Behind the Scenes in Tokyo: Obtain Immortality at the Start

I really couldn't help myself when I saw that 30-story building weighing hundreds of tons. Brother, let's just say that if you don't understand data sorting, you can just brush it off in one go. It's really too poisonous that the difference is so big. Modern building standards for two units, four households per floor, cost around several hundred tons.

The character of the protagonist is not very clear. A person has superpowers. How did he do it? Those who have a straight face are those who commit suicide. Even if the panel says that you can be resurrected, if you are resurrected, you will be resurrected. What if you cannot be resurrected? What if you die? Why do you trust the panel so much? What if I was hallucinating? After all, you only have one life.

Let me make a neutral evaluation of this novel. Let me first introduce the plot. In short, it is about a fun person who travels to the parallel world of Tokyo, Japan. He doesn't know why he gets super powers every day, so he decides to play with the world for fun. After reading seventy chapters, let me tell you my opinion. The shortcoming of this book is that between group portraits and daily life, he chose abstraction. This novel clearly talks about the behind-the-scenes flow (not that I am alone, and I don't say this is a poisonous point), but he is too dedicated and dedicated, and every time Tsutomu rolled up his sleeves and went on stage. When he gained the ability to grant skills to others in Chapter 50, I thought he was finally going to reach the extreme level, but he ended up doing it himself. In addition, does every Tokyo behind-the-scenes article have to have several female characters stressing over it at the beginning? Even if he introduces his younger sister, the first incident is about a woman appearing, and there are more later... This is a poisonous point. It's not that he hates women, but that the opposite sex is always involved in feelings... And the personality charm is written. His problem is that he clearly wants to write group portraits, but why are there so many in daily life? ! Therefore, I evaluate this book as somewhat abstract and based on my personal understanding. The advantages... This is a behind-the-scenes story (I like to read it). There is really nothing to see in Chapter 70, but the main line of the plot is on the right track in Chapter 61, and the lifespan will probably last for a while... I hope the author can write wonderfully and work more on the characterization and plot of the group portraits. Suggestion: Daily life is a good way to portray the protagonist (don't write too much). It is recommended that the author write out the epileptic side of the protagonist (don't become too epileptic and become a psychopath). Don't engage in emotional lines, which are just a mess in the behind-the-scenes flow. Write more group portraits. If it is not possible, go to the anime to find a few lovable characters, around the main plot or independent small plot set by the author.

There should be more abilities awakened later, right? The immortal body that has been awakened so far seems to be of little use. Apart from taking a beating, it seems to have average combat power. I hope that some combat abilities can be awakened later to improve the protagonist's combat power, which will make it more enjoyable.

And there's that little gangster. Is the protagonist suppressed by them? Kill people without injustice or enmity. Even if they are gangsters. You want to take advantage of their money. There's not that much hatred. It has to be said that he killed the whole family. In a US military that. You are here to get information. So arrogant? If you are a person with superpowers, are you not afraid that others also have superpowers? He was so arrogant and flew straight down to the entrance. And they killed and injured nearly 300 people. How can this be covered up? And why is this? Does it make sense? Isn't it okay to sneak in and check the information yourself?

The readers who deserve the behind-the-scenes leaks have no books to read. Everyone is really fucking capable.

I found that the behind-the-scenes story is really... And I can't finish it at all.

Two days ago, I just hung up a Tokyo to do whatever I wanted, and today I discovered a new continent. I have never seen a solitary novel with a finale, except for the old eunuch Tokyo Hokage. Oh, there is also a book about traveling between two realms, my Lilliputian modern crazy troublemaker and the man behind the 300-pound smile. Over the years, I have met about 8 authors who have written solitary novels about Tokyo, and their results have always been miserable. A common problem is that writing about group portraits always leads to a serious sense of fragmentation in harem writing. Obviously, the writing style cannot be used to play with the vase.

The creativity is very good and the writing is okay, but the plot is crap, and the author often forgets the previous descriptions, causing inconsistencies.

In fact, this is already the best among the latest similar novels. Unfortunately, it cannot be updated.

It can be regarded as a standard refreshing novel. The rhythm control is quite good. Although it is a new book by a newcomer, the level is actually online. At least the control of refreshing points is in place. If the update is faster, I will definitely follow this book. Another question, will the protagonist always be strong and invincible?

The last one who was immortal has been raised as a little medicine girl.

Let's not talk about anything else. What's the point of unconditionally controlling 99 people with the mind and adding a seemingly smart 24 hours. You gave this at the beginning, but you still had to create some inexplicable conflicts later to find information, and you were hypnotized all the way. You might as well write about hypnosis and brainwashing a passerby so that he thinks he is the protagonist, and it would be more interesting to give him some abilities.

What is the protagonist hiding? Do you like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger so much?

It's not this book, it's another book added to the bookshelf in the same batch. The book is called the Way of Heaven or something, and the protagonist becomes the Way of Heaven at the beginning. . Yesterday I posted a comment in the book review section of that book, but today I found that it was deleted and banned. . . 666 Anyway, if the comment is deleted for discussing the matter in the comment area, the book will definitely be deleted. Readers and writers choose each other. . . The author of that book chose an ordinary adult who suddenly got a golden finger and became an immortal in one step. I would say that the subsequent plot was unreasonable. Since the protagonist was an ordinary adult before he got the golden finger, the protagonist's previous social interactions, the people he disliked, his work colleagues, and the protagonist's relatives and friends are all blank, which seems false. . . I hope the author will pay attention and give it a brief summary at the end. Compared with My God's Clone that I have watched, after the protagonist got the golden finger, the so-called big brother of the underworld who opened a shop to bully the protagonist and collected money was solved by the secular power to please the protagonist without the protagonist having to do anything. There are also the protagonist's friends, colleagues, classmates and other family members, who all actively and passively benefit from following the protagonist's enlightenment and becoming an immortal. This is very real and realistic. Similar novels are also available in the portable space. People are social beings, and this sentence also applies to novel creation.

I'll rub it, it's a masterpiece! There were some flaws when the purpose was not clear at the beginning, but it was so exciting when the black ball space was opened later, and it fully demonstrated the sense of superiority that dominates other people's life and death.

It's really good to watch. Although the plot of the protagonist is a bit toxic at the beginning, the collision between superpowers and modern weapons in the black sphere space becomes more and more exciting. I really admire the author's military knowledge. As a reader who just came from Tomato, I was really shocked.

So demi-humans are a character setting in Japanese comics, right? If they are immortal at the beginning, wouldn't there be many invincible plots later? I am looking forward to what the author will write next.