Running Amok in Tokyo, Starting by Becoming a Girl's Deity

Let's talk about the advantages first 1: The old driver can understand all the writing about driving, and there is no ink about pushing women, unlike other Liu Xiahui's writings. 2: The writing is not bad, the plot is very coherent and smooth. 3: The female supporting characters are all good, and they have all the necessary factors. It has a strong Japanese comic style Disadvantages The male supporting characters are very bad, and the setting is actually a bit obscene and fat.

I would like to give two suggestions to the author. Even if this book is finished, it can be used in the next book. As an ex-street author First of all, regarding the problem of character illustrations, I recommend a software (I charge no money, not advertising) called Hoshino, an AI chat software. You can directly create your own AI character, and the AI automatically draws pictures. Moreover, the fee for this software is other pictures of this character, but the AI pictures you create can be saved for free, which fundamentally solves the same problem. The problem of a character with inconsistent faces The second point is also the last piece of advice I give you at the moment. Don't have too many picture Easter egg chapters. You can choose to leave your comments in that chapter when the character first appears and post your pictures in the comments. The advantage of this is that it does not affect the look and feel, and it does not affect the audience's sense of involvement. It gives the audience the right to choose whether to see the picture of this character (this is a mistake I made when I first wrote a novel).

Oseki Meiling

Sawaguchi Tomomi

Takasaki Yuri

Damn it, it turned out to be the emperor's uncle. Love to watch, it looks good, more and faster. Drive fast!

Kana Sae

Pictures of Kanna Ozawa

Ah, this, why is there such an xp as playing Ogasan..., This, this, this

The first time I thought the title of the book was that the protagonist was a woman