Doupo: I Am Han Feng, Respect Your Teacher and Respect Your Moral Principles.

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I have been reading the latest chapter, and I feel that the overall feeling is good, but I still need to pay attention to the small details. The protagonist is indeed a bit too good-natured. It is an industry rule for an alchemist to accept three medicinal materials to make medicine for others. It is an old tradition. Yao Chen himself does this, so he will not accept the remaining medicinal materials to highlight the protagonist's high integrity. In reality, there are still Huo Huogui, let alone fantasy.

Scenario background: 1. Han Feng did not show his true face in front of Yao Chen, but Yao Chen had already made a guess. 2. Encountering a powerful enemy, Han Feng was severely injured and forcibly activated the Virtual God Monument. Xingyun Pavilion, Yao Chen's room. Han Feng's figure emerged from the space, and then fell to the ground like a kite with its string broken. His hood was wet, and a small pool of blood gradually smeared on the ground. He was so severely injured that it was even difficult to move for a while. The power that Han Feng used to protect Yao Chen has dissipated, and Yao Chen appears on the floor of his room with a complicated expression. His eyes lightly glanced at the portrait of himself hung by Feng Xian on the wall, and then settled on the hooded man in black lying motionless on the ground. Han Feng was breathing hard, his eyes just fell on the ground, as if he didn't dare to raise his head at all, and Yao Chen just looked at him motionless. After a long time, the soul body moved forward lightly, and a familiar foot appeared in Han Feng's sight as it landed on the ground, followed by another foot, and then half of his body squatting down. Han Feng still lowered his gaze and lay weakly on the ground, while Yao Chen squatted down, stretched out his hand, and slowly reached towards the hood that covered Han Feng's face. Slowly, the hood slipped off, revealing Han Feng's face that was much more mature than when he was a teenager. The palm of the soul body paused slightly, and pressed down on Han Feng's head with some strength. Han Feng's face was a bit pale and stiff, and he closed his eyes when the medicine dust came over him. One second, two seconds, three seconds. Without waiting for the expected attack, Han Feng opened his eyes again. The palm of the soul body stopped above his face, close at hand, but not photographed. Yao Chen's hand changed direction and held up Han Feng's chin, causing his gaze, which had not looked at Yao Chen since he landed, to meet the other's. The pair of eyes that Han Feng was most familiar with, always full of tenderness, were looking at him with a sense of oppression and scrutiny, as if they were looking at an enemy worthy of vigilance. "Teacher..." Han Feng moved his throat and called with a slightly trembling voice.

There are too many original authors, we are here to see the fans

The copywriting is "Three Views of Juzheng" and I thought it was very good when I read it. The portrayal of the protagonist is considered a breath of fresh air in the Dian family. The little fairy doctor who picked up the child was also a very decent master. Suddenly, the two of them kissed and stuck out their tongues. I was reading quickly and didn't pay much attention to the little fairy doctor at this time. Are you an adult yet, but how can you say anything to the girl you have watched since childhood... If you don't get along well or if you are just interested in sex from the beginning, then you will accept it. This is like eating half-eaten and biting off a stone. The author's xp is cultivated by his love of play, right 😅

Very good, come on... The story is very strong, and it is not limited to the world of Wutan City. I look forward to developing more stories The relationship between the characters is handled very well. I look forward to seeing the confrontation between the two Yao Lao! In addition, regarding the heroine, I personally feel that it doesn't matter if you have a harem, solo or indifferent, as long as you don't get too seductive, it will be fine (I have a hard time commenting on some stallion stories)

Why write about Xiao Yan's love for Xun'er? Xun'er is so obvious to the protagonist. If you don't go into more detail, Xiao Yan has to get involved? It took me so long to write and yet I didn't accept any of them. It's almost like a eunuch's article 😒

The author has made too many second creations. The key is that the second creation must be reasonable. The star map obviously conflicts with the original world view, and the style of painting is so distorted that it covers the sky.

If the author is not good at writing emotional dramas, you can read the original work. Just be responsible when you fall asleep. There is no need to force yourself to write it.

