Battle Through the Heavens: I, Han Feng, Honor My Master

The author of this article should read 😭

I have been reading the latest chapter, and I feel that the overall feeling is good, but I still need to pay attention to the small details. The protagonist is indeed a bit too good-natured. It is an industry rule for an alchemist to accept three medicinal materials to make medicine for others. It is an old tradition. Yao Chen himself does this, so he will not accept the remaining medicinal materials to highlight the protagonist's high integrity. In reality, there are still Huo Huogui, let alone fantasy.

Scenario background: 1. Han Feng did not show his true face in front of Yao Chen, but Yao Chen had already made a guess. 2. Encountering a powerful enemy, Han Feng was severely injured and forcibly activated the Virtual God Monument. Xingyun Pavilion, Yao Chen's room. Han Feng's figure emerged from the space, and then fell to the ground like a kite with its string broken. His hood was wet, and a small pool of blood gradually smeared on the ground. He was so severely injured that it was even difficult to move for a while. The power that Han Feng used to protect Yao Chen has dissipated, and Yao Chen appears on the floor of his room with a complicated expression. His eyes lightly glanced at the portrait of himself hung by Feng Xian on the wall, and then settled on the hooded man in black lying motionless on the ground. Han Feng was breathing hard, his eyes just fell on the ground, as if he didn't dare to raise his head at all, and Yao Chen just looked at him motionless. After a long time, the soul body moved forward lightly, and a familiar foot appeared in Han Feng's sight as it landed on the ground, followed by another foot, and then half of his body squatting down. Han Feng still lowered his gaze and lay weakly on the ground, while Yao Chen squatted down, stretched out his hand, and slowly reached towards the hood that covered Han Feng's face. Slowly, the hood slipped off, revealing Han Feng's face that was much more mature than when he was a teenager. The palm of the soul body paused slightly, and pressed down on Han Feng's head with some strength. Han Feng's face was a bit pale and stiff, and he closed his eyes when the medicine dust came over him. One second, two seconds, three seconds. Without waiting for the expected attack, Han Feng opened his eyes again. The palm of the soul body stopped above his face, close at hand, but not photographed. Yao Chen's hand changed direction and held up Han Feng's chin, causing his gaze, which had not looked at Yao Chen since he landed, to meet the other's. The pair of eyes that Han Feng was most familiar with, always full of tenderness, were looking at him with a sense of oppression and scrutiny, as if they were looking at an enemy worthy of vigilance. "Teacher..." Han Feng moved his throat and called with a slightly trembling voice.

There are too many original authors, we are here to see the fans

The copywriting is "Three Views of Juzheng" and I thought it was very good when I read it. The portrayal of the protagonist is considered a breath of fresh air in the Dian family. The little fairy doctor who picked up the child was also a very decent master. Suddenly, the two of them kissed and stuck out their tongues. I was reading quickly and didn't pay much attention to the little fairy doctor at this time. Are you an adult yet, but how can you say anything to the girl you have watched since childhood... If you don't get along well or if you are just interested in sex from the beginning, then you will accept it. This is like eating half-eaten and biting off a stone. The author's xp is cultivated by his love of play, right 😅

Very good, come on... The story is very strong, and it is not limited to the world of Wutan City. I look forward to developing more stories The relationship between the characters is handled very well. I look forward to seeing the confrontation between the two Yao Lao! In addition, regarding the heroine, I personally feel that it doesn't matter if you have a harem, solo or indifferent, as long as you don't get too seductive, it will be fine (I have a hard time commenting on some stallion stories)

Why write about Xiao Yan's love for Xun'er? Xun'er is so obvious to the protagonist. If you don't go into more detail, Xiao Yan has to get involved? It took me so long to write and yet I didn't accept any of them. It's almost like a eunuch's article 😒

The author has made too many second creations. The key is that the second creation must be reasonable. The star map obviously conflicts with the original world view, and the style of painting is so distorted that it covers the sky.

It's outrageous. It seems like the outline has been changed many times. It was clearly written before that Dou Emperor was reborn, so why did he not know the soul skills and had to learn the fighting skills again? In addition, the protagonist is a bit too pretentious, and the so-called etiquette becomes a restriction. He says he wants to practice in the world of mortals, but there is no joy, anger, sorrow or joy at all.

Is this too much force? The protagonist is written as an "extreme" good person. A fighting emperor condescends and even says that he wants to visit the Lord of Dou Ling City in person. I don't think anyone with any brains would write such a plot. It's really puzzling… Then That is, women should not forcefully write if they are not good at writing, and then study more how to write Shuangwen. A strong person like you starts with the strength of a fighting emperor, pretends to be cool, and writes how to write. If a woman can't write, don't write. It's good to be alone and handsome.