Their Love Stories Seem a Little Off

The comment section is flooded with messages, so I'm temporarily opening up the 500-fan value limit.

I edited the character image.

I don't know why the author keeps emphasizing that cigarette. Does he think it makes the protagonist seem more unique and cool?

It's a harem novel to begin with. If you don't want to include one of the female characters, then don't spend too much time describing her. I understand that the author wanted to develop the characters in the book, but it's obvious that they went too far. In that case, why not just add her in? Moreover, no matter how well the three main characters are written, the age gap is a given.

The writing is good, and the male lead's character is also nice, but the constant scenes of him smoking are unbearable. Perhaps they could try reducing the amount of smoking in the scenes.

The three little ones are well-written, each one is so cute, but Mu Zi is really hard to evaluate. I can only say I understand her role but I don't like her. My impression of the main character is getting worse and worse; she's neither a scumbag nor a dedicated person nor a pure person, she even seems kind of creepy, haha. Her actions made me laugh so hard. Run, see you again sometime.

The male protagonist, with his musical talent, couldn't make it in Tokyo and had to return to his hometown to open a coffee shop? Okay, even if he developed a phobia of music after his mentor's death and never touched it again, then he later says he has an orphanage to support and plans to donate his entire three-year teaching salary to it.

The male protagonist graduated from Kyoto University and became a teacher in Tokyo, Japan's most bustling metropolis, earning a meager 300,000 yen a month. What does that mean? It's less than half the average income of a teacher in Japan! The author intended to portray the protagonist as melancholic and intellectual, but what I saw was a pretentious image of him smoking a couple of cigarettes and…

So far, we've only seen the protagonist become a teacher and kick out over thirty people from the music department. Seeing this part really made me depressed, because I don't know how the author plans to realize the harem concept. So far, the three female characters who have appeared and are slated to join the harem have all been well-written, at least in terms of establishing their character…

Just to clarify, I really couldn't keep reading after chapter 180. It felt like an affair, even though Bai Hua was putting in some effort. The male lead was gradually turning into a scumbag.