Is this too much force? The protagonist is written as an "extreme" good person. A fighting emperor condescends and even says that he wants to visit the Lord of Dou Ling City in person. I don't think anyone with any brains would write such a plot. It's really puzzling.... Then That is, women should not forcefully write if they are not good at writing, and then study more how to write Shuangwen. A strong person like you starts with the strength of a fighting emperor, pretends to be cool, and writes how to write. If a woman can't write, don't write. It's good to be alone and handsome.

It's outrageous. It seems like the outline has been changed many times. It was clearly written before that Dou Emperor was reborn, so why did he not know the soul skills and had to learn the fighting skills again? In addition, the protagonist is a bit too pretentious, and the so-called etiquette becomes a restriction. He says he wants to practice in the world of mortals, but there is no joy, anger, sorrow or joy at all.

Compared with the previous book, the author's writing style has been greatly improved, and the description of the characters in the original work is better The author cleverly used the time that was still a few years away from the beginning of the original work to deal with some opportunities and character relationships in the original work, which is very good. This is rare among Dou Po fans. Most Dou Po fans start from the original timeline and then follow the original timeline step by step. The author's approach is quite novel. As of now, this book has the following features that are attractive to readers. The first is Han Feng's revenge for killing his master. How will the author deal with it in the subsequent encounter with Yao Lao? Second, how did Han Feng cultivate to Dou Di after traveling through time and knowing that he had overdrawn his cultivation potential? Third, what method does the author use to crack the millennium plan of Emperor Hun Tian? The last thing is how the author dealt with Xiao Yan's opportunities in the original work and the relationship with some of the original characters in the original work. Nowadays, most Dou Po fandoms have some problems more or less, such as: 1. Crazy opening of harems, crazy recruitment of girls, and using heroines to advance the plot. Usually such final endings fall into clichés, with the heroines falling in love with each other, and the plot inevitably collapses in the end. 2. There is too much original content, resulting in the original content being far greater than the content in the original work. It's not that originality is not good, but how to maintain a good balance between originality and original works. This is also a problem faced by most excellent fan authors. Original content has its benefits, such as the author cleverly explaining some bugs in the original work. However, some authors write original works and become popular as they write. There are only two endings. One is that the original content was written and then stopped, and then it collapsed and was scolded by most readers who like original content, and then the subscriptions dropped crazily. Second, in the end, only some readers who like original content are left reading. This is not bad, but it is difficult for the author to find other ways to increase the subscription data. 3. If I don't have any ideas, I just copy other fans' data if they have good data. The most typical one is that the way Douluo next door treated Tang San hasn't changed since the black Tang San became famous a few years ago. This is not about whitewashing Tang San or anything. But now, most Douluo fans of Three of Spades don't have any big difference in the way they deal with Tang San. It's hard to find anything novel. Then there is the historical district's "Since the establishment of a thousand-year family" in the historical area. I hope the author will continue to work hard and bring some novel ideas to our readers! Come on! Finally, I wish everyone a Happy New Year! I wish everyone all the best in the new year! Wealth is coming!

