Daily Settlement: Add Some Immortality Starting from Orion

It's understandable to give an opponent an opponent at the beginning, but the person who comes up will control your job. If you can't solve it in a short time, it will be easy to persuade him to quit. After all, your golden finger relies on development, but if you give an opponent casually, you can have no food, so there is no need to talk about development.

It looks good, I hope the author will continue to work hard!

There are too many elements. Attribute points, skill points, experience points... Their additions are different. There are already several skills, and some talents are also included, such as beast taming, guardianship, eagle eye... Which are additional points that separate the details separately. It's really not necessary. A golden finger, there are so many elements, I wish I could tell the readers all the settings in one breath... It is difficult to have the patience to read it word by word and understand it clearly. Go straight to the topic for easy reading. This is why the other books, Goldfinger, are so concise. As soon as you see the settlement panel, say it once every day and say it again after adding it. Then it appears again in two or three chapters. This complicated cheat appears too often and makes readers feel that the plot is too broad and insincere. The most important thing is that the plot is dragging. The protagonist's murderous revenge, his own woman being bullied, all blocked the door of the house... Brother Tiger's part was dragged out again, and in the end, after more than thirty chapters, the protagonist did not get revenge for anything. If you find an opportunity to kill Brother Tiger directly and let out the anger that the protagonist has been holding back, the reader will save half of his life. Then there will be another five chapters of "Hard Training", and a plan to kill the Qian family, and satisfactorily deal with the problems that the protagonist encountered in about thirty chapters. The plot rhythm, ups and downs, conflict points, contradictions, emotional care, etc. Are all taken into account. Isn't this great?

Looking at the introduction, is it an imitation of Taohuasu's book "Immortality Begins with Orion"?

It lacks basic logic, and the story only comes from women. The daily settlement is just too much, and the conflict design is too catchy. You can roughly understand the plot at a glance. The writing technique is still lacking, and it doesn't look down on the feeling and can't be brought into it.