My Life Is Like Walking on Thin Ice

The writing style is good, but the author does not use characters and plots to promote the development of the story and evolve conflicts The author's subjective narration and discussion in long paragraphs are very distracting, making the whole book less story-telling, and the originally ups and downs of the plot are boring.

To be fair to the author, isn't the biggest feature of this book a story that even a novice in history can understand? The logic is clear, and everything everyone does is very consistent with the characters. Although it is a little less humorous than Lao Lang, it does describe the political ecology of the early Western Han Dynasty. Personally, it looks pretty good to me, but the update time is a little weird.

China/ 1. The first emperor in the history of Chinese imperial system: Qin Shi Huang Ying Zheng 2. The first emperor in the history of Chinese imperial system: King Qin Zhuangxiang 3. The first empress dowager in the history of Chinese imperial system: Empress Dowager Zhao Ji [2~3 is for honor] 4. The first person in Chinese history who did not ascend the throne but was respected as the supreme emperor by his son is: the supreme emperor: Liu Taigong. 5. The first queen in Chinese history was: Li. Liu Taigong's second wife, Liu Jiao's biological mother 3. The first empress recorded in Chinese history, the Empress Dowager. The first female protagonist in the history of Chinese imperialism to serve in court. The first female protagonist in Chinese history to have her own name in the history books is Queen Gao of Han Dynasty: Lu Pheasant 4, the first crown prince appointed by the emperor in the history of Chinese imperial system, the first emperor in the history of Chinese imperial system to ascend the throne as the eldest son, the history of Chinese imperial system Among them, he was the first emperor in the Han Dynasty to inherit the throne as the crown prince, and the first emperor in the Han Dynasty to use filial piety as his posthumous title. Emperor Xiaohui Liu Ying of Han Dynasty /Note: 1. Taizu Gao Emperor Liu Bang had eight sons and one daughter. Liu Bang and Empress Lu gave birth to Emperor Xiaohui Liu Ying. Liu Ying did not hold real power, so the 15 years after Liu Bang's death were the period of Empress Lu. 5. The first deposed emperor in Chinese history was Liu Shi, the young emperor of the former Han Dynasty/deposed by his grandmother Empress Lu. 6. The first emperor in Chinese history who was deposed and killed by his ministers was Liu Hong, the young emperor of the Han Dynasty 7. The first emperor in Chinese history who was supported by ministers and royal family was Emperor Taizong Xiaowen of the Han Dynasty Liu Heng Accessed the throne at the age of 23 8. The first emperor in Chinese history The real emperor who succeeded to the throne as a prince/(possessing all the actual rights that an emperor should have) was Emperor Xiaojing of the Han Dynasty Liu Qi 9, the first deposed queen in Chinese history Empress Bo was the Han Jing Emperor Liu Qi When Emperor Jing was the prince, Empress Dowager Bo took Bo's daughter as his concubine. When Emperor Jing was established, he established a concubine named Queen Bo. The queen has no children. No pampering. Queen Mother Bo died and Queen Bo was deposed. 10. The first deposed crown prince in Chinese history was the son of Han Jing Emperor Liu Qi and Li Ji: Liu Rong PS, please be clear, I am writing about the imperial period. That is, the period after Qin Shihuang unified the six kingdoms ​PS: Only based on the establishment of the imperial system by Qin Shihuang of Qin ​1. The first person in Chinese history to be called the Queen Mother: Qin Zhixuan Queen Mother Mi Bazi. The Queen Mother's title was Bazi. ​Zhaoxiang's mother was from Chu. Her surname was Xiu and her name was Queen Mother Xuan. When King Wu died, King Zhaoxiang was pledged to Yan, and the people of Yan sent him back and he was established. ​Note: Empress Dowager Xuan, Empress Dowager Zhao, were the Queen Mother ​[In 265 BC, King Qi Xiang died, and the Queen's son Tian Jian succeeded to the throne, and was known as King Jian of Qi