First of all, make a clear attitude. This is a fanfic, and it is normal to have two settings. Therefore, when I read this book, I will respect the author's two settings and will not refute it But I have seen many people using the author's two settings to copy the original work, confusing it with the original setting. , So I want to say a few words The author assumes that there is no strong or weak distinction between the foreign fires other than the first three, but I want to say: the foreign fires in the original work must be strong and weak The views are as follows: 1. The foreign fires that have not been refined are excluded. When there is not a big difference between names, the year determines the strength. For example, the Qinglian Earth Heart Fire that has grown for tens of millions of years must be stronger than the newly born Fallen Heart Flame 2. The strength of the refined foreign fire mainly depends on the cultivation and ranking of the master of the foreign fire, such as the mysterious fire in the hands of the Fighting Saint. Huang Yan can suppress the Fallen Heart Flame in Dou Zong's hand 3. If you want to look at the strength of the strange fire, you should look at the different fires in the hands of different fire controllers of the same level. For example, the Glazed Lotus Heart Fire in Dou Wang Xiaoyan's hand can make Hai Xinyan in Dou Huang's hand feel scared, and Dou Zong Xiaoyan's hand can scare him. The glazed lotus heart fire in the hand can make the Dou Zunmu Hai Xinyan scared Let's talk about the arguments: 1. From the performance of the pure lotus demon fire and the three thousand flames before and after they are refined, we can know: What is refined is fire. The flames will not bring with them the cultivation that they have naturally grown before. Before the Pure Lotus Demon Fire is refined, killing a low-star Dou Sage is like killing a chicken. After being refined, the combat effectiveness in the hands of Xiaoyan mainly depends on the anti-inflammatory, not the strange fire itself. In other words, whether you have a strange fire that has grown for 10,000 years or a 20,000-year-old. Years of strange fire will be useless after being refined by others. The huge energy will be refined into fighting spirit by the owner, and the energy that cannot be refined will naturally dissipate (refer to Three Thousand Flames of Fire) 2. It can be seen from 1: the strength of the refined strange fire is pure. It purely depends on the strength of the master and the fire. When the masters are the same, the strength of the fire determines the ranking of the different fires, or the famous scene where these two Hai Xin Yan are suppressed Why does Dou Wang Xiaoyan's Glazed Lotus Heart Fire suppress Dou Huang Han Feng's Hai Xin Yan? Why does Douzong Xiaoyan's Liulilian Heart Fire suppress Douzong Mugu's Haixinyan Because Liulilianxinhuo is a fusion of 19 Qinglian Earthly Heart Fire + 14th Fallen Heart Flame, and its specific strength is ranked around 10 (Xiaoyan mentioned it in the plot of conquering Three Thousand Flames) So Liulilianxinhuo is obviously weaker than the opponent when its master is Under such circumstances, Hai Xinyan was so scared that he did not dare to show his head, so the different fires must have different strengths and weaknesses The ancient emperor Tuoshe also swallowed the flames from weak to strong. The strength here must be related to the year. After he has swallowed a few, of course he will not swallow them in order of strength. The problem is that after swallowing them all, they are all fires in his body. Can't he tell the strength of the flames? The strength of the Strange Fire Ranking is of great reference value, because Emperor Tuoshe is the one who truly understands the strength of the Strange Fire. He swallowed all the Strange Fires Summary: The top three ranked Strange Fires are in the same echelon, 4-10 ranked Strange Fires are in one echelon, and 11 and below are ranked in the same echelon. Wild Strange Fires in the same echelon are indeed possible in the case of huge differences in years. The weak defeats the strong, But once the alien fire is refined, it is just a competition of strength between the flames themselves Of course you have to be a normal alien fire, such as the alien fire in the alien fire square that has even exhausted its source.

The plot is pushed too slowly. To give an example in the book, it was written in May that Xiao Yan had already entered the Warcraft Mountains with Yao Lao. But now it is more than July and the plot of the three-year appointment has not even been pushed. In the emotional drama, the author doesn't know if he likes married women or something, but he keeps giving plots about Qing Lin's mother who was raped, and also keeps teasing her about her special physique and restoration of appearance. Is this a proper inclusion in the harem? 🤔

The biggest problem with this book is that it is boring and I have no desire to continue reading.

It's just so-so, Shuhuang can read it. In one sentence, it can be summed up as the eunuch harem novel.

To be honest, Dou Po World is too biased towards the fire element. There are alien fires and alchemists, but there are no alien water, alien soil, alien wood, etc. The fire element is inherently overpowered.

The world view of this book is quite good, but the emotional drama is messy The new setting of this book is pretty good, but the emotional drama is messy The character creation of this book is pretty good, but the emotional drama is messy Overall, this book is worth reading, but the emotional drama is messy

It's not as good-looking as the previous book Bronze Treasure Box, but it's very enjoyable to read all the previous books. The protagonist of this book is older than the Little Doctor Fairy, so it looks strange emotionally. Moreover, the protagonist is too kind and has no airs.

