My Father Liu Xuande

The writing is OK, there is no mess, and the shortcomings are also obvious. The author has too many personal comments. There are 7-8 hundred words of quotations and personal comments in the 1000 text. It is okay at first, but writing in this way all the time is too watery and annoying!

The author's writing is very good. His writing style, popular novel skills, historical materials, rhythm, and experience in online writing are all very good. The author of "A Starting Point" is called Yu Yan. The two books he wrote about the Three Kingdoms are very good, especially "Xuande" Although the author is brilliant, he still needs to be encouraged to move forward. The road ahead can still be seen. Finally, I don't know if there will be another great master in the starting point history category in a few years. In this way, I would like to share my encouragement with you.

Can you do two chapters a day?

First of all, let's talk about Guo Jia's character and character issues: The only problem with Guo Jia in the Three Kingdoms is the sentence that Chen Qun impeached Guo Jia for not being punished. This means that Guo Jia didn't stand up in court according to the rules of a courtier. Why did Chen Qun impeach Guo Jia for being lustful in the court? Even eating Five Stone Powder is not a matter that should be dealt with by the court. The same person is Jian Yong of the Shu Han Dynasty. He is also a person who does not take care of himself. Except for Zhuge Liang, everyone lies down to see him. This is not a good thing. In ancient times, how many children of aristocratic families and powerful people could not have three wives and four concubines? There are even a bunch of singing girls in the house, who can talk about lust? Zhang Fei forced himself to marry the 14-year-old Xiahou family, Guan Yu asked to marry Mrs. Du, Zhong Yao was seventy and eighty years old, Zhong Hui, and Cao Cao had a bunch of wives. Who said they were lustful? If they publicly accuse Guo Jia of being lecherous in the court, where will Boss Cao and other ministers turn their faces? Wu Shi San is a fiction, and the same goes for good wine. Basically, it is a secondary design given to Guo Jia by marketing accounts and Three Kingdoms fans. Some people should not use the secondary design of the fans to set up historical figures. It is outrageous to see some people always saying that Guo Jia is unworthy and unsuitable for Shu Han when they see the word Guo Jia. Second, is Guo Jiashi not suitable for the Shu Han camp? There is no doubt that he is suitable. When Guo Jia meets the suitable lord, he is really unreserved and very cooperative. Even if he is a tyrant like Cao Cao and very suspicious, he is extremely satisfied with Guo Jia and trusts Guo Jia very much. Not to mention Liu Bei? Moreover, Guo Jia had a very good relationship with Xun Yu. Even a gentleman like Xun Yu got along well with Guo Jia and felt that Guo Jia's talents were worthy of Cao Cao. Could it be that the Shu Han people still couldn't accept Guo Jia? In addition to the shortcomings of the fan fiction, what character problems does Guo Jia have? On the contrary, Guo Jia is very accurate in judging people. The records in the Three Kingdoms include very accurate evaluations of Yuan Shao and his three sons, Liu Biao, Sun Ce, Liu Bei, and Guan Yu and Zhang Fei. Especially Sun Ce, he can be called a prophet. Can such a person not be accurate? Cao Cao was made to think that he missed Guo Jia all the time. He said that Guo Jia couldn't integrate into Shu Han, but he was thinking too much. Guan Yu, Zhang Fei, Liu Bei and others were not as good-tempered as Cao Cao? Third, there is the issue of Guo Jia's level. It is an exaggeration to say that Guo Jia is immortal and Crouching Dragon cannot come out, and that Cao Wei is the best, and the comparison object is also wrong. Guo Jia is a pure counselor. Zhuge Liang and Xun Yu are both civil servants. As for fighting, they are all top-notch, and their positioning is different. Zhuge Liang is very reasonable when compared with Cao Cao. Compared with Guo Jia, it is a compliment to Guo Jia. Zhuge Liang is comprehensive, while Guo Jia is good at planning alone and partial to science. Guo Jia should have no problem in governing a county, but governing a state is even the same as Zhuge Liang and Xun Yu. Even if he does not have that ability, Guo Jia should be compared. It is Fazheng of the Shu Han Dynasty, Xun You and Jia Xu of the Wei State. The three of them did not describe much about governing the country, but they said that it was no problem to govern a county, but more about making suggestions. These four people are all extremely high-level counselors. In Pei Songzhi's Notes, it is also recorded that Cao Cao wrote to Xun Yu after the Battle of Red Cliff, saying that he remembered that Guo Jia had told him before that there was a lot of miasma in the south. Guo Jia said that if he went to the south, he would definitely not be able to come back (sent it), but he would still go to the south with Cao Cao. He said that Cao Cao would first pacify Jingzhou and use Jingzhou as a base. Guo Jia flooded Xiapi and so on. I won't mention it anymore. It is recorded in the Chronicle of the Three Kingdoms. If you are interested, you can read it by yourself. The level is not bad, but it is still close to Xun You. It is hard to say that Fazheng also died young. Jia Xu: A benevolent man sees benevolence and a wise man sees wisdom. Jia Xu has a lot of vicious tricks. In the end, the troops were very quick and raided Wuhuan. The controversy was very big, but it was one-sided regardless of the situation. It took Cao Cao seven years to pacify the north. This was still the case when both Yuan and Wuhuan were dead. If Cao Cao did not take risks, it would be difficult to fight. He had a plan. The fighting power of the forces and the ownerless forces are different. With Yuan Shao and Yuan Tan both dead, Yuan Shang is the only legal heir. If he is alive, Yuan Shao's men will not give up easily. With Wuhuan's help, there will be no problem for Cao Cao to go south three or four years later. In three or four years, there is no need to fight Chibi, no need to think about Jingzhou, Liu Bei no longer needs to borrow Jingzhou, and the north is still fighting with Yuan Shang, then Cao Cao does not need to miss Yizhou and Hanzhong, hand them over to Liu Bei, and don't even think about moving the population away, leaving Liu Bei with a strong Jingzhou. Zhou, Sun Quan no longer needs to attack Guan Yu. The north has not been pacified yet, and Hefei is not necessarily difficult to defeat. After all, a north with a stable rear and a north with endless wars and old officials of the Yuan family are not the same concept. It will be difficult for Cao Cao to conquer Red Cliff in his lifetime. And Guo Jia's strategy is actually okay. At most, Guo Jia didn't consider that the northern grassland is so dry and there is no water. But he is from the Central Plains, and he has never been to Bingzhou, let alone the grassland, but he has no strategy or tactics. The problem is, the effect was achieved. He tied Wuhuan and Eryuan in the first battle. There is no problem with the credit. Otherwise, Cao Cao would not have added 800 households to him later. He later wrote to Xun Yu saying that he missed Guo Jia, which means he wanted to kill Guo Jia.