in history. After King Jian of Qi succeeded to the throne, he respected his mother, the Queen Mother, as the Queen Mother. ​ ​2. The first person to proclaim himself emperor in Chinese history was the Xidong Emperor of Qin Qi ​In the 19th year of King Qin Zhaoxiang (288 BC), King Qin Zhaoxiang Ying Ji proclaimed himself the West Emperor and sent envoys to honor King Qi Min's land as the East Emperor. The King of Qi followed the advice of his advisers, removed his imperial title, and asked the princes to join forces to attack Qin. King Qin Zhaoxiang was forced to cancel the imperial title and resume the title of king ​3. The first businessman in Chinese history to become a prime minister was: Qin's prime minister: Lu Buwei. ​4. The two most important prime ministers who influenced Qin Shihuang were Lu Buwei and Li Si ​5. The first empress dowager in Chinese history: Zhao Ji ​6. The first emperor to be deposed and killed in the history of Chinese imperialism was Hu Hai ​Killed by Zhao Gao's son-in-law Yan Le ​7. The first peasant uprising in the history of Chinese imperialism : Dazexiang Uprising ​8, the first longest-lived monarch in Chinese history ​ was the South Vietnamese King Zhao Tuo, who died at the age of 103/survived the first emperor of Qin, the second emperor of Qin, Prince Ying of Qin, Emperor Yi of Chu, Xiang Liang, Xiang Yu, Taizu of the Han Dynasty, Emperor Hui of the Han Dynasty, the young emperor of the former Han Dynasty, the young emperor of the later Han Dynasty, the empress Gao of the Han Dynasty, Emperor Wen of the Han Dynasty, Emperor Han Jingdi, and finally died in the early period of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty. ​9. The first commoner in the history of China's imperial system. The first emperor to worship Confucius in the Temple was Han Taizu Gao Emperor Liu Bang. ​10. A master of Confucianism between the Qin and Han Dynasties in China, the main designer of court rituals in the early Han Dynasty, and the prince of the founding crown prince of the Han Dynasty. Taifu, known as Han Confucian Shusun Tong ​11, was the first to build the Temple of Emperor Gaozu of the Han Dynasty and change Peigong into the original temple of Emperor Gaozu. It was Liu Bang, Emperor Gao of the Han Dynasty, and Liu Ying, the Xiaohui Emperor, the son of Lu Fei, the Queen of Han Dynasty. ​12 The founder of Yixue in the Han Dynasty was Tian He. In the early Han Dynasty, Emperor Hui came to his home to teach him because of his old age. ​13, Cao Sui followed Xiao's rules and implemented the first systematic implementation, which was Empress Lu's mother and son's policy of governing the country by doing nothing. ​<Theory: It was Lu Jia who proposed to Taizu Gao Emperor Liu Bang that he could conquer the world on horseback, but he could not rule the world on horseback. Lu Jia presented new words to Liu Bang ​14, the first crown princess in the history of Chinese imperialism ​The original wife of Emperor Hui of Han Dynasty. /Unrecorded ​15. In the history of Chinese imperial system, the first biological mother of the deceased emperor to be posthumously named queen was Empress Zhaoling. At the same time, he was also admired by Empress Lu. ​16. The first empress dowager in the history of Chinese imperialism ​① She was already the emperor's grandmother, but she still attended the court as the empress dowager. The person who controlled the imperial power was Han Gaohou Lu Pheasant ​17, the first emperor in the history of Chinese imperialism to ascend the throne in childhood: the former young emperor. ​18. The first emperor in Chinese imperial history whose first year after taking the throne was changed from the first year to the first year was: Emperor Hou Shao. ​19. He succeeded Emperor Gaozu and Emperor Hui, who quelled internal rebellions, and succeeded Emperor Jing and Emperor Wu. Finally, he achieved the prosperity of the "Government of Wen and Jing" of the Western Han Dynasty and the glory of the "Great Unification" of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty. He was the pioneer and founder of this glorious historical period. At the same time, he was the first person in the history