Xuanhuang Saint

As we all know, Fighting to Break the Sky is a strange story about the rules. There are obviously only ten cultivation levels, but with the forcibly included realms of Dou Qi, Nine-turn Dou Zun, and Half Saint, there are actually 13 levels in total, and one Dou Zun can equal three major realms. And such a collapsed combat power was not formed in a day. There are four versions of fighting power. 1. Northwest version, the most familiar nostalgic server. In this version: Dou Zong is so terrifying, Yao Zun believes that he needs ten moves to defeat Yunshan; the dignified Yao Zun's eldest disciple is only at the level of Dou Huang, and a remote strongman like Yunlan Zong Yun Potian can make a name for himself in Central Continent; a twenty-year-old Dou Wang is a rare genius in the entire continent. The person who made this evaluation is Yao Chen, a Yao clan origin. →_→To summarize, in this version it is not just that the vision is low and the map is small, but the gap between Douhuang Douzong and Douzun Dou Sheng is as big as the sky. 2. Zhongzhou version, from the Han family to the Tianfu Alliance period. In this version: Eighth level = Nine-star Dou Zun + Nine-turn Dou Zun peak + Third level Half Saint, 🐶💩The same expansion of combat power has begun; in the previous version, 🐮 Heavenly Yunshan liked to mention the title of Eleven-star Dou Emperor, and Yao Chenqian said that becoming a Half Saint would qualify him to contact Yuan The ancient family has turned into a frog in the well; the Burning Flame Valley Sky Demon Phoenix Clan and others who can keep up with the version have refreshed the Dou Sheng; the former first-class forces such as Glacier River Valley directly summarized it. 3. In the later version, other forces in Central Continent will completely surrender without siding with the ancient family. Let's not talk about other expansions during this period, let's just talk about Canaan Academy: How many years have Qianbai Er Ka been at the peak of the Dou Zong, and they have not benefited from Xiao Yan at all, and they are going to take action on the Seven Star Dou Zong after more than ten years? 🥔Let's just say that by becoming Xiao Yan's friend, you can get Dou Emperor's bloodline. 4. Patch version, Yaolao Legend + Great Master. In a more crazy version, Dou Di can even travel through time and space and try his best to come to you~ Dou Di's exaggerated destructive power can even reach the ancestral realm with force, which is crazy. The noisy Emperor Huan Dou was dragged to the surface in the past, but now he has bottomed out and gone directly to the star level. Those ancient bodhi trees and candles in the past were all 🤡, it was really like the light of a grain of rice competing for the brilliance of the big sun. In summary, the combat power of Fighting to Break the Sky has been inflated from the moment it entered the Central Continent. The characters in the early stage will still have a chance to rise up if they receive patches. If they don't, they will be completely destroyed.

Come on! The monthly tickets and rewards are all handed over to you😋😋😋A very rare Dou Po fanfic, which is based on the original story line but does not completely copy the original work. Many plots such as Qinglin mother and daughter, the loss of three thousand thunders from Fenglei Pavilion to the Black Corner Domain, are both different in writing and closely related to the original work. I also like the character of the protagonist better. Compared with all kinds of killing and killing stallion protagonists, I like this orderly and neutral protagonist more Come on! ! ! !

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The ending of "Spreading Flowers", the subject matter is quite good, it should be the first time I have watched Han Feng time travel, and it is the time period after assassinating Yao Lao. The early and middle stages are good, but the later stage feels broken~xP I really like watching Yao Lao, the relationship between Xiao Yan and the protagonist, especially when Yao Lao breaks his defense. Emotionally, the protagonist basically feels flirty and then says very ambiguous words or actions, and then disappears in the end. It makes me feel a little stomachache. It is recommended not to write about emotions. The early stage is quite interesting, but in the mid stage, especially when it comes to the Spirit and Stone tribes, it feels like playing a game. You need to pass the mission before you can meet the key characters to complete the mission. One is to learn skills in class and then use the learned skills to pass the level, and the other is to fight. After doing so much in the past, when I saw the soul clan, it was basically just killing and killing. After the appearance of the extraterrestrial evil spirits, I felt that the plot was messed up, especially after I failed to kill the evil corpse, I basically lost interest in watching it.

It deserves a shot🤭🤭🤭

I feel that the author's writing style is not suitable for writing novels about Dou Po. Of course, this is not a criticism, but I feel that this style of writing is a bit disconnected from Dou Po. Has the author considered writing novels about immortals? He could try writing something like Lan Ke Qi Yuan, or he might just write a more traditional fairy tale. It will be difficult for fans who write passionate stories like Dou Po to achieve success if they write in this indifferent style.

I thought you were going to write a new book after Daqian.