It's really difficult for the protagonist to be 10 years old. The author really begs you, please change the protagonist to 13 or 4 years old. It's not as difficult as 10 years old. My neighbor's child is 10 years old. He is just a little kid. As the saying goes, official history may not be accurate enough. You make the protagonist 4 or 5 years older, and I can still accept it when he looks like 18 years old. You are even more outrageous than the cool guy next door 😒

Up to now, the amount of water injected into each chapter has reached more than 80% There is also the problem of keeping up with updates. Remember, as long as the author can guarantee to update a chapter of 5,000 words at 11:30 every day, he will be satisfied. For any other update problems he says, don't believe a single punctuation mark. He is a habitual offender Why did he open a small account? That's a big character whose character has long been ruined.

Can you tell which god's vest this is? Sister Jiao and Juhuaguan both recommend that they cannot be ordinary people.

The policy theory is well written and the theoretical analysis is quite novel. When it comes to military affairs, he is very ignorant. For example, he slept in the same room with the big soldiers during military training. When fighting, he had to stand in the front row at the age of ten. He also wanted to go into the enemy's city to personally persuade Zang Ba to surrender. He liked the white dragon fish uniform and loved to take risks. Also, there is no distinction between priorities, long-winded, and hands-on handling of small things, which makes people feel that there is no structure. All in all, the subject matter of this book is very novel. It has interesting points in policy and affairs, but there are many poisonous points in military affairs, and it is occasionally interspersed with no priority. It feels tasteless, mostly interesting but occasionally flawed.

It's good-looking, but there's a huge amount of wasted space. There are currently 700,000 words out of the current 980,000. It's either introducing characters or on the way to introducing them. All chapters, yes, all chapters contain content introducing characters 😁

Here's a little suggestion, don't engage in any black technology, just forget about stirrups, muskets are a bit overwhelming... It's not necessary, writing it means it's unfinished.

