The first six realms are equivalent to physical training. After physical training, you have not made much progress in cultivation and you have become a martial saint? The Martial Saint is too worthless. There are too many shortcomings. The biggest problem is that you set it up as a tall thing, but when you write it, it shows that you are mediocre at the bottom. This sense of gap is unacceptable.

I didn't expect that I would teach you the longevity skills casually when I don't have much strength.

Like most! Despise! Plug-in! And I know everyone likes to watch cheats! After writing so much about plug-ins, I almost didn't even mention them! ! ! No plug-ins! There is no sense of immersion! I am as awesome as the protagonist! What else am I reading?

The world has banned martial arts for 30 years. Anyone who discusses martial arts in private can be arrested and imprisoned, and martial arts schools and sects are extinct. Then immediately there came a gang member who was Lianpi, and a brother who was Yijin. What is this forbidden?

Taiping, what did you learn from me? Doesn't match

After reading Chapter 26, I really can't stand it anymore. The plot is blunt. I know that someone is thinking about my wife, but I still want to take her out. Moreover, the social background design is also very inconsistent. Anyway, looking at others makes me feel unhappy.

Brother, you are fine in other aspects, but there are too many holes in some details. First of all, the biggest loophole is currency. For your brother's family and your family of four, the annual tax is 20 taels of silver, a bunch of candied haws is 5 taels, a pound of fish is 25 taels, and three cotton coats are 8 taels of silver. Secondly: You often say that the protagonist in your article eats wild vegetable pancakes, which are very bitter and unpalatable. But for three months, the protagonist basically has an income of 15 taels of silver per month. He does not buy food. He buys fish a few times and often eats wild vegetable pancakes. Thirdly, when it comes to martial arts training, Tian Tian said that he was bullied by Wang Mazi, who was also in the realm of skin training. However, later his brother came to him and said that there were hundreds of people in the village who were in the realm of skin training. The protagonist was able to train in the skin training realm in 10 days. It felt like he could easily achieve the realm of skin training. Finally, the protagonist can copy the book to get the skills, but what he gets are the skills instead of the fighting skills. He has to spend money to buy the worst kind of fighting skills. Moreover, the skills are so awesome, such as the Immortality Technique and the Heavenly Dragon Technique. As a result, after the protagonist trains to the next level, he wants to break through to the next level and buys the skills again. Let me go, what is the use of the skills you got by copying the book?

The first thing I want to complain about is that the imperial court banned martial arts from the very beginning. It gave such a broad background, as if to show that practicing martial arts is difficult. But in the end, the hunters and gangsters around are all martial artists. Where is the ban? Then he kept saying that he wanted to copy books to become stronger and prepare to participate in the imperial examination, but he never saw how to study classics and articles. He practiced martial arts every day and showed that he was a martial arts genius. You can understand the essence of the book just by copying it, so you don't need to study. What follows is the unparalleled imperial examination. Before, you were a scholar, but as soon as you take the exam, your literary talent is astonishing. When the saint is alive, all the other supporting characters are reduced to ruthless narration machines, and they directly become the number one scholar. The plot can no longer be watched at this point. I would like to ask the author to enhance his understanding and upgrade his martial arts. Why don't you practice martial arts? You must take the imperial examination. You don't go to sects, the army, or the palace. You must take the imperial examination. What role can the imperial examination play in this world where great power belongs to itself? You didn't write, you didn't write about the plot of the imperial examination, how to study, how to communicate, how to take the exam, you didn't write anything. Just a scholar who took the exam and directly became the number one scholar. He always emphasized that he wanted to be unknown and powerful, and didn't want to be too noticed. As a result, he was already a celebrity when he was in the county. Everyone knew about it. A genius, going to the imperial examination is even more unbelievable and powerful at the same time. Tune yourself to be steady, be careful, and then directly come to a teenage civil and military champion. I really don't know how the author conceived the plot. It makes people's heads hurt If you want to write about the imperial examination, you can read books like Confucianism and Taoism, The Great Official, and learn from it. You don't have to write about the imperial examination if you don't know how to write. There are so many novels about martial arts, and the growth path is very mature, Orion/ Farmers/fishermen - martial arts halls/schools/yamen - imperial court/army/sects - a larger map, can't we learn from it? The background settings are mostly in the last years of the dynasty, when the people were in dire straits, alien invasions, civil rebellions, etc. As a result, the author came to ban martial arts in the court, but the setting was not clearly written, so he dug a hole and buried himself. I don't know if organizations like the White Lotus will appear later in the novel. Forgive me, I can't stand it anymore after seeing The Number One Scholar in the Imperial Examination I sincerely hope that the author's novel will have a clear and clear world view, and a narrative that can withstand logical scrutiny. After reading many novels, I think the routine is not afraid of old age. The key lies in rigorous logic, reasonable narrative, not to mention excellent writing style, as long as it is not bad, it can be called a good novel

Withdrawn, I have learned all the martial arts, and I have to go to the martial arts school to buy them again. The writing is so good.

This is fucking interesting writing, emphasizing on literature but banning martial arts. The status of a scholar is higher than that of a warrior. If you are a scholar, anyone can bully you. Tell me what is the reason why a scholar has a higher status?

I'm speechless. I don't know what the author is thinking. His family doesn't have enough to eat, but he still shows kindness all day long.

After seeing the last words of the Shennongs who were poisoned to death, I decided to take a closer look to see what they were.

National martial arts ban TM There are hundreds of skin trainers in a novice village

It doesn't make any sense. If you don't cheat, your family will be fine for decades. If you cheat, your family will be in trouble every day. Why don't you write it so retarded?

The writing is the same as SB. I feel suffocated when I look at it. I have a big brother who is always holding me back. I have a sister-in-law who often sends me out if she says no.

You can teach fighting skills, and the core ones, such as longevity, can be taught to family members and close relatives. Teaching it to other people is too risky and they need healing. You can completely copy medical books and the like. The longevity technique is taught everywhere, so I will definitely give up, and I estimate that many people will give up too.

Can't you buy rice or meat if you have money? Why do I keep eating rice cakes and then there are no dishes 😅😥

The sense of inconsistency is obvious. The protagonist's character is too exaggerated and the plot cannot be created.

No, I copied 120,000 words, buddy. I wrote calligraphy with a brush. I collected ten taels of silver, and then bought three cotton clothes for 8 taels. There are so many flaws, I don't know where to start.

The women that rich men look for are all quite beautiful, how could they give birth to something like this? The author deliberately wrote such an ugly villain.

It feels good. Come on, author!

Great book, all set! I have been reading books for half a year, and I can be considered an old bookworm. I think the plot of this book is novel, and the characters in the book are all thousand-year-old with IQs. The characters are very rich, the economic system does not collapse, the protagonist improves quickly, and the force value does not collapse. Much better looking than Lord of Mysteries and Sun God. Why Mo Yan, Chen Zhongshi, lags far behind the author in terms of writing style, but if the author insists, he will definitely become a god.

Why are all the martial arts novels about fighting and killing? The protagonist should be low-key and have no trouble. You can hide whatever martial arts you have learned. If someone offends you, you can assassinate him. Why should you accept a reward? If you are not famous, who will trouble you?

You wrote that some words and words were used incorrectly in the later chapters, which are very different from the previous chapters.

What are you doing? I thought I could master internal skills by copying books, but it turns out it was taught by aborigines?