Illustrations of the Battle of Jambudvipa

15 Years old: Three levels of fighting spirit. 16 years old: 8th stage fighting spirit. Attend a bar mitzvah. 16 and a half years old: Four-star fighter. Entered the Warcraft Mountains (nearly 1 year). Meet the Little Medical Fairy and explore the treasure in the cave to get the Purple Cloud Wings and the Pure Lotus Demon Fire Remnant Picture. Practice the Yanfen Devouring Wave Ruler for more than two months and advance to the level of 6-star fighter. Kill the members of the Wolf Head Mercenary Group and advance to 7 stars. Meet Yunyun (who had been in the Warcraft Mountains for nearly 8 months at this time), win the Purple Fire, and advance to the 9-Star Fighter. Goodbye Little Medical Fairy, Kill the Wolf Head Mercenary Group, Xiaogu has been practicing for more than 2 months. 17 and a half years old: Promoted to Fighting Master and left the Warcraft Mountains. 1. Passed the second-grade alchemist exam and went to Tagore Desert, met the Ice Emperor Hai Bodong and obtained the second fragment of the Pure Lotus Demonic Fire; 2. The brothers met, explored the strange fire, obtained the Green Lotus Earth Core Fire Lotus Seeds, and advanced to the 2-star Fighting Master; 3. Meet the Queen, took away the colorful Sky-Swallowing Python, subdued the Green Lotus Earth Core Fire, refined and devoured it, and promoted to the 4-star Fighting Master. At this time, it was about February three years ago. 4. Participate in the Alchemist Competition, win the championship, and be promoted to the Great Fighting Master. 18 years old: One-star fighting master. 1. After three years of agreement, Nalan Yanran was defeated, the Yunlan Sect fought, and he went home with the queen. 2. Go to the Yunlan Sect again, kill Yun Ling, advance to the three-star fighting master, and start the great escape (it took nearly 3 months from the Jiaji Empire to the Canaan Academy). 18 years and 4 months: Five-star fighting master. 1. Enter Canaan Academy (Xun'er Ruolin's tutor Xiao Yu said in the conversation that she has been on leave for almost 2 years, and the above calculation time is more than 1 year and 10 months, which is not much different), participate in the selection competition, and be promoted to a six-star great fighter; 2. Enter the inner courtyard, establish Panmen, enter the Tianfenqi Refining Tower to practice in seclusion for 20 days, and be promoted to an eight-star great fighter. Note: It is said here that Xiao Yan and others entered the inner academy for 2 months (10 days to participate in the selection and Hujia Wu Hao and others to recuperate + 15 days of fire hunting competition and rest + 5 days of retreat to advance to 7 stars + more than 20 days to advance to 8 stars in retreat ≈ 2 months), so it should be 2 months after Xiao Yan entered the academy. 18 and a half years old: Eight-star fighting master. (Here Lin Yan tells Xiao Yan about the strong ranking contest half a year later) 1. Panmen refined medicine, found medicinal materials, met Ziyan, refined medicine, etc. For nearly 2 months; 2. Practicing Three Thousand Thunderbolts for more than 2 months; 3. Obtained the Earth Heart Milk and practiced it, and advanced to the level of fighting spirit, which took 15 days; >4. Return to the inner court, see Xiao Li (it is said here that it is more than one month before the strong ranking competition, and it is half a year until the next inner court selection. If the selection is carried out normally once a year, it means that it has been half a year since the last selection of Xiao Yan and others. According to my calculation above, it has been 7 months. The difference is not big), and he is promoted to the three-star Dou Ling in seclusion. 5. Strong Ranking Competition, recover from injuries and advance to the Five Star Dou Ling. 19 years old: Five-star fighting spirit. Xun'er left, and Xiao Yan was dragged underground by Fallen Heart Flame. 21 years old: Promoted to the peak of Dou Wang and emerged from the underground. 