I was so obsessed with famous generals that I searched all over the world in Xuzhou and went to Hedong. Treating people in the court as fools, military descriptions are too white, marching across thousands of miles without logistics, awesome

The title of this book should be changed to: Work Diary of the Personnel Department of the Three Kingdoms. What the author doesn't understand is that if many talented people are forced into a group, their combat effectiveness will be negative. The reason why a great person is great is because he doesn't obey others and is not a follower! There are so many talented people together, needless to say to the outside world, they are busy fighting in the nest all day long!

Everything was fine, except that he was just trying to find a country at the age of ten, and he was still fighting and managing the army, just like Han Xin. And go to the battlefield. Very embarrassing. . . The last time I read a book with a ten-year-old protagonist was Hans Christian Andersen as a child.

You promote the Quyuan plow to improve efficiency, save manpower and develop productivity. You sell snow salt, are you just purifying coarse salt and selling it as a luxury product? Should we consider changing from boiled salt to sun-dried salt and using large brine tanks to improve efficiency, save manpower and develop productivity? There is no cotton in the Three Kingdoms, but the linen textile industry and the wool textile industry can also be developed. Jenny machines are used to make blended fabrics. Handicraft workshops with division of labor and cooperation will definitely have higher efficiency, use less manpower, spin more cloth, and develop productivity. Small farmers grow, spin and weave themselves, which is definitely inefficient and wastes manpower. Under the social conditions of vast land and sparsely populated areas, we should develop machines, specialize in labor, use less manpower, produce more wealth, and develop productivity. Take the linen and woolen industries as an example. From the production of linen and wool, to the bleaching and ironing of linen, or the dyeing and final processing of woolen fabrics, there are so many different techniques used in each department. The production efficiency of small farmers is definitely not as good as that of manual workshops with specialized division of labor. First, the skills of workers are improving day by day due to their specialization. Second, switching from one kind of work to another usually requires a lot of time loss. With division of labor, this loss can be avoided. Third, many mechanical inventions that simplify and reduce labor enable one person to do the work of many people. The output of various industries has greatly increased due to the use of machines and professional division of labor. He can fully supply what others need, and what he needs himself can be fully supplied by others, so all classes in society are generally wealthy. In uncivilized societies, a job that was done by one person generally becomes a job shared by several people in a progressive society. In a progressive society, farmers are generally just farmers and makers are just makers. Allowing farmers to only engage in agricultural production and not manufacturing will not only cultivate more land, but also provide a broader market for the manufacturing industry. This is progress.

I just saw the protagonist going down to Koto. I have always thought this book looked a bit strange, and I knew it didn't taste right, but I couldn't figure out what was wrong. Until just now, while I was reading, I suddenly thought of myself: The salary collector who kept writing; The new interpreter of idioms who was as comfortable as a fish in water; The living fossil of ancient online literature with evergreen pines and cypresses ——The second generation of Yuren! Author, look at these famous ministers and generals in your book, do they look like the female characters in the old novels of the "Yurman" era of "getting everything". First she "fell in love at first sight", then she was "convinced by twists and turns", and finally "taken under the command of (the queen) (the palace)", but in the end "no such person was found". In the beginning, Zhang Liao, Gan Ning, Taishi and others were given some roles. Later, it was simply the Little Overlord's Conquest of Jiangdong. Liu Zhengnan was the backdrop for Sun Bofu, and these famous generals were the backdrop for Liu Feng. Looking at the heads, almost all the top advisers and generals from the three countries have been killed. But when I looked at the results again: "Huh? Why is the progress bar stuck." Also, I saw a quote from the author you posted, the general idea is: "Why can't you see my foreshadowing?" That's what you said. Your foreshadowing is so hidden that I sincerely suggest that you try writing mystery novels next time (*σ´∀`)σ Don't say "Sun Ce's defeat is a foregone conclusion". You are almost like Zelensky: "The defeat of Goose is a foregone conclusion!" "Their strategic decline has been revealed!" (Laughing)

I didn't expect to suddenly change the protagonist after writing so many words.

Where can I report AI writing and making bad money? Can't I report it?