of Chinese imperial system to show respect and filial piety to the elderly. Respect the elderly, be filial to the mother, taste the soup and medicine, and is also the first brother in the history of the Chinese imperial system who was apparently brother to the Emperor Xiaowen of the Han Dynasty. King Wu had a grudge against Emperor Wen and his son, and the Seven Kingdoms Rebellion broke out three years after Emperor Jing ascended the throne. Liu Bi called himself the Eastern Emperor ​21, the first empress dowager in the history of Chinese imperialism: Emperor Gao's concubine, Emperor Taizong Xiaowen's biological mother: Bo Ji/After Emperor Wen ascended the throne, he became the empress dowager, when Emperor Jing ascended the throne, he became the empress dowager, and Liu Xiu respected Empress Dowager Bo as empress Gao. ​22, the first recorded crown princess in Chinese imperial history. The original wife of Emperor Xiaojing of Han Dynasty/Princess Bo. ​23. The first emperor in Chinese history to use a reign title was Liu Che, Emperor Xiaowu of the Han Dynasty. ​24. Hui, Wen, Jing, and Tian Xia Ning. 25,​1, Qin Shi Huang Ying Zheng ​Father: Emperor Qin Zhuangxiang Ying Zichu Unknown, not formally established as a queen ​3, Prince Qin's infant ​Parents unknown ​Wife: Unknown, not formally established as a queen, has two sons ​4, Chu Yi Emperor Xiong Xin ​Grandson of Chu Huai Wang Xiong Huai ​Wife: unknown, ​5, Han Taizu Gao Emperor Liu Bang ​Founding emperor, father: Supreme Emperor Liu Taigong. Mother: Zhaolinghou ​ Wife: Han Gaohou: Lv Zhi ​ 6, Han Xiaohui Emperor Liu Ying ​ Father: Emperor Gao of Han Dynasty Liu Bang, mother: Han Gaohou:/ps: Gao Zu Yuanpei Lv Zhi ​ The first emperor in the history of Chinese imperialism to inherit the throne as the eldest son as the eldest son ​ Wife: Xiaohui Hou Zhang ​ 7 Han Gaohou Lv Zhi, ​[Han Qian Shao Emperor: Empress Gao was called the heroine, was deposed, and was not recognized ​The first young emperor in Chinese history, the first deposed emperor ​The young emperor of Han Dynasty: deposed ​Wife/Daughter of the Lu family ​9, Emperor Taizong Xiaowen of the Han Dynasty Liu Heng ​Father: Taizu Gao Emperor Liu Bang, mother: Taizu Ji, Emperor Wen's mother: Bo Ji: was later chased as Empress Han Gao ​Wife/Daiwang Queen. Successive spouse: Empress Dou ​10, Emperor Xiaojing of Han Dynasty Liu Qi ​Father: Emperor Taizong Wen Liu Heng, mother: Empress Xiaowen: Dou family ​Original wife: Bo family. The first crown princess in Chinese history. The first deposed queen in Chinese history ​Successor: Queen Xiaojing ​11, Emperor Shizong of the Han Dynasty Liu Che ​Father: Emperor Jing Liu Qi, mother: Queen Xiaojing: Wang family ​1 2. Liu Fuling, Emperor Xiaozhao of the Han Dynasty ​Father: Emperor Wu Liu Che, mother: Empress Jieyu of the Zhao family, revered as the empress dowager ​13, Emperor deposed of the Han Dynasty: Liu He ​King of Changyi→Emperor ​ Ancestor/Emperor Liu Che, ancestor/Empress Xiaowu Mrs. Li ​Father: Liu Kun, mother/ ​14, Emperor Xiaoxuan of Han Dynasty Liu Xun ​Great-grandparents/Emperor Liu Che of Han Dynasty, Wei Zifu ​Born grandparents/Crown Prince: Liu Ju, Shi Liangdi ​Step-grandparents/Emperor Xiaozhao of the Han Dynasty: Liu Fuling, Empress Xiaozhao Shangguan ​15, Emperor Xiaoyuan of the Han Dynasty Liu Shi - the temple name was Deposed ​ ​16, Liu Ao, Emperor Xiaocheng of the Han Dynasty ​17, Liu Xin, Emperor Xiaoai of the Han Dynasty ​18 Liu Xuan, Emperor Xiaoping of the Han Dynasty ​19, Liu Xuan, Emperor Gengshi ​20, Liu Xiu, Emperor Guangwu of the Eastern Han Dynasty ​21, Liu Zhuang, Emperor Xiaoming of Han Dynasty (Later except) Emperor Xiaohe Liu Zhao ​24, Emperor Xiaoshang of the Han Dynasty Liu Long ​25, Emperor Xiaoan of the Han Dynasty Liu Hu ​26, Young Emperor before the Han Dynasty: Liu Yi ​27, Jing Zong/Post-exclusion: Emperor Xiaozhong Liu Bao ​28, Emperor Xiaochong of the Han Dynasty Liu Bing ​29, Emperor Xiaozhi of the Han Dynasty Liu Zuan ​30, Emperor Xiaohuan of the Han Dynasty Liu Zhi ​31, Liu Hong, Emperor Xiaoling of the Han Dynasty ​32, Liu Bian, the Young Emperor of the Later Han Dynasty ​33, Liu Xie, Emperor Xiaoxian of the Han Dynasty

