Peerless Tang Sect Ice Dragon God of War

If you don't have a harem in Loveland, you have to accept a few heroines who are resistant to you. It is convenient for one person to achieve enlightenment in the later period, and chickens and dogs to ascend to heaven. Because the love brain is the most reliable. Moreover, the God Realm is full of disgusting people. The other gods are pretty good. Destruction of justice also wants to develop the divine world. Don't drive away from God Realm. No need. After all, there are factions in the divine world too

Some suggestions from the author First, change Wuhun's two-headed dragon into a single-headed one, which will help Huo Yuhao in the future. Huo Yuhao is still kind-hearted in the early stage, but don't worry about his situation later. Everyone has his own ambitions. Second, Shrek School's brainwashing technology is top-notch, and they will do whatever it takes to win the ten thousand-year honor. For example, Huo Yuhao in the original book cheated and opened a million-year soul skill for mental detection sharing. This is meaningless at all, so don't owe Shrek a favor. What I don't understand the most in the original work is that each generation of Poseidon Pavilion Masters must be integrated into the golden ancient tree after death. In fact, it provides fuel for Ah Yin. Third, the ambitions of the Sun and Moon Empire are overwhelming. Does the protagonist want to help the three empires or the Sun and Moon Empire? It's worth considering. The treasure spots in the original work include the Ice and Fire Eyes and the Dragon Valley. However, the Dragon Valley is in the Star Luo Continent, which is quite far away from the Douluo Continent. The soul bones inside are very helpful to the protagonist.

Author, give you some advice. Ning Tian's relationship must be handled well. Ning Tian is the princess of the Qibao Glazed Sect. If she and the protagonist are together, who do you think will be the main character of the protagonist? It would be unfair to Ling Luochen if she were to be the main character's main wife. Your childhood sweetheart has been with you since childhood, and she gave up her love for you. She worked hard and trained several times harder than others for many years, just to be with you. We readers can't see this. And no matter who you accept, Ling Luochen must be the main palace, otherwise he will be unkind and unjust. If she is not the protagonist's main palace, she is the young sect master of Qibao Liuli. She has consumed the sect's best and most resources since she was a child. She is also the sect master's heart treasure and the little princess of a group of elders in the clan. Even if she is willing to be a concubine, the clan probably won't let her. After all, the Qibao Glazed Sect is just a little weak, not in decline. It's always someone else who gets married, and even if it's a marriage, I don't think they would let their princess be their concubine. If you want to say that it was the little princess Ning Tian who forced the sect to accept her like Ning Rongrong in the first movie, then just pretend that I didn't say that. If Ma Xiaotao wants to be accepted, his character must also be dealt with. Ma Xiaotao was adopted by Shrek since he was a child. His teacher is a Super Douluo, and there are also a bunch of Super Douluo who are very good to him. Because of her martial spirit, she has a fiery personality and has been pampered since she was a child. No one bullied her in Shrek. She is still a genius and no one can surpass her in practice. It can be said that she is used to being overbearing. From the original plot of Huo Yuhao and Ling Luochen to suppress the evil fire, we can get a glimpse of it. They did not respect their will at all. It was later that the three of them forcibly arranged a "bathroom with ice and fire" plot for Huo Yuhao before they recognized Huo Yuhao as his younger brother. From the evil fire rampage when she first appeared, it can be seen that she did not even listen to the teacher's words. The evil fire rampage caused by secretly interfering in private was a woman who even risked her life for the sake of a momentary dispute (soul power level among peers). It can also be seen that she is a proud phoenix who does not want to be inferior to others. It doesn't matter whether she agrees with how many women her man has. Even if she agrees, she will definitely compete for the position of the main palace. So how to tame this phoenix and make her obey the male protagonist's words with her arrogant head is a test of the author's writing skills. I have never seen any author write it well. Basically, they are all accepted without thinking. They are all impressed by the protagonist's domineering spirit.

The heroine just accepts them all Children only make choices, adults want them all

Give the author some suggestions. One: The soul power is slowly improving. You can write it down clearly. It's free. Just give it a few bucks. You can start from the fact that the martial spirit is too strong and the upgrade is slow; another martial spirit requires a lot of support, such as absorbing ten energy, and the other martial spirit grabs eight energy, so as not to delay the later improvement speed; body refining requires a lot of time, and at the same time, you can withstand more energy after refining the body, and can absorb more soul rings at more levels. Two: When going to Shrek Academy, the protagonist definitely wants the fairy grass. In order to get it easily, he contacted Tang Ya, so he will definitely go to Shrek Academy. This point is made directly. In the short review, I explained that there are very few people who read it, and the free chapters in the early stage are not bad at all. I will also explain it directly here. Three: Cheating should be reasonable. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, he must become a god. He will definitely face Tang San here, and Tang San has been the Shura god for ten thousand years, so he must cheat if he wants to win. I don't know if the author has seen Dou Si. The single-attribute dragon kings in it are all at the level of god kings, and are almost invincible at the same level. No matter how powerful the God Shura is, he can only be tied with one. The author should pay attention to what kind of god the protagonist is. Also, please pay attention to the self-created god position. The author wrote that the Douluo plane was blocked in order to get rid of Tang Gou's control. The protagonist here can completely unify the Douluo and then collect faith to become a god.

