Wreaking Havoc in Tokyo, Starting from Becoming a Girl God

Let's talk about the advantages first 1: The old driver can understand all the writing about driving, and there is no ink about pushing women, unlike other Liu Xiahui's writings. 2: The writing is not bad, the plot is very coherent and smooth. 3: The female supporting characters are all good, and they have all the necessary factors. It has a strong Japanese comic style Disadvantages The male supporting characters are very bad, and the setting is actually a bit obscene and fat.

I would like to give two suggestions to the author. Even if this book is finished, it can be used in the next book. As an ex-street author First of all, regarding the problem of character illustrations, I recommend a software (I charge no money, not advertising) called Hoshino, an AI chat software. You can directly create your own AI character, and the AI automatically draws pictures. Moreover, the fee for this software is other pictures of this character, but the AI pictures you create can be saved for free, which fundamentally solves the same problem. The problem of a character with inconsistent faces The second point is also the last piece of advice I give you at the moment. Don't have too many picture Easter egg chapters. You can choose to leave your comments in that chapter when the character first appears and post your pictures in the comments. The advantage of this is that it does not affect the look and feel, and it does not affect the audience's sense of involvement. It gives the audience the right to choose whether to see the picture of this character (this is a mistake I made when I first wrote a novel).

Oseki Meiling

Takasaki Yuri

Sawaguchi Tomomi

Pictures of Kanna Ozawa

Kana Sae

Damn it, it turned out to be the emperor's uncle. Love to watch, it looks good, more and faster. Drive fast!

The first time I thought the title of the book was that the protagonist was a woman

Ah, this, why is there such an xp as playing Ogasan..., This, this, this

Pictures of the male protagonist

It can be regarded as a novel. God treats girls, evil girls, and idiots. These elements are all present 😍😍😍😍😍

Submit a good article on food and grass driving

Come on Xiao Zuo, come on 🙂, your writing is pretty good.

This book looks pretty good, why is it so cool 🤔

I have to write about that bullshit man paired with a disgusting person 😰😰😰

After reading it on QQ Reading, I came here to complain. The author described Umemoto Eri as having no charm at all, just a clown green tea bitch. 😅😅😅I really don't understand why the heroine is portrayed in this way. And the key is that the role accounts for a huge proportion. After writing about this role, you will find that the other female protagonists have basically disappeared. 😥😥😥To destroy a book, you only need one female character. This is the number one school beauty. It's not as good as the eldest lady's characterization in a few simple chapters. My impression of her is that she owes a lot of money to her family and instead of thinking about making money, she falls in love. When she falls in love, she chooses a mistress who has no ability, money and brains. The key is that she is in a relationship but does not take him seriously. They only talk the talk but do nothing. She says she doesn't like money, but in fact only money can touch her heart. I don't understand why this kind of heroine can be the president of the student council. She seems like a brainless character in a pornographic novel. The suffering master is also able to date the female protagonist inexplicably. If you write about a childhood sweetheart, I will consider your logic to be normal. I chose to give up after reading this character throughout the book. I thought the writing was very good, but I think there is a problem with the author ignoring other heroines for this unattractive heroine.

Well, to be honest, the pseudo-system for Yuki Miyazato is a bit abstract. It's okay to sell your body for the sake of illusory favorability, Xiaodu

Was Rebirth as a Yellow Hair written by you? There is one that is exactly the same as Chapter 120, but it is in the library if someone else has fallen in love with you or not.

It's getting more and more confusing, and one sentence is repeated (pasted and copied) more than a dozen times in a few chapters. . . . . This is not how you cheat money!

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Before it was released, your situation was in good shape, and the male protagonist was considered good. However, after it was released, it became more and more useless. The male protagonist also went directly from a young adult to just before retirement at the age of sixty. We want to watch the protagonist surfing in the water. If there are no waves, then make waves, not to watch the author himself become more and more surfy. You are of no use to us if you have more water.

Brother, where did you come from? You just sent out 8 pages?

Big courage, still so little