Wu Dong Qian Kun: Encounter with Qingtan at the Beginning

Author, where are you? Hurry, update soon

Author, is your protagonist a eunuch? Qingtan couldn't follow, and Ling Qingzhu asked her to sense the fetus of the plane, but you arranged for her master to interrupt. She could tell Qingzhi about the Yuanmen's collusion with the strange demons. You said you told the Palace Master Taiqing about the ancestral talisman. Is it difficult for her to use the Taishang Sensing Technique based on her respect for the ancestral talisman? But if you don't say these things, it's very frustrating, you know?

Hey, I have no idea of ​​​​watching anymore. The protagonist still doesn't have the character of a strong person, so he slipped away. Now in this state, he is still a child who is severely restrained by his family. I am also speechless.

After reading it, I feel that the main character does not have his own system. He just learns whatever skills are useful, and there is too little actual combat, and his actual combat ability is worrying. The mirror of good fortune beat Lin Langtian in the Qi creation state and even used the Devouring ultimate move. It seemed too low and unqualified. It is not difficult to change. Draw a lottery and draw a complete kendo inheritance. It is said to be the powerful inheritance of the kendo sect in ancient times. The sect was destroyed by the fear of strange demons. The inheritance carrier can be an inheritance formation disk, which has a space that can be entered with the soul body. There are some transformed people in each level, and you have to kill them before you can pass the level to learn new moves. In this way, you can learn new moves and exercise your actual combat ability. The protagonist can focus on swordsmanship, supplemented by mental power. In the future, he can create some mental sword moves by himself, such as staring at others and sending out a small sword from his eyes to fly over and kill some soldiers. Wouldn't this make him more powerful?

Jiang Yinyin, please keep it with you from now on. She has obviously recovered her memory, but she pretends not to know anything in order to stay with the protagonist. It's very pleasant to think about it.

After reading Chapter 173, I feel that the protagonist is useless and has no bright spots. The talent is said to be the highest level. However, upgrading depends entirely on the opportunity of the original work. Without it, there is no way to break through. In terms of character, he is forward-thinking and does not have a strong mentality. Compared with the original work, Lin Dong is really worse than Lin Dong. Many times he behaves like a clown.

As mentioned by some book friends before, the protagonist does not have the strong character of a strong person, and the protagonist has no mental growth. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist and the original Lin Dong fought in the same realm, and the protagonist was completely defeated The plot is also forcibly advanced, and I will not write some of my own things I generally like to listen to books, and I occasionally hear some frowning passages in this book. In short, you can read it if you can tolerate it

Many people say that Xiaoyan is unnecessary. I don't deny this, but the point is not whether it is necessary, but whether it is worth it. I can't convince others why they don't bring Xiaoyan. After all, it has great potential and a high return ratio. Bringing it will definitely not be worse than not bringing it. Its talent positioning is a bit like the Little Medical Fairy and Qinglin in Dou Po, and it is even easier to cultivate than the Little Medical Fairy (there is no calamitous poison body, just feed some monster corpses, and the martial arts has Xiao Diao) In fact, the Little Medical Fairy is not necessary in Dou Po, but why do you hardly see anyone saying that they don't need to bring the Little Medical Fairy, or that even if they do, no one will say anything? What is the difference between them? The difference is that Xiao Yixian and Qing Lin are two cute girls, while Xiao Yan is a tough and rough guy, and cannot provide that kind of emotional value at all. (He can actually call you brother, like Water Margin) Although I know some people will say that they don't need to bring the Little Medical Fairy, but believe me, if Xiaoyan is a martial arts heroine, if he doesn't need to bring him, then there will be a lot less noise. So... Does anyone want Xiao Yan to be the heroine?

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How did the author write the four words "wolf-hearted, dog-lunged" and "white-eyed wolf" so vividly? I saw Aya Qingzhu on the front foot begging the protagonist to save her sect leader, and on the back foot crossing the river and demolishing the bridge to ask if it was worthy.

It is also a must-have place for Lin tribe time travellers. If I don't write it like this, I won't be able to write it. Basically, ten of the ten fan stories are here.

It's better to read the original book. The main character's route is similar to that of Lin Dong.

There is no need to keep focusing on the few opportunities in the original work. After tens of thousands of years in the Tianxuan Continent, there must be many opportunities. The author should try to write about one or two opportunities other than the original work, such as the ruins of the sect that were destroyed by strange demons. There is actually a lot that can be written. This is a good opportunity to practice writing and learn to create your own. After you finish writing, read it over first to see if there is any conflict with the previous article. If it is awkward, revise it.

Is the protagonist incompetent? Hurry up and collect Ling Qingzhu, stop being so annoying.

What should I do if I like Huanhuan and Xiaoxiao🙂🙂🙂

Throughout the book, the protagonist's name is changed from "Lin Dong" to "Lin Sheng". The exercises and opportunity copies are all the same, with an extra lottery trick added to make the protagonist's path smoother.

The combat power in the original work is so fascinating. To be honest, it is a miracle that the Demon Realm did not unify the Tianxuan Continent. In the original work, excluding the eight ancient lords and the strange demons, the human side only has the Reincarnation Mirror in the Palace of Darkness. The other strongest forces are the group wheel-turning wheels. On the other hand, in the Demon Realm, every big clan has the wheel-turning mirror. Not to mention the stronger family, are there any? There is only one Samsara Mirror, but the combined total of the East, West, and North Mysterious Domains is only one or two Samsara Mirrors and a dozen or so Samsara Mirrors. It is ridiculous that the Samsara Mirrors can even compete with the two-digit Samsara Mirror. It should be able to compete with hundreds of demon realms. In the original work, he is the Dongxuan Domain. He dares to rely on the eight major parties to mark the demon realm. It is outrageous.

Oops, actually I exaggerate this supreme power a bit too much. The Supreme Power is strong, but not so strong. You can see it when you look at Lin Dong's battle against the Seven Kings Hall. At that time, Lin Dong was already very strong. With supreme power, he could barely compete with the Seven Kings Palace. This was too exaggerated. Ling Qingzhu grew up too fast. In the original work, he was able to reach the Wheel Mirror because all the Nine Heavens Taiqing Palace's sacrifices were sacrificed by his master. This was too exaggerated. And the hang-up is too big. It's not that easy to master the facial fetus, and the thing has some consciousness of its own. Just like in the original work, he doesn't recognize Fu Zu and recognizes Lin Dong. Isn't it because he is a native of his own plane? It shows that he has some basic consciousness of his own. I just took it out casually and it felt so relaxing. In the later stage, Ying Huanhuan was always stronger than Lin Dong and Ling Qingzhu, which can be seen from the final duel. Lin Dong couldn't defeat the Heavenly King's Palace at that time, and Ling Qingzhu couldn't even defeat him at that time. The protagonist now is not as good as Lin Dong at that time because his mental power at that time was at the divine palace level. As a result, the feeling you give me now is that Ling Qingzhu is too exaggerated, and it feels like he can kill the Heavenly King Palace instantly. In the later stage, his ability to reach the sky is almost the same as the Mirror of Samsara, but not that strong, so you can take advantage of this. The whole Eight Ancient Lords and the protagonist are like a joke. It's too exaggerated for you to adjust.

You only update this little, how can you have perfect attendance?

Although there are some minor flaws at the beginning, they are innocuous, but when it comes to the ancient battlefield Huanjian Mountain, the plot begins to be a bit difficult to describe.

No, I've booked them all. It's about to end and it's for the eunuch, right?🙂

Let's talk about whether the author writes about the world

If there is no blockage in front of you, be prepared to use it as a background. It is worth watching. Just go to whoring for free.