These Abilities Are Really Awesome

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​Also, according to the above post, most people want Xiaoyu to have a single female lead. Personally speaking (Cheese's personal opinion), if Xiaoyu has a single female lead, the first part about Xiaoyu needs to be revised I read the latest chapter in one breath, and I couldn't connect the man-eating eye roll in the front with the weak Xiao Yu in the back, because the first impression was immediate. The author probably thought of it, or intended it, to write Xiao Yu as a dual personality. This may dilute the weirdness, but at least for me, the dilution is not very diluted. (But in fact, my favorite in this book is Xiao Yu. Xiao Yu's character is really lovable. I beg the author to shape it well in the future.) And there is cannibalism. The author writes that Xiao Yu eats people, at least eating wood and rocks. I forgot about it before, but it seems to imply that he used to eat people, just like eating wood and rocks. I hope it can be changed later, because after reading that paragraph, several questions popped up in my mind: Does Xiao Yu eat people, men or women? When you eat a man, will you eat the man's work? Will Xiaoyu feel so oily that he feels like vomiting after eating a greasy middle-aged man?        ，，，，（，）      and, is this article a daily love story? Or a horror novel? Does the author have an outline? I always feel that the supernatural part does not work well with so many daily routines, especially the part where the official fights against the supernatural. While saying that Mu Shi may be a tyrant and preparing to take action to kill him, at the same time, nothing has been done in the past ten chapters of daily life, and the efficiency cannot be said Bottom, I can only say that there is no, it feels like the top does not pay attention to the supernatural (if you write a love story, please make sure the male and female protagonists pull it, give out more candy, and add a female lead who will regret and be miserable for life, this flavor will be right😋) Then there is the issue of the male protagonist. I always feel that Mu Shi is like Denji, being controlled by the small head. While teasing Xiao Yu, he is having fun with Sister Tong. There is no sense of boundaries. You can either say that Xiao Yu has always been your sister, or you can say that Mu Shi is bad and only wants Sister Tong's money, and you are only loyal to one side. But the fact is that while Shi was thinking about Xiao Yu, he was having an affair with Sister Tong, which seemed a little guilty (Brother Cheng: What, are you thinking about me?). This was not pure love at all (Zhen Sheng). Bau once said that only one-to-one love is pure love. If you talk about pure love while having a harem, then pure love is just pure love. Therefore, the author must remember to ask for or, not and Also, regarding writing, based on the experience of a reader who went from elementary school to college, I suggest that authors should be extra careful when writing about the psychology of characters, because I think many authors are not very good at writing and then write it by force. As a result, they write too much, and write out all the psychology they imagined, and fix the emotions and thoughts of the characters. For me who read the novel For other readers who love fantasy like me, this undoubtedly blocks our imagination space, and the biggest advantage of words compared with images is imagination space. For me, blocking the imagination space will make this novel at least half less interesting, so the author must be careful This is the first time I have written such a long book review suggestion. I hope it will be of great use to the author. Finally, I hope that the author will be full of ideas and update more

When I saw people swallowing banknotes, I thought of Zimbabwe. If I swallowed one trillion banknotes, I would become the richest man.

It's watchable, but there are a lot of minor flaws. The horror story is quite well written. The protagonist's IQ is sometimes high and sometimes low. I suggest that the protagonist's IQ be fixed, and there are also simulation options to polish it. Anyway, the future is promising.

The biggest problem of this book is that the protagonist, as an adult with a mental age of 30 years and who has been working in society for many years, often does not meet the performance of an adult, especially when he has information about the future for ten years. Not to mention getting rich, he should be able to deal with others at least with his classmates and familiar people. With this advantage, he should be able to deal with girls, whether they are precocious or innocent, at least not at a disadvantage. However, I don't know if the author forgot the setting or to highlight the female role, this is not revealed.

The main line is sandwiched in daily life, which is really courageous.

When I read the introduction, I thought I had super powers or something, but when I read a few chapters, they were all women, and I was very disappointed.

If nothing else, I just want the United States to experience the feeling of not being able to buy a bag of bread for $500,000. $500,000 cannot even fit in a carriage.

Can't you see through the women's bathroom in a public bathhouse without wearing clothes?

I just didn't know what to write... I wrote the main plot in the daily routine. I was obviously going to investigate the anomaly, and then I just posted a few daily routines.

This protagonist not only doesn't look reborn, he doesn't even look like a living person.

Like the title, the main plot should be about being reborn and falling in love. The special abilities are just embellishments. Anyone who has read it can refute me. Thank you.

I read a few of them. Let's not talk about the plot. Has the author really experienced the era of PHS? Prices are simply unbearable. What is the price of a 20-piece meal in the high school cafeteria? You must know that 5-6 years after PHS was eliminated, a serving of stir-fried cold skin in a small shop only costs 5 yuan. 1-2 Years after PHS was eliminated, I spent about 60 a week on accommodation.

There is only one thing that I cannot understand. . After the woman at the beginning ate the protagonist alive. . . The protagonist can still go to the class reunion and come out smiling. . . . Why is the protagonist a social beast? Why isn't Batman from Hidden Humans plus King Dragon returning? All subsequent stories turned into imbecile and mentally retarded in this plot.

I've already thought about the scene of a thousand dollars going in and out of the pig's trotters' mouth, send it to me

It's hard for me to say about this multiple personality.

They were all eaten, and I didn't feel anything. When it was over, I rushed up like a licking dog. I looked at more than 20 pictures and ran away.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

The book was written upside down. She just ate the front part, and then he ran to deliver the book to her? What, do you want to be eaten again?

Why does he have a foot fetish now that he is a protagonist?

If you have any interesting abilities, you can keep them. Xiaozhu's hair is about to fall out if he thinks about abilities, and most of the abilities he comes up with are a bit confusing 🐷