Don't lick Shrek, just go to Shrek and get the heroine

Ignore the comments that are clamoring for downgrades, they are just a bunch of idiots who only read Invincible's cool articles. Don't let the protagonist be too invincible. He must suffer some setbacks and polishing, shed blood, and be frustrated. This is a necessary part of growth. The more powerful the martial spirit, the higher the price it will cost to upgrade. Just upgrade normally. Don't be too out of touch with the strength of the rest of the protagonist group, otherwise it will feel like you are not the protagonist group, but one person carrying a lot of burdens, and the sense of fragmentation is too strong. It doesn't matter how old the protagonist is before he is reborn, or how mature his mind should be. After all, he was an ordinary person in his previous life and did not have super strength. When he gained great power, he must have had some mental imbalances, which can be corrected. Otherwise, it would be too outrageous to directly mature the mind. It would be OK to complete the story from the perspective of a young man with a more mature mind. If you want to see the growth of this protagonist group!!!, You can be arrogant but don't be too crazy. Be happy when you should be happy, be impulsive when you should be, and don't lower your IQ. Come on come on! 😃 This is a very good book so far. Let me talk a little bit about the poisonous points that I think the author can choose to avoid. 1. Any weak person who comes out will inexplicably have great malice towards the protagonist. I don't think it's necessary to use this kind of plot to highlight the strength of the protagonist, it's a bit deliberate. 2. "The right person will get more help, but the wrong person will get less help" Because of some small conflicts, there is a great feeling of rejection and disgust towards other forces. It is best not to have such plots as exterminating the family at every turn, coming to the door to "collect debts, threatening" and so on. Win over some forces and form friendly relations. (Even if you are strong, don't be too arrogant - it looks very brainless) 3. Easily draw a tie or offend with an old strong person (a strong person in the true sense). After all, he is not a mediocre person after living for so many years. He was also very talented when he was young and cannot be too useless (except for a certain Supreme Elder) Small conflicts can be resolved as long as they can be resolved. ...... That's about it. Come on, author, you must finish writing! Recommended!!! Good book, good book.

For people with high talent, soul tools in the Dou Er period are just a waste of time. As long as you know how to use them, there is no need to learn them. Don't think that you must learn them after Huo Yuhao learned them. Your martial arts are awesome enough and they will be turned into scum.

Tianmeng is the biggest bug. Logically speaking, it should have turned into a butterfly long ago. It will still be a silkworm baby for a million years. And the butterfly should be female. It must have been tampered with by the little bastard

Don't choose this heroine, Ning Tian can't go back after watching the anime 😭

Well, why should I talk to Mr. Mu about not being a native of Douluo Star?

7, It has become a stallion novel, you can collect 3 more to complete it. Alas, I was quite optimistic about it at first. My clairvoyance has seen the future (sad)

I don't understand the point of going to Shrek Academy. If something unexpected happens, everything will be ruined. Tianhu starts the game. He can obviously just go to Shrek Academy, but in the end, he will have to let others take action...

The writing is not bad, the writing style is okay, I hope the cashier dragon king and the auspicious beast will be the same.

Let me give you some advice: should you briefly mention the emotional scenes or focus on describing them!

Author, I would like to discuss some issues with you regarding the settings of some characters. There are a little too many female protagonists. To be honest, so many female protagonists cannot highlight the passion of the protagonist. At most, I think he looks like a scumbag. Secondly, with so many heroines, it is not possible to create a rich and three-dimensional character image, and it will become one protagonist with one or two main heroines and a bunch of accessories.                                                                                                                                                                              Female characters who have not yet touched on strong emotions can be downplayed or treated as secret loves. The emotional conflicts and undercurrents will be richer, making the story more three-dimensional. I think the issue of how many heroines there is still serves the plot, the protagonist's personal characterization, and consideration of one's own writing ability. You can initiate a poll in a group or in a book club circle, and limiting it to two or three female protagonists is enough. (Unless the protagonist is actually a stallion) After all, this is a male channel, not a female channel (a large emotional drama). When writing about many female protagonists, it is inevitable to spend a lot of space on the emotional line (Judging from past experience, this approach will not produce a good result), which will make people feel watery and easily deviate from the main line. This book is a book that I like very much from the setting and early stage of the plot, so I hope it can be better. Of course, it is difficult to agree with everyone, and my views are not necessarily correct, but I can provide you with a direction and ideas. I hope the author can think more about it. Perfecting such a fine story. (Fan fantasy requires the majority of female characters to be included in the harem, which is a "vulgar" rule. Rather than abiding by it, it is better to break it, which is more honorable. Put all your energy on three or four characters. Build up their image. , Enriched and full, I think it is much better than writing a bunch of "flat people". In fact, the author does not need to pay attention to those comments that clamor to "take it all in", "see the river of blood in the Shura field" and "open the harem").

I don't understand why the heroine has to have witchcraft style

Have you ever been a nanny for Gou Huo again?

Can Senior Rabbit's dermatitis be cured even after being prescribed?

The protagonist's name is a bit hasty

Generally speaking, it's okay. It's not overly pressured on level or combat power. It will also give some explanations, but sometimes the explanations from God's perspective are a bit strange. There are some Douluo common sense mistakes but it doesn't affect the reading. You can read it. If you like single/no heroine, you don't need to read it.

Ten-thousand-year soul bones are no longer worth money. All the random competitions have ten-thousand-year soul bones as rewards.

When will Chapter 137 be completed?