1. Zhan Han Feng, made a pact with the Queen, named Cai Lin, and practiced the Emperor Seal Art for nearly 2 months; 2. The Xiao family refining medicine, looking for medicinal materials, and refining medicine to help Yao Lao wake up for nearly 3 months (when helping Yao Lao wake up, the queen told Xiao Yan: It has been 2 months); Note: After Yao Lao woke up, he talked with Xiao Yan, and it has been three years since he left the Jiajia Empire. According to the above, Three years and five months, since more than three months were spent on the road from Jiaji Empire to Black Point Domain, the time is almost the same. 3. Stay in the inner courtyard for half a month, go into the mountains to practice the Emperor's Seal Art, half a month, and practice the Destruction Fire Lotus of three different fires for 1 month, 2 months in total; 4. Leave the inner courtyard and return to the Jiama Empire, more than 2 months on the road (herein the book says that he left for three years many times, but in fact it is almost four years). Note: It took nearly nine months from coming out of the underground to arriving at the Jiama Empire. Many people have not carefully calculated this time period. November of the 21st year: The Yunlan Sect battled, Yunshan was killed, Yao Lao was arrested, the Yunlan Sect was disbanded, and Yun Yun left after recuperating for one month. 22 years old: Establish the Flame Alliance. 1. Here Xiao Yan and Cai Lin chatted and said that the one-year agreement is about to expire (the above 11 months, almost) 2. Here it is said that Xiao Li's life span is less than 2 months, which is nearly three years since Xiao Yan was dragged underground (proven by the one-year agreement between the Queen and Xiao Yan), and Xiao Li took the drug half a year after Xiao Yan entered the underground Using Devouring Pill, Devouring Life Pill has a three-year lifespan, there is an error of nearly 3 months; 3. Xiao Gu met the Little Medical Fairy, Xiao Yan thought: Nearly six or seven years have passed, and I don't know how the Little Medical Fairy is doing (it has been almost six years since Xiao Yan separated from the Little Medical Fairy when he was 17 and a half years old, almost six years ago); 4. One month of alchemy. January 23: Promoted to Douhuang. 1. Going out of the battle to assassinate Mulan Gu and others for 1 month; 2. Yanmeng stayed for almost 1 month, and then went to the Izumo Empire with Sailin Shiken to fight against the Ten Thousand Scorpions Sect. 23 years old, March: The 2-star Dou Huang peaked, leaving the Izumo Empire and heading to the Black Corner Region (5 months on the road) 23 years old, August: 4-star Dou Emperor, arrived at the Black Corner Region again. Note: It is said here that it has been 2 years since I left the inner courtyard (I left in July when I was 21 years old, almost exactly 2 years). 1. Snatch Bodhi transformed into a saliva, fought against the earth demon old ghost, and was promoted to the 5-star Dou Emperor (nearly one month); 2. Practicing underground in the Tianfen Qi Refining Tower, met the Lord of Sky Fire, obtained the five rounds of fire separation method, and was promoted to the 6-star Dou Emperor (in February) ; 3. Seal the little doctor Xian Enan Poison Body (November 23 years old), here it is said that there are still 2 years before the elixir meeting; 4. Refining the Heavenly Demon Puppet, refining the Heavenly Soul Fusion Blood Pill, and promoted to the 7-star Douhuang (February time). January 24: 7-star Dou Huang, heading to Zhongzhou. 1. Black Corner Region → Half a month in Tianya City + 20 days in the space wormhole + 10 days on the road to the Han family + 10 days in swallowing Douhuang Dan to advance ≈ 2 months Note: In Tianbei City, Han Lin (who looked to be twenty-three or four years old) called Han Xue sister, and Han Xue and Xiao Yan were about the same age; The book here says that after Xiao Yan came out of the Qi Refining Tower after three years, Han Yue had left, which was another mistake. 2. One month of cultivating the Three Thousand Thunder Phantom Body in the mountains; 3. Three months of promotion to the rank of Douzong in Tianshan Blood Tan; September at the age of 24: One Star Douzong. Note: When Xiafeng Lei Dongge said that he had been separated from the Little Medical Fairy and others for half a year, it was absolutely correct. He also said that it was only one year before the Dan Meeting. At this time, it was about September since Xinlan last said that two years had passed (2+2+1+3=8, plus some small time periods on the road). There is a slight error. More than 1 month to go to the Central Territory + more than 1 month to refine alchemy in Burning Flame Valley + more than 1 month to find the Little Fairy Doctor ≈ 4 months In Luoshen Stream + Ye Family to control the evil poisonous body ≈ 2 months. April 25: 4 Star Dou Sect. Start practicing alchemy, it is said here that it will be 7 months after the alchemy meeting. 