
After Talking About the Magical World, Why Do You Start Practicing Qi?
说好魔法世界,怎么开始练气了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 142k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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65Chapters
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The 140,000-word story ended up being a poison
Just like the title... The drug guide is really getting more and more popular... The 140,000-word collapse-completed book was actually promoted...
I've caught up on the latest one, which happens to be a plot point, so I'll just post some of my thoughts after reading it. The writing style is a bit different from the title style. I thought it was a relaxed and funny style, but the writing style is unexpectedly a bit traditional western fantasy. Overall, I feel that the writing style is not straightforward enough, the paragraphs are too long, and there are many complex sentence patterns. There are more detailed descriptions and the plot progresses relatively smoothly. The overall feeling is different from the current online writing style. It may be related to the author's writing habits. There is a certain reading threshold, which may limit the audience scope. In other words, reading this book requires more concentration, rather than just scanning the book to know the plot development. In addition, as a single article, it is recommended that the author grasp the distance between the heroine and other male characters, otherwise it may be a poisonous point for some readers.
Well, it's definitely authors from other places who came to Qidian. After a quick look, the audience for male videos in Qidian is definitely very small.
Some thoughts
There are too many characters, which makes it look labely and flat. More descriptions of appearance, the characters in the book feel the same, not distinct. Multiple segments, long segments cannot be seen clearly, and it is easy to see the crimson king. Describing more details of daily life will help enrich the characters.
Some questions about the work
First of all, thank you to those who clicked on this book. Seeing that some friends are worried in the comments, Mai Cha will give a brief explanation. This article is firmly non-CP, and you will only be single by the end! ! Love will only delay the protagonist's cultivation! ! ! Finally, I hope that friends who have seen it will collect it and read the latest chapters~~ Especially the reading on Tuesday is so important to Maicha! Maicha is reading everyone's comments and responding to them one by one. It is not easy to grow small saplings, your support is the driving force for the renewal of Maicha I hope you will support me more~~ Read, read, read~ (づ ̄3 ̄)づ╭❤~
Please read it, collect it, and recommend it! It would be better if you can have a monthly pass
Friends, please collect it and recommend it. The most important thing is to pursue reading. Friends who keep books, please help me get the latest chapter on Tuesday. . . This is so important to MaiCha... Your support is the driving force for MaiCha to update. Please, friends. . . You are the glory of the Creator, the lushness that never changes in the four seasons, and the gentle wind in the mountains and seas. This is the best dream that Mai Cha has had in all his years.
An extremely poisonous resume. No wonder those bosses like to read resumes. A good-looking resume can help you find a good job.
Is he so weak in the foundation building stage? Physical strength 10 and agility 7. These two are not even as good as ordinary ones. It is recommended to strengthen the protagonist's physical fitness and agility.
I still hope that the protagonist will use Collins' body to cultivate a clone early, and then summon Collins' soul to return Collins' body to its original owner. Then the protagonist's soul will use the clone to practice, and then appoint Collins as an assistant. After all, it is very inconsistent to always occupy someone else's body. As for the issue of memory, it belongs to the brain cell memory and will not affect Collins' soul.
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Good looking more updates
It seems that the current intelligent system is very unpleasant
What a pity
Is this the end? It's a pity. I hope the author can bring better stories in the future