Does This Immortal Have to Be Cultivated?

Cultivation and immortality are completely different things, right? Breaking through the shackles of life is the underlying instinct of all life, right? As for the path of evolution, apart from the traditional path of cultivating immortals, from the perspective of modern people, there are not too many paths that can be taken.

It may be that the word count has been reached recently, and I have been on the smart push, which has brought a wave of traffic, and then some readers who visited the bookstore accidentally clicked on this book. These gentlemen may have just read the first two or three chapters, and then commented in the book review area whether this book can be read. The main point is the protagonist's temperament, which roughly means that the protagonist is sick. The idea that the world of cultivating immortals has no ability to protect itself and wants to lie down and wait for death is a brainless choice. Choose... Xiaohua didn't care much at first, so let's just say it. After all, there are so many good books on the platform, and those books written by platinum masters and fifth-level tycoons at the top of the best-seller list may not be liked by everyone. (You are free to decide whether others want to listen to it or not) But Xiaohua's book is still in its new release period! Free! Free! Free! "Important Things Say Three Times" This book is free so far. I didn't have the patience to read the beginning and felt that I didn't like it or it didn't suit my heart. I just gave it up and gave it up. Everyone's brainwaves are not in tune with it, so there is nothing to say. There is really no need to waste time leaving comments in the book review area that affect other people's perceptions. The title, introduction, and characters are the tone that was set before this book was released. Even if you express your dissatisfaction with righteous indignation, I can't change it. Spread your hands. (If I accidentally wrote something off later, I didn't say it (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)) Talking about the protagonist's temperament and choices, it was clearly stated in the previous chapters that the mortal world he lives in is peaceful and the dynasty is at its peak. The protagonist who has lived here for many years has determined the direction of his life, which is to enjoy a life that he feels comfortable with. Until the appearance of Xian Yuan, the world view was destroyed, and I couldn't accept it at once, or I was unwilling to accept it, and then a series of turns happened later... The turns here may be a bit blunt, and there is no sense of eloquence, but Xiaohua, as a new player, has not yet passed the novice protection period, and her writing skills are insufficient. Thinking about this, she deserves everyone's forgiveness! (⑅˃◡˂⑅) In short, let's take a look later. If you feel dissatisfied with the listing fee, you can leave any comments you want. I won't leave any bad comments for the new book issue (anyway, I will secretly delete the bad comments when I see them. I am a free timer at work. It's already so hard to make up stories to relieve people's boredom, and you can't even make a small amount of money. It's like generating electricity for love, so why don't you get angry like this!

To be honest, I really admire you. You are really good at writing novels yourself. You are really capable, the content is good, and the subject matter is wonderful. It is really admirable to achieve this level. To express my respect. I rewarded you with the Golden Alliance. Although it's not much, it's not true either.

After reading one chapter, this novel belongs to the majority of the majority. Regardless of whether it is good or not, it is still quite good. First of all, I am not a Shennong. First of all, let's take a look at the introduction. It's a bit like the protagonist who just wanted to be an ordinary person and live an ordinary life a few years ago. If you like this type of genre, you can read it. If you don't like it, you can read it. It's okay not to read it. After all, I haven't read a few chapters, and I don't know if he is the protagonist of this type [fn= 39] Then, the protagonist is full of emotions. When faced with an osprey, he talks about people and defends his status as the master even if his heart is hairy. When faced with the fear of an unknown corpse, he will loudly encourage himself and ignores the words of the osprey. When faced with fake corpses and supernatural phenomena, the protagonist turns fear into anger, which shows that he... Um... Has the qualifications of an emperor In short, he is very good-looking 👍 I can collect 250 words.

The mood of "The Fisherman" at the beginning is quite good, with a bad protagonist and annoying teammates, But at the turning point, the villain slaughters the city without any foreshadowing. It is too blunt. The protagonist shouts the sentence "You want me to become an immortal, see if you can accept my revenge", which is really embarrassing. After that, the world of cultivating immortals is just average, not bad, but nothing outstanding. It is like starting from the introduction of the book title, to the life of a fisherman, to the turning point of cultivating immortals, basically everything the audience wants to see has been told. The subsequent life of cultivating immortals lacks effective freshness and cannot retain the audience.

I don't know why, I just can't stand it. I don't know where the main plot is.

Brother, don't write books full-time, I'm afraid you'll starve to death

I'm not an expert in this area, but I still want to express my opinion. After I read your novel carefully and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to answer it. As I said at the beginning, I am not a divine farmer in this area. From a certain perspective, the novel you wrote is good-looking, but from another perspective, the novel you wrote is not good-looking. I can't say that it's not good-looking at all, I can only say that it's still a little bit bad-looking between completely good-looking. If you ignore this point, then of course your novel will be good-looking, but if you use a more rigorous attitude to examine whether your novel is good-looking, then the novel you write will not be good-looking. In fact, looking back, from the perspective of readers, whether your novel is good or not may not be good in the time and space of movement. The bad aspects of your novel may be good from the perspective of in-depth reading. Your novel may be good or bad at this moment, and your novel may be good or bad in the future. All in all, in short, as I said at the beginning, I am not a divine farmer in this area.

I really like this kind of book that is bland but has a lot of fun points. You might as well give it a read. At least so far, there is nothing about struggling at the third level of Qi training. It took several years to discover that I have multiple sub-systems. I tried my best to get a skill that I didn't want after 30 chapters. When I met someone who wanted to seize the treasure, I fought back and then picked up the bag. I showed my talent by making alchemy and drawing talismans. I have a hot-blooded winning streak in the sect arena...

Interesting, the first few chapters are interesting to watch

Brother, are you going to run away?

The supporting roles in the first few photos are fine, but the protagonist is so poisonous. This character is Cao Dan.

Even 300,000 words have not been put on the shelves. This is because the author wants to write more for free, or the editor does not allow it to be put on the shelves. I remember that putting it on the shelves requires a certain amount of reading. If the reading is not enough, it cannot be put on the shelves. If the reading is enough, 50,000 or 100,000 words can be put on the shelves.

It's pretty much what I thought. Keep up the good work, bro.