25 years old in November: Participated in the Dan Club, won the championship, and entered the Star Territory (stayed in the Star Territory for 8 months). 26 years and 7 months old: Jiuxing Douzong. 1. Prepare for 1 month and go to the Soul Palace to rescue Yao Lao (here it is said that Yao Lao was arrested for five or six years, from November 21 to now, August 26 - November 21 = 4 years and 9 months, there is a slight error), and he was seriously injured. 2. After one month on the road, we arrived at Xingyun Pavilion for retreat. (During the half-year retreat here, Cai Lin said that Xiao Yan had been away for five or six years. He left in February when he was 23 years old. 26 And a half years + January + January + half a year - February of 23 years = 4 years and January. It is almost five years at most. There is an error; it is also said here that Xiao Xiao is about 2 years old). Note: In the above two periods of five and six years, Yao Lao was arrested in April, one year after Xiao Yan left the Jiaji Empire. This is inconsistent with the eight months between these two sentences. Therefore, there is an error in the book and will not be considered. 27 years old and September: One Star Dou Zun. (Go to the Dou Sheng ruins to find medicine + refine the body = more than 2 months) Eat the Dou Sheng bone marrow to advance. 27 years old and November: Two Star Dou Zun. Go to Huazong for half a month Huazong retreats to refine Bone Spirit Cold Fire for more than 1 month 28 years old in January: Four-star Dou Zun. Go to Gulong Island to refine energy to save Ziyan for more than 1 month Void Thunder Pond for nearly 1 month 28 years old and April: Five-star Dou Zun. It is said here that it is one month since the coming of age ceremony of the ancient people and one year since the space fair. The coming-of-age ceremony of the ancient people lasted three years inside the tomb and half a year outside. 28 years old and November (bone age plus 2.5 Years): Eight-star Dou Zun is at his peak. Leave the Heavenly Tomb and gather people to return to the Jiaji Empire (it is said here that Xiao Xiao is four or five years old, which is about the same). April 29: Nine Star Dou Zun. Participated in the Space Fair (it is said here that it was 3 years since the birth of Demon Fire), and then went to the Manghuang Ancient Territory, and was promoted to the Nine-Star Dou Zun in the Blood Pool, spending 2 months in the Manghuang Ancient Territory. Twenty-nine and a half years old: The peak of the nine-turn Dou Zun, and obtained the Three Treasures of Bodhi in the ancient wilderness. (Enlightenment under the bodhi tree, reincarnation for hundreds of lives, to a certain extent can be regarded as a dream, which increases the character of the mind) 31 and a half years old: One star fights for the saint. After returning from the ancient wilderness of Manghuang, he stayed in seclusion for 2 years and was promoted to Dou Sage. The Tianfu Alliance was established after January, which was said to be 9 months before the demon fire came into the world. 32 years old and February: Two Star Fighting Saint. Obtained the unique skills and blood essence of the Underworld Demon Saint from the Nether Python Clan in Jiuyou Land Cailin retreated in Jiuyou Underworld. April 32: Two Stars Fighting Saints, the soul reaches the Great Perfection of Heaven. The Pure Lotus Demon Fire comes to the world and enters the demon fire space to conquer the demon fire. April 34: Early stage of Five-Star Fighting Saint. Tianfu Alliance PK Soul Palace After March, Cai Lin will leave the seclusion and refine the Northern King + practice in the Void Thunder Pool = February September at the age of 34: Late stage of Five-Star Dou Sage. Participate in the Pharmacopoeia after 2 months Refining medicine + recuperating from the ancient tribe + cultivating the soul in the sky tomb ≈ 2 months January at the age of 35: The middle stage of the Six-Star Dou Sheng, the soul of the Emperor Realm. The coalition forces are fighting against the Soul Clan. It is said here that they have been in Zhongzhou for more than ten years (from February 24, almost 11 years). February 36: Seven Star Fighting Saint. The coalition forces competed with the Soul Clan for the second time, and the Imperial Grade Young Pill was taken away. April 36: Xiao Yan retreated in the Heavenly Tomb to accept the inheritance of the ancient emperor (half a year outside, 3 years in the Heavenly Tomb). Another 2.5 Years will be added to the bone age. 37 years old: Dou Di. (External age is 36 years and 10 months, bone age is 41 years and 10 months)

