Becoming a Tycoon by Making Life Difficult for Players

I've read a little bit of it, and it's the kind of novel that loses money and gives rewards but is still popular. If you read that right

It's the kind that's ruthless, perverted, brainless and has no brains. It's the kind that's very unique.

The starting point is okay, but the plot is a bit weird, and the sense of satisfaction is not quite sure. Regarding the system reimbursement, it feels like you are too fussy about it It is originally written in a big-hearted way, but it is written in a stingy way The overall plot is for you to develop for the better, and the male protagonist's character is a bit low-key

It's okay, you can watch it 🤓

It's okay, just follow the path of the richest man, but this one is a bit more BT 🙂

Come on, author, give me some suggestions. One is whether the characters can have more characteristics. For example, Ma Hou's positioning is the same as Mr. Pei's roommate Ma Yang, but he feels that he has no characteristics. In addition, the anchor can be more lively as the royal publicity ambassador, and the protagonist himself can also have some hobbies and ideas of his own, not just for money, but to become a tool for publishing games. Nowadays, many dystopian backstabbing stories have become a chronicle because the characters and plots have no memorable points. In the end, they just keep writing the works over and over again. If something unexpected happens over and over again, they will no longer be able to write. It would be better if the characters have some characteristics. Another point is that the author can best describe why the content of the game itself is so popular. For example, the mentality of players when playing games and the specific content. Those of us who have played the three games so far know why. But if you don't read it from a God's perspective, the last game would be a bit baffling to sell 40 million copies. I know it can be sold but I don't understand.

Oh, I'm still thinking about how I can sell this broken treadmill. Mr. Gu really sells it as fitness equipment, and the buyer buys it as an adult product. This idea is like a genius.

The storyline is too contrived;

It's just TJ, I still want to see Palu

The writing is very good. You can update it after finishing the paper. Don't cut it.