If the protagonist cannot deal with his mother, even if he is established as a prince, it will be the same as in history. Unless the author is prepared to let Emperor Jing kill the mother and save the son, there will be no solution. We must remember that the two Han Dynasties governed the country with filial piety

Getting to the top is not the most difficult thing, the difficult thing is how to do better than the Martial Emperor of the original time and space, otherwise it would be meaningless to travel through time, right?

In the Han Dynasty, filial piety was used to govern the world. Li Ji did not die, causing endless disasters. Even if you become the emperor, she will be the queen mother, so she can cause more trouble. If you don't listen to her, you are unfilial.

Li Ji: Old dog! ! ! Wang Ming, Liu Piao, Dou Ying, Tian Fen, Liu Wu:? ? ? There are such stupid people in the world!

Queen Lu was also killed! She, Empress Dowager Dou, is the elder. Now she has accumulated strength and finally launched a palace coup to wipe out Empress Dowager Dou's family. The harem cannot be overturned. Do the time travelers want to play a scheming game with the harem at the shortest possible chance? ! Then abandon the book immediately!

For any prince who wants to compete for the crown prince, oh no, he wants to grow up normally. Sui Ji's threat to you definitely ranks above your character, origin, appearance and other aspects. Don't talk about fighting for the prince. If you don't protect her, she will offend the emperor and the queen mother one day, and bring disaster to you.

I'm really speechless. I'm getting more and more dumb. I only say a few words about the real thing and talk about a lot of nonsense. I just said a few words and then a lot of trivial things came out. Is there any need to tell this story in the historical circle that Liu Bang couldn't afford a horse? Is there any need to break down the trivial matters of the early Han Dynasty and talk about them in pieces? Who doesn't know? Who in the history circle doesn't know that shit? Each chapter contains a lot of useless science!

The Han Dynasty ruled the world with filial piety, but the biggest problem was that the emperor was placed in this system! The best way is to take away the empress and the emperor's biological mother when the previous emperor dies. In this way, everyone in the world has the obligation to be filial to the emperor, but the emperor will not have the obligation to be filial to anyone! Beyond this system, there is no obstacle

After reading three chapters, I couldn't stand the kind of protagonist who was so obsessed with the word "filial piety", so I became a bastard in ten years.

There are tricks to cheat money every year, but this year there are especially many weird ones. There was a "Group Portrait" article before, where I wrote about one thing from the different perspectives of the protagonist + N supporting characters, and the 100 words were expanded to 1,800 words. Later, there is an "expository text" in the book. After one sentence, it starts with "examples and data." Only the beginning and end of the whole chapter are related to the plot (please note that they are not related to the main line, but simply related to the plot of the novel). The ten words are expanded to 1,800 words. According to your writing method, when Wei Qing and Huo Qubing grow up and fight the Huns, your book will be able to write 10 million words. I understand if I want to make money. The author's approach to the first half of the book is closely related to the main line of the plot. It is a more rigorous method of advancing the plot and has a high degree of logical compatibility. Although it is tiring to watch, it is still a good article. It is better than a mindless article that goes to Southeast Asia and Hawaii in a hundred chapters. What about the second half? It's basically just a rambling explanatory text, not to mention the main plot (fighting the Huns), and even the plot (being an emperor) is almost gone. An official can say so much about restructuring! You rely on your starting point to subscribe to novels and no one can check them for plagiarism, so you copy all kinds of articles and papers without restraint, right? Did everyone use the money from novel subscriptions to learn theoretical knowledge? After reading it, although I skipped the rest and saved some monthly votes, I didn't want to vote for one - my character is too poor. To borrow a sentence often found in novels: The author encourages himself.

History books clearly record that Princess Guantao was very lustful and raised many ducks aged fifteen or sixteen. He often abuses young ducks. As long as he is given a little guidance, someone will take five steps with blood, and he will ignore the changes. She appears to be timid and often brings gifts to visit, but in fact she secretly guides the young ducks and guides them to kill her. Anyway, it won't implicate myself. Once she died, Ah Jiao became a phoenix with its string cut off. The protagonist can change from passive to active and wait quietly to become the prince. Then just be on guard against your younger brothers, and after becoming the crown prince, you can secretly win over the legendary princelings. So what if the emperor knows, as long as he doesn't get involved in military power, nothing will happen. The Nine-Five Supreme is as stable as an old dog! Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty focused on taking care of him, guiding him while he was still young, and making him surrender. It didn't matter even if he didn't accept it. As he became more mature, the emperor said that the deposed prince should at least wait until he makes a mistake. As long as he doesn't do anything, he won't make a mistake and just tolerate it.