Isn't the protagonist's setting the first echelon of pirates? I also defeated Hawkeye, but as soon as I didn't see the protagonist use three-color Haki II or Marine Sixth Form, he used a few sword skills. The performance of these sword skills was not very good. What's the point of traveling to the world of pirates? Can the author pick up this setting and use it?

The battle is broken. Come into the world. Qingshan Town. Yan Fu emerged. Warcraft Mountain. Little medical fairy. Seize the green lotus. Go to Canaan. To Central Continent. Enter the alchemy world. In the alchemy world. Refining three thousand. Ancient Sky Formation. Collect pure lotus. Become a fighting saint. Juehun Palace. Out of the Imperial Mansion. Emperor Qin appears.

Let me talk about the plots of the last few chapters. Originally, the author's writing was okay, but why did he set up this kind of intelligence-dampening plot? What does the Tianji Sect say? I think it is very unnecessary. Dou Po is not interested in the art of refining weapons. What's more, the author's sect that pretends to be the so-called hidden patriarch of the Fighting Emperor is very clever. How many Nine-Star Fighting Saints does the author want to give them? Otherwise, how could the author explain that the so-called Dou Emperor Sect was not wiped out by the eight ancient clans? Emperor Hun Tian wants to be Emperor Dou. Dou wants to go crazy. It would be weird if we don't dig up your ancestral graves. There is also a hidden sect, do you inherit the bloodline of Dou Emperor? There is no such thing as a sect because it is determined by Dou Emperor's bloodline, which is no different from the eight clans. You live in the small world opened by Dou Emperor right there, and there is no hiding place from the big forces. If not, you don't even have a hidden world. Where would your hidden disciples come from? Don't they want to practice? Don't they need the resources to practice in front of the air? Also, your setting doesn't highlight anything at all. A so-called hidden sect that no one knows about is no different from non-existence. This is an old routine from many years ago. You can't use your brain to think about urban pretense novels or hidden families. This kind of force is just stupid. Many immortals don't do this anymore, because if you hide in the world, people will kill you directly when there is a conflict. What if you come back with revenge later? Regardless of whether someone comes back to retaliate, you have already suffered irreparable losses. If someone else has a hard idea and you don't care, you can't retaliate and start a feud for no reason. If you have the strength to do something that is unnecessary, you will show it. Just like the original Gu Xun'er Glacier Valley Incident in which Xiao Yan was saved, Binghe immediately gave in when the identity of the ancient clan was revealed. If you are some hidden force, you will see whether Lord Binghe will ignore you or kill you without hesitation. So what you described about the Dou Emperor Patriarch calculating the secrets of the future generations and hiding from the world without the Dou Emperor is completely ridiculous. Such a sect will either pass on for a few generations and then die, or it will be cleaned up by the Soul Emperor as if it were garbage. So this setting is really enlightening. You can make up the setting but don't go too far. It's normal for you to make up a Dou Zun force. The original book also said that one palace, one tower, two sects, three valleys and four sub-pavilions are just the big forces on the surface of Zhongzhou. There are also many unknown and low-key forces that have appeared later. For example, the host of the space fair and the three trash who practiced evil and dual cultivation who were beaten to death by Yao Lao, etc. But it will be very confusing if you set up a Dou Emperor sect. The characteristics of Dou Emperor's bloodline are destined to have a high probability that the power left by Dou Emperor will be inherited by blood. No matter what sect you are originally born into, it will become a bloodline inheritance after the first few generations. Otherwise, how talented do you have to be to have a chance of breaking through the Fighting Saint? As long as Doudi's bloodline concentration is high, he can be guaranteed a recommendation. Does this still require selection? What's more, if these don't talk about how you can hide from the world? Find a place to isolate yourself from the country and become arrogant? The eight ancient tribes in the original work are not hidden in the world, they are just relatively low-key and not accessible to you at a certain level. People living in a small world with hundreds of millions of ethnic groups don't really need to absorb any fresh blood from the outside. They can just circulate it internally and maintain their superior status. Low-level resources are not looked down upon, and high-level resources are not the same. How can you, the Tianji Sect, hide from the world? If you had a small world, you wouldn't be able to hide from the world at all. Without you, hiding in the world would make you disappear and become extinct.

How should I put it? I hope it will be a single heroine (doge)

I feel that there are only two masters of the protagonist. It is more likely that he is the ancestor of Danta and the old man Shennong. The first one is probably

After evaluation by book friends, some settings of Hidden God Valley have been greatly changed (bloodline of Emperor Dou, size of Hidden God Valley, etc.). Thanks for pointing out the loopholes. However, this book is a new work, and it is really popular... So I will not delete this setting. It should be updated in the future. I will change the first three chapters and then try to sign the contract. (I hope the boss can give me some advice) The editor is too cold and heartbroken.

If you have any ideas, you can mention them, such as which heroine is the main character, or which ones (not too many); what suggestions do you have for the plot direction; which original characters do you want to see Mo Kai fight against... I am a newbie, so I hope book friends can give me some advice. 🙂

The protagonist's strength setting is so poor that it would be difficult to increase his strength as fast as Xiao Yan, not to mention that the protagonist has already passed half of his three-year contract. The pace is too slow and the plot is difficult to arrange. There are many plots in Dou Po that you cannot participate in just by knowing them.

The author's writing is not bad, and the content and plot are great, but I wish he could write it more clearly.

Post a post, do you think Furukawa is a genius alchemist? (Don't compare it to cheaters)