Junjian

This book is quite interesting.

This book is very "interesting" It brings together all the major sects! Grudges and grudges! The unsolved mystery of the world!

Look over here, look over here! There are Easter eggs! Please explore for yourself! If you like this book, you must read it! Don't just collect it, thank you! Your investment recommendation votes are the motivation for my creation!

This book is very good! Nice! 😍Quick update

The king's sword cuts off the grudges with one sword.

Preface (senses when not reading) 1. It is best to have a short introduction to the book by a new author. This lack of introduction will indeed play a role in attracting readers' interest, but at the starting point, it will do more harm than good for new authors. (The introduction is not enough, readers have no desire to click, and there is no fan base, so it is easy to get excited) 2. The title of the book... I can't comment. But subjectively I think this title is a bit dangerous. 3. Hope to be labeled. Main body (your senses after reading a few chapters) 1. There are no golden three chapters (in other words, the first few chapters are too boring, there is no clear main line, it is more boring than the early stage of Lord of Mystery, you don't have a fan base, and there is a high probability that no one will read it) 2. The narrative method is not suitable for Qidian users. Slow pace + martial arts + not seeing the characteristics of the protagonist = very small audience + high requirements + high writing style → difficult to make money (I don't want to discourage you, but it seems that you will probably jump at it now) 3. The plot arrangement is a bit confusing (if I didn't see the Easter egg chapter, I really didn't expect the protagonist not to appear, the new author put it I can't grasp this writing method because I don't have a fan base) Summary: There is still a lot of potential for improvement (euphemism) Suggestions: (I sincerely recommend rewriting) 1. Change the chapters where the protagonist does not appear into extra chapters, prefaces, easter egg chapters, background filling, etc. (Without Jin Yong's writing style, fans, and creativity, there is no way to be a friend. What's more, even if Jin Yong is reborn, he will not rely on your method in the first few books at the current starting point) 2. It is recommended to use more popular genres to accumulate fans at the starting point. (The sad truth is that there is almost no market for the first few chapters of your book at the beginning, and no readers want to spend a lot of time appreciating your previous content) 3. Work hard and treat writing as a hobby (if you only write this book).