Lu Mingfei and Furina's Whispered Conversation

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Just write a book about how Lu Mingfei helped the Han Dynasty gain the ability of the god Zhao Yun 😅😅 I want to see the characters from the Three Kingdoms game do Goldfinger

But there is one thing to say, the dragon clan's combat power is indeed very close to that of Teyvat, and even the dragon clan after Jiangnan's patch is a little stronger. At least the young and crippled Black King can wash the surface of the earth by instinct. I don't think God will be able to do it. On the level of the Seven Gods below, the thunder movie split open an island, and the young Fenrir was able to explode a city after accumulating power for a period of time. The director of the Thunder movie may not necessarily be at full strength, but Fenrir's young body is definitely not in his prime. In general, Dragon Clan and Genshin Impact were open at 46% before the patch, and 64% after the patch. At least that's pretty much it for now. So, if Lu Mingfei can really become the Black King, Fukalos will not have to die. If Tianli dares to cause trouble, let the perfect old Lu find Tianli solo.

The emotional description in the early stage is very delicate, and it is considered to be a more reasonable transition in the fandom, but the plot advancement is not organized and the rhythm is chaotic. It was really fun to work on it when it was put on the shelves, but it soon fell into the cycle of doing it just for the sake of it. The early advantages no longer existed, it was suspected of hydrology, it had the potential to become a bad kid, and there was a possibility of selling it like a sheep's head.

I don't know if this is considered a poisonous point. Lu Mingfei is fine with Funina, but you, Lu Mingze (the little devil), is paired with Fukalos. I think it's a bit poisonous. From the game point of view, Funina and Fukalos are completely the same person, but in the end... You did this. I can't accept it. Abandoned.

But in terms of the Dragon Clan or the Original God, there is no such thing as cultivation. Bloodline is the priority.

The title I saw on Miyoushe was immediately struck by Chuangfei, so I searched for it out of curiosity. I used to like Dragon Clan, and played Genshin Impact for more than a thousand days. I read a few chapters out of curiosity. The author's previous writing was good, and it was reasonable in the outrageous. It was very imaginative, and the jokes were good. There were some problems in the later period, but it was not bad. I have finished reading it now. The following is where I think I can improve it First of all, the plot develops very fast and lacks details in many places. For example, Lu Mingfei suddenly knew a lot of things about Teyvat, and Fufu also completely understood everything at once, which made me feel like I had jumped? Looking back, it seemed like there wasn't either. Also, the author put his own attitude towards the characters too much, and felt that the character design would be a little different from the original design Secondly, the combat power has increased very quickly. I don't know the time in the book, but it feels like it didn't take long. Lu Mingfei has already directly reached the Dragon King level, which is still relatively strong. He is at the level of Seven Gods alone, and the fusion is dozens of times stronger. This is like going to a cute new world to fight monsters. The early plot cannot be connected at all, so you have to give up. However, if a fanfic is separated from the original work too early, it will reduce the sense of substitution. Genshin Impact's combat power system is very unclear and can only be judged by its expressiveness, but this can easily lead to problems. In fact, the protagonist upgraded too quickly. Before I could step in, you were already at god level? Also, actually traveling through the world is not that difficult to write about. Both of us have traveled through countless worlds, and Keli's mother also travels a lot. It's good to write about two worlds that are far apart In terms of plot, there are many well-written ones that make people's eyes light up. But there is a bit of overlap in the shaping of the characters, and everyone is happy. This is not to say that this is bad, but it is not discernible enough. I read through the comment section, and many people suggested that Lu and Fu's relationship develops too fast. I also think this is the case. After all, the author also said that it is a book of pure love. If you write too fast, you will only be able to give out sweets later, and it is easy to not finish writing. Finally, what makes me feel more uncomfortable is that the author wrote a lot of things based on speculation, such as the purpose of the Ice God to collect the Heart of God. The current version only has some guesses, and the third descendant cannot be directly equated with the Nibelungen. Those who have reached the pinnacle of will should be called transcendents. I don't know if you have done the Narcissus Cross, but Rene has reached this state. As for Dragon Clan, I have only seen the old version before. The old thief changed it later and has not seen it, but I feel that it has the same problem. But this is not to blame the author. Fans who write unfinished stories are like this. They don't know the whole story and can only guess. My suggestion is not to write too high-level things first, and then write them after they are released, or to briefly touch on them, just like the classic Riddler, and then fix the bugs when there is a conclusion. It is best for the author to read more in-game texts. It is easy to make preconceptions based on other people's guesses, especially regarding combat power, so be cautious. There is still a debate in the community about whether Tevarin is considered an elemental dragon. Many people have only watched the main plot or skipped it. There is also the screenwriter Tiantian Riddler, which has led to too many plot arguments. Returning to the combat power, Lu Mingfei upgraded too quickly. Not only did the plot fail to connect, it also caused the other characters in the two games to suddenly become clowns. Teyvatli kicked the executive officer and was as good as the Seven Gods. There are several dragon kings on the earth. Do the other people have any meaning to exist? For example, Caesar, I can't even imagine how to recognize them, or the other Seven Gods. You are so fierce and have black elemental power. Are you going to another country to unify Teyvat, or force Tianli to get up and fight? We can't let Zhongli and Wendy be the younger brother, let alone other characters In fact, to sum up, it's too fast, only a hundred chapters have not been released, it has just been released, the plot and combat rhythm do not need to be too fast I am speaking from my feelings, there may be many things wrong, and there are many things I want to write that I don't know how to express. Most of what I said are the points that I feel uncomfortable with, and there are also many points that are comfortable, but everyone's points are different, so I won't go into details. I hope the author will get better as he writes more. I've finished reading the current update, so I'll save it for the follow-up.

Funina: In addition to the human side, I also have a divine side, but the divine me is another me. Lu Mingfei: Me too, I also have a personality that symbolizes my dragon side. Funina: I have no fighting power at all, but I pretended to be the new Water God. Later, I got the Eye of God and finally had fighting power. Lu Mingfei: I was a weakling at the beginning, but I was designated by the principal as the only S-class. Later, I got over the devilish characteristics of the academy and finally became stronger. Funina: I have a water dragon king named Navilet here. Although he always controls me, he is very kind to me. Lu Mingfei: I have a bunch of senior brothers and sisters here, and they are very good to me. Funina: I'm not exaggerated at all, I'm just pretending. Lu Mingfei: I don't like to talk nonsense, I'm just pretending. Funina: I have endured five hundred years of pressure. Lu Mingfei: I have endured eighteen years of blindness. Funina: I'm lonely. Lu Mingfei: Me too.

To put it bluntly, what qualifications does the so-called Blood Mourning have compared to what Funina has to bear?

Weird, this cp is really evil, the emotional scene is too fast. If you advance the plot and draw in the emotions at the same time, I think it would be better if Lu Mingfei kills Bronze and Fire, Fufu is frightened by the servant and then the relationship heats up. Now it is too fast. I don't know how the author ends it. The emotional scene is about the process of pulling.