Dingding the Northern and Southern Dynasties

The writing is good, but I feel that the titles are a bit awkward. The subordinates are called Princess Gongzong (maybe they were called that at that time, but it always reminds me of the Three Kingdoms, which is particularly awkward). I call the subordinates, this long history, that general, rather than calling them names or something. I feel that the author has the idea to fully explain the process of change. I try my best to write it well and rationalize it, but for a novel, if it is written in too much detail, it will be very slow. In the first part, the heroine grows up together, and everyone's acting skills make the protagonist rise to the top. It feels pretty good. Later, when the Shangdang fights internal affairs, it seems a bit tiring for the reader, but you still have to grasp the degree. Personally, cheers for the author!

Northern Wei Military Academy～All-star lineup

In fact, there are only two roads for the protagonist, the Hebei route and the Guanzhong route. Henan is a dead place at this time, not to mention the Southern Dynasties.

I don't believe it when it comes to original characters. The author has trained more than 7,000 recruits. Don't they have outstanding talents? You can promote some lower-level soldiers, such as those with extraordinary talents or those who train hard, and recruit them as personal guards. If they stay with the protagonist for a long time, their loyalty will naturally increase. Then they will be decentralized to the army, which can also improve the control of the army. There is no need to use celebrities all the time. You can set up a martial arts hall in the army. Organization or institution. After all, Jiang Datou's Huangpu University has trained many senior generals. The protagonist can select outstanding low-level officers from the entire army to train. The protagonist can be the principal and promote himself from time to time. Some people will be loyal to him. After all, it is very rare to study in this era. If the protagonist is willing to let this channel go, he will definitely win the hearts of the lower-level soldiers. In this way, it will be useless even if there are generals who rebel in the future. After all, the soldiers at the lowest level know who has the best future. It's obvious who is good to them. A little introduction, a little advice. The ups and downs of the Sui Dynasty Lord you wrote before was very good. This book's writing style has obviously improved a lot. Come on,,, and we are ordinary people. The author must not forget his roots. If he wants to become an army with faith, my idea is to be good to the ordinary people. This is really important. You have also emphasized a lot on the discipline of the army, so I won't say much. The protagonist will soon have his own base. I hope to give the people a little more life and a little mercy so that they can live a better life. I can't forget the people just because I care about the interests of the aristocratic family. The people will never forget who is their savior. ! ! ! A word of benevolence and righteousness can be the biggest weapon in making everyone have a favorable impression of you!

At the beginning of the third year of Xiaochang, although the Six Towns Uprising ended in failure, the rule of the Northern Wei Dynasty was difficult to recover and was on the verge of collapse. The military powers in the border town took the opportunity to expand their strength and support their troops, among which Er Zhurong was the most powerful. Wei Xuan stared around in Pingyang County: he saw that the beacon fire in the Northern Dynasty had not been extinguished, Chiye Qianli, and Er Zhurong were beginning to take shape; he heard that Xiao Bodhisattva in the Southern Dynasty sent Xia Houjun to supervise the Northern Expedition, and only waited for "Huaiyan to be completed". That is to say, he sent his troops to the Northern Expedition... Although he was a handsome man, he was unfortunately born into a gangster family. He sighed: "Where is my noble man?" Er Zhurong solemnly In response: "Er Zhu is in charge of Bingzhou, and he has many famous soldiers and generals. But the eyes and ears of the world know that where Er Zhu is prosperous, there is no successor? If you are my son-in-law, you should be entrusted with important responsibilities." Xuan leisurely and fascinated. , He was proud of himself and made his ambition clear, saying: "A real man lives in heaven and earth, and he should immediately take his fame and fame." Over the next year, Er Zhurong went to pay tribute to the DPRK. Empress Dowager Hu only loved the beauty of Xuan, but she couldn't get it, so she angrily said: "This palace is full of green peaks and mountains, and it is unique. If Wei Lang becomes an official in the 'chao', wouldn't it be better than a warrior?" Xuan had no plan, so he recommended: "There is Gao Huan in Bingzhou, with a small character congratulating Liuhun; its beauty is a hundred times better than mine." The Queen Mother was confused by it, and turned her anger into joy; Returning to Jinyang, Xuan said to Huan truthfully: "The Queen Mother loves your beauty very much. After you lead your son to the court, I will raise him as your wife, so don't worry about it." Gao Huan: "..." After hearing this, Yuwentai drew his sword and cut the case, sighing: "I am also beautiful, but no girl appreciates me." ... Emperor Sheng In the deep palace, his hands are longer than those of women, and it is difficult to distinguish between male and female. When he is a little older, he takes off his clothes due to suspicion, and asks each other in confusion: "Qing Wei, I have no weapons, and it seems to be the body of a daughter. I would like you to observe it and solve my confusion." Xuan saw that the emperor had no weapons, dents and gaps, and exclaimed: "The emperor is a daughter."

