Stats
0Monthly votes
3.8kRecommends
6.2kFans
171Chapters
Tags
Synopsis
Reader comments
Readers also read
Is There Any Limit to This Engineer's Military Research and Development?
Peninsula: the Insomniac Artist Is Connected
What Do You Mean I Am a Warmonger!
1979 Once Upon a Time in the Northwest
Never Walk Alone!
People Are in Huayu, and the System Says They Are in the Heavens
I Picked up the Skills from Celebrities and I Am Invincible
Daming: Have I Become Wanli's Portable Grandfather?
I Am Drawing a Hot-Blooded Episode in the Zhiyu Episode!
Actor: Thank You
China Entertainment 2006: I Come from the First Saint Demon Sect
China Entertainment: I Have a Game Panel
This Director Has Great Style
Chubby
.
Zeng Li
🍐🍐🍐
It was very confusing to read, and there were many incomprehensible sentences. I haven't understood this book after reading it for a long time 😅😅😅
Beauty
Suddenly I can't understand. These chapters are like a stream of consciousness. Are you talking in your sleep?
It's okay, but the shortcomings are obvious, the timeline is a bit messy, the narrative ...
The plot is okay, but it looks a bit awkward, I don't know why.
It's so stream-of-consciousness, it's quite artistic. The ones that can be seen are more or less young people, the kind of niche people.
This book is very tiring to read, it is a pure stream of consciousness, the sentences do not make sense, the plot is okay, the author can change the writing style, the plot and the writing are really useless.
The story is okay, but the narration is barely interesting and a bit confusing.
How should I put it? It's a bit stream-of-consciousness. I can watch it, but do I have to listen carefully?
This plot setting is pretty fucked up.
The plot of this book is good and I like all the female characters, but the writing is very obscure.
There's something wrong with the writing, I don't want to read it anymore
The structure is okay, but I can't see it.
Your novel looks really tiring.
The concept is good, but the sentences are not fluent, the writing is too poor, the narrative is not strong, and the plot description is not good.
It's too much trouble
Do you have any teeth? I won't watch it anymore
More than a hundred chapters haven't been released yet? Don't dare to raise it anymore
Now there are more than 100,000 words, and it is estimated that there are 10,000 of them.
If you change it well, it would be better if it can be faster.
Today's No. 1
It's so annoying to listen to the book one by one
It's really difficult for writers who write about entertainment to find so many homophones.
Does the system reward physical attributes?
Sorry to cut it.
The original intention when I started the book was very good, but the writing power was not enough and it was also affected by external forces. In short, if the foundation is not done well, if I continue to write, it will only become a mess.