After rebirth, I ate the food that the original owner had eaten without knowing it for nothing, and ate it again from the perspective of a prophet.

I really didn't see where Liu Rong was walking on thin ice, I only saw the conjecture of the author of this article. Under the governance of two generations of emperors, Wen and Jing, the overall economic strength of the country in the Han Dynasty was far from the external economic and military strength of the early Han Dynasty. His father, Emperor Jing, suppressed the strength of the vassal clan by internally cutting vassal vassals, and he had no strong brothers to compete with him for the throne. May I ask the author where you feel like walking on thin ice 😒. Every day I imagine that Empress Dowager Dou wants to mess with you. Is the Empress Dowager of the Han Dynasty who has experienced Empress Lu, Emperor Wen, and Emperor Jing really as dim-witted as a peasant woman as you wrote? As the article was written, it became more and more petty. The writing of "Walking on Thin Ice" is like a literary youth moaning carelessly and pretentiously.

Let's not talk about whether the protagonist is scheming, cunning, vicious, and vicious. The second, third, and fourth are only in their early 10s, but are they all so deep-minded? Children in the time-travel novel behave like modern middle-aged and elderly people. Then communicate happily with your uncles and grandparents on an equal footing, just like a year-end friend. It's hard for people nowadays to do that, right? What's more, these elders are all central government officials, local bosses, and senior military and political officials. On the other hand, Lu Bu died at Baimenlou at the age of 48, but in time travel stories there is always a handsome guy under 30 years old, and then he brings into his house famous beauties from history or novels. But I have a rough analysis of Lu Bu's situation. The person who wrote the book is at this age. How could he write about Lu Bu who is in his 40s?

It's not that I won't let you explain it, brothers. Two-thirds of your chapter is an explanation, and you're still looking at the threads!

Since ancient times, how many princes and princes like the protagonist Liu Rong have died instead of ascending to the throne due to various reasons? If it is due to one's own reasons, then that's fine, but because of other reasons, it has to be regretted. From the First Emperor of Qin to Emperor Xuantong of the Qing Dynasty, there were two thousand years of feudal history and more than 400 emperors. Let's not talk about the short-lived princes of the Five Dynasties, let's talk about the great unification, Qin, Han, Jin, Sui, Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing, and few ethnic minorities in the Yuan and Qing Dynasties crossed the clan line. After the death of Qin and Sui Dynasties, Hu Hai Fusu, Yang Guang, Yang Yong and their descendants were also written. In the Han Dynasty, Liu Ying had a long history, and Liu Chang also had his father, Han Gaozu, help him rewrite his destiny in recent years. However, no one cares about Liu Xiang and Liu Rong. Today, there is this book that travels through Liu Rong and rewrites his destiny. The same goes for Liu Xiu and Liu Che. Liu Che, the Great Emperor of Han Dynasty, who wanted to replace him would definitely be hostile to his fans. I hope this book will continue to be written, as long as I don't see you again...

I'm very happy that you can write so well. But I don't like your updates so poorly.

I've long wanted to read a novel about competing for the throne with Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty. Come on, write it.

After the protagonist's operation, I feel that the miracle doctor is casting spells in front of the chess saint. The chess saint will consider giving the miracle doctor a chance to travel with him instead of destroying the protagonist's prince.

It's interesting. I've been reading various works on Qidian where the supporting characters reduce their wits, and this one is very fresh and refined.

The writing is very sophisticated, and it feels like the old author has opened a new account.

It's well written. The characters are well created. They don't seem too deliberate and don't make the characters underdeveloped. It's an excellent historical article. I recommend it!

I liked this book very much at first, and I kept reading it. The more I read, the more I felt something was wrong. There was too much nonsense, and it was not fun at all. Sure enough, I entered the palace.

Very well written, a rare good historical article

It's so good that I wish I could lock the author into a dark room and code dozens of chapters a day

It's refreshing and worth watching.

It's rare to find a readable historical text, a good book