??? It wasn't until Sun Ce's invitation came out in the latest chapter that I quickly skipped through the chapters about Sun Ce's defeat. Are you serious about accepting the surrender of Sun Ce? This book has always talked about how important justice is to Liu Bei's power. The banner we carried when we went to Jiangdong was to put down the troubles in Jiangdong. After Sun Ce raised this banner, he was the culprit no matter what. Then... Surrendered? 1. Legal perspective: From this perspective, he has always been Yuan Shu's general. You yourself specifically emphasized this point in your book, pointing out that "because Yuan Shu did not proclaim himself emperor, the Sun family had no reasonable opportunity to break away." Coupled with what he did in Jiangdong... Is it necessary to ask Luoyang's opinion? And Luoyang's opinion can be good to him?? 2. People's perspective: I emphasize again that your book says that reputation and banner are very important to Liu Bei. And then just surrendered the man who turned Jiangdong into a battlefield and offended the place so badly? Isn't this setting a trap for subsequent governance? And the one you created for Sun Ce earlier is called an indomitable one 🙄 As a result, after being collected in your writing, he can be down-to-earth and work diligently? In this book, Liu Feng's real name should not be Yuri, and there should be no system cheats such as hypnosis, right? 3. Team building perspective: Sun Ce surrendered after being defeated, but even a broken ship has three jins of nails, even if his soldiers and generals were damaged. Based on the combat effectiveness of the remaining teams, his military level, and his relationship with the Sun soldiers who surrendered to Liu Feng before, what kind of official position is enough? If it is lower, it is pure humiliation. If the salary is too high, the defeated army will be defeated and the generals will come from behind? Is it really like employing people like accumulated salary? What should the old people who took refuge in the past do in their hearts? And if you continue to expand in the last step, will you accept those people who surrender again or not? You have obviously put together a dreamy civil and military team for the protagonist (I saw another book friend commented very well - just looking at the civil servants and generals the protagonist collected, I thought they were late), is there really such a lack of such a little overlord?

Speechless😑. The protagonist takes over. Queen second hand

The author is like Cao Cao's own son, and he is dedicated to helping Cao Cao. The less you fall out with Cao Cao, the more Yuan Shao will fall out with you. This is why Yuan Shao may regard you as his number one enemy. Only if you attack Yanzhou, Yuan Shao will attack Luoyang. Similarly, if I were Cao Cao and saw that you didn't dare to turn against me and should actually defend Hanoi for me, what else could I say? The whole army would be dispatched to fight for Yizhou. This is something written by an author without strategic thinking. The Three Kingdoms are just rookies pecking each other, a bunch of rubbish. Sima Yi, who led the Eight Kings Rebellion, will probably send all these so-called heroes of the Three Kingdoms to the West within 20 years.

The author of this book, Sapphire Lion, has written about Luan Qing before. Is that you? I have subscribed to dozens of chapters, and I find that the taste of this writing is becoming more and more familiar. I have subscribed to the last two chapters, and I feel that my guess is good. In the early stage, I became a god, and in the mid stage, I started to use water maps. I copied and pasted them directly from Baidu Encyclopedia in the future.

Instead of simply using narration to express it, otherwise it will not be conducive to the shaping of each character and will not promote the plot. It will be like pressing the pause button and listening to your explanation. I have posted similar posts before and had them deleted.

It's good to read, I love reading it, but it's a pity that it's a new book, so I have to wait for the update before I'm satisfied with it.

I heard that you prepared ten thousand words to greet us, but is there such a thing?

It's been almost 20 days without an update, haha ​​😅

The old wolf said that you update ten thousand words every day to welcome us and other wise men. Is this true?

The shortcoming of the author is the war plot. Applying the ancient Chinese novel Three Kingdoms to fight with generals is like child's play. Who in their right mind will fight with you? Believe it or not, which soldier will take out a big yellow crossbow and shoot you in the head? Take death, very disappointed. Personally, I think the best story about the Three Kingdoms is the Wei Dynasty, where the west wind is tight, and the duel war scenes with famous generals such as Sima Yi are magnificent. The long weapons stabbing, the horses rolling, and the heavy stone hurling to attack the city are very realistic. The current plot, war and generals, I always jump to subscribe, which really affects the reading experience.

What is the relationship between Chen Deng's character "Yuanlong" and his given name? Don't ancient characters and names have a certain relationship? Bro, I just can't figure it out.

Don't plan to update? 🙂

Okay, I accepted it. The results of the maintenance were not updated for four months.