Their Love Stories Seem a Little Off

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I don't know why the author keeps emphasizing his cigarettes, why he doesn't think that the protagonist is very unique and handsome when written like this?

It is originally a harem novel. If one of the female characters is not accepted, then don't use too much pen and ink to describe it. I understand that the author wants to establish the characters in the book, but it is obviously too strong. In this case, why not add it? Besides, no matter how well written Pan Yu San Jia is, the age gap is here. As a harem drama, there must at least be a heroine of a similar age, right? Some people say that Muzi was too poisoned when they broke up, but to be honest, the heroine made such a choice precisely because of the influence of the hero. Although it sounds a bit convoluted, that's the reason. And there is no need to think about it. The main influence of Muzi going to the United States is the male protagonist. If Muzi succeeds, she will definitely come back to find the male protagonist. I have said so much, mainly because I didn't join the group, so I wanted to vent in the comment area. Everyone expresses their opinion, this is just my personal opinion, discuss rationally, please don't criticize

The writing is okay, and the male protagonist's character is also good, but I can't stand the constant scenes of smoking. You can try to reduce the smoking scenes.

The three little ones are well written, and each one of them is so cute. But it's really hard to evaluate Muzi. I can only say that I understand her role but don't like it. Now my impression of this protagonist is getting worse and worse. He doesn't look like a scumbag, he doesn't look like a scumbag, he doesn't look like a scumbag, he doesn't look like a pure guy, he even feels so vulgar haha, one operation made me laugh out loud BYD. Run, see you by chance

The male protagonist graduated from Kyoto University and worked as a teacher in Tokyo, the most prosperous city in Japan, and ended up earning 300,000 yen a month. What is this concept? It is half less than the per capita income of Japanese teachers! The author wanted to portray the melancholy and literary youth of the male protagonist, but what I saw was the kind of deja vu of smoking two cigarettes to pretend to be mature. I haven't seen it on the shelves yet, but it has been poisoned, so I'll give it a try.

If the male protagonist has such musical talent, he will not be able to survive in Tokyo and will he return to his hometown to open a cafe? Okay, even if you have a shadow on music due to the death of your master and never touch music, but then you say that you have an orphanage to support, and you plan to give all your three years of salary as a teacher to the orphanage. If the protagonist is so great, you should go all out to develop in the music industry from the beginning. The money you can earn is countless times higher than that of being a teacher, and you can also help the orphanage in a real sense. Okay, even if the protagonist is naive and doesn't think so much, when the director of the orphanage gets cancer and needs a lot of money for surgery, the protagonist will always wake up at this time and know that he wants to make money, so why waste his time on being a teacher? This can only mean that the protagonist either does not have that deep feelings for the dean (the protagonist's only elder), or he thinks that he can earn more money as a teacher. In other words, the protagonist is actively using his status as a teacher to feed the female students. No matter which one, the protagonist's character is completely destroyed. So I can only say that the author did not think clearly when adding the setting of musical genius. I hope the author can come back to it later.

I have just seen the protagonist become a teacher and kick out more than 30 people in the performance club I feel really depressed after seeing this, because I don't know how the harem mentioned by the author should be realized The three female characters who have appeared in the harem and are scheduled to enter the harem so far have all been written vividly, at least they can establish the impression of the characters. Come But I personally think that the more impressive the characters in harem novels are, the easier it will be to collapse later One is a simple consensus issue, that is, it is difficult for ordinary people to achieve bigamy in the urban context of modern society. It is difficult to break through this common sense, because the foundation laid by the author himself The tone is a bit serious, and it's not a purely cool novel. If it were a purely refreshing novel, I would be embarrassed, but the problem is that it is not a refreshing novel. The second one is the protagonist. As a teacher, I must be aware of the disadvantages of teacher-student love. To be honest, I can also understand that the three female characters will meet such outstanding people as the protagonist when they are young girls. The resulting spring heart is ignorant, but for the protagonist to cross the taboo between teachers and students, he not only has to overcome the pressure of public opinion, but also overcomes his own moral values. It cannot be said that the protagonist, as someone who dares to stand up and expose corruption, will accept teacher-student love, a form of love that is extremely unfair to students, right? Wouldn't this violate the protagonist's own moral values? You can't say that it doesn't matter because the protagonist dares to love and hate, right? Three is between the three female characters... It is difficult to imagine how they can identify with the other two. In this situation where all the female characters know each other and have distinct personalities, it is difficult to imagine a situation in which they would agree with the concept of "let's all be teachers' wives together" in their minds. Because no matter what, as long as the harem is achieved, the protagonist's love will be shared. Can the three female characters accept this? Can you accept the original complete love being divided into one third? If accepted, will the personality and emotions of the female character be eliminated? Seeing now, when I think that the three female characters will be relieved, relieved of their own love, relieved of the incomplete love they receive, relieved of accepting the other two, I feel depressed in my heart. Alas... I am embarrassed to write this because my own personality may not be suitable for reading this kind of article. If the tone set by the author at the beginning was not so serious or the background was not modern, my mood when reading this article might be different. Farewell, if you feel the same way as me after reading this comment, and if you read the rest of the review, please poke me and directly spoil me. I can't stand it anymore, but I want to know how it will develop next. I wish you all a good mood.

Let's mark the point. After chapter 180, I really can't stand it anymore. It feels like cheating. Although Lord Bai Hua is also working hard, the male protagonist is gradually turning into a scumbag.