The boss should write this book well, preferably as sexy as in the introduction 🙂

The writing is pretty good, but the interaction between the pig's trotters and the heroine is like a twosome. Maybe the author has no experience in this area, and the pig's trotters have some ideas and suggestions one after another, which makes General Erzhu suddenly realize that it disrespects the wisdom of the ancients. The author understands the essence of the saying that the ancients are ignorant but not stupid, but the writing is still too explicit.

The author doesn't understand history at all and is just writing blindly. You want the army to have faith and be able to fight a hundred with one regardless of the country. This is not training soldiers, this is creating supermen. 🤭

Some book friends put it very well: "Er Zhurong is an indestructible cage, trapping the heroes of the late Wei Dynasty. If he does not die, no one will dare to jump out. After his death, all kinds of demons and monsters will immediately break out of the cage." But for Wei Xuan, who has no power, no hands, no fame, and no charisma, Er Zhurong is the strongest and most powerful backer. In terms of Wei Xuan's current situation, the supremacy of the clan in the Northern Wei Dynasty, and the way people were employed in the late Wei Dynasty... Wei Xuan, who has no one to compare with, will be unable to move forward once he loses him. Besides, Er Zhurong is a rare military strategist, powerful minister, and hero in history. How can he die just by saying that he will die? It would be a very irresponsible attitude for me to write him off casually in order to highlight the protagonist. Therefore, Er Zhurong in this book needs to be arranged step by step.

Suggested titles: "The Life of Dog Licking in the Northern and Southern Dynasties", "The Dog Licking Diaosi in the Southern and Northern Dynasties" and "The Rise of the Diaosi in the Southern and Northern Dynasties"

There are quite a lot of famous female characters in this period, pick up as many as you can, and it's best not to miss any of them.

How can a man live in the world between heaven and earth and live in depression for a long time?

The biggest problem of this book is that there is a lot of space about the love between children. I understand that the protagonist needs to hug his thighs, but you can cover this part in a few strokes. It's okay to write a part of it if there are dozens of pictures. Don't connect it.

I hate fake Buddhas the most. It would be best to destroy them.

It would be nice if the protagonist was as flexible as King Gao. He is Xianbei'er in front of the six towns, and Hedong Wei in front of the Han people.

The progress is too slow. It's only been a year since Chapter 300. The risk is too high.

Wei Xuan and Er Zhu Ying'e have interacted a lot recently, and I guess many people are not used to it. The reason why I write this is mainly to let Wei Xuan take off, but his foundation and qualifications are too shallow after all. If he takes off rashly, he will not meet the promotion standards. Moreover, the Erzhu Group is just like a tribal alliance. If Erzhu Rong suddenly promotes an outsider to a high official position, it will also cause dissatisfaction among his generals and the children of the Erzhu family. Therefore, this method is used to "confirm" that he will eat soft rice. It is indeed hard to hear that it is soft food, but many big figures in the Eastern and Western Wei Dynasties have no chance to stand out at this time, and they are all trying to find ways to side with the strong. If Wei Xuan had become a big shot in the Er Zhu Rong Group before Er Zhu Rong's death, I think many people who have no way of becoming an official would be willing to defect to him; and then get to know Er Zhu Rong through him and get Er Zhu Rong's attention and importance. For Wei Xuan, it is a good thing as long as there are talents to defect to him. As long as the people are there, everything is easier to talk about and handle. If Wei Xuan at this time is pretentious, self-righteous, and powerful, not only will there be no talent to come to him, but Er Zhurong will probably be extremely disappointed with him. In addition, it is also to reflect the charm and value of Er Zhu Ying'e and the great help she gave Wei Xuan during his entrepreneurial stage. If she had no sense of participation and no value at all during Wei Xuan's very critical entrepreneurial stage, she would easily become a vase, and it would be difficult to "support" her in the future. If you look carefully, you will find that every time Er Zhu Ying'e appears, she becomes more mature every time. And the same is true for Wei Xuan. If we describe the two of them in the current way: they start a business and grow together as a couple; it's just that Wei Xuan now has no entrepreneurial capital and connections, while Er Zhu Ying'e has everything. In addition, please don't compare Wei Xuan and Gao Huan. The marriage between Gao Huan and Lou Zhaojun was actually infinitely magnified by unofficial histories and novels. In fact, Gao Huan was not a poor boy living on soft rice. The Gao family behind him was a powerful existence in itself; when he conquered the world, many talents from the Gao family appeared, and they laid a good foundation for the establishment of Northern Qi. And Wei Xuan has nothing.

As someone who is also writing Nan Chen in the Northern and Southern Dynasties, I feel that I am under a lot of pressure. It's a good novel, keep up the good work 😁

The first few chapters were too slow to pick up, and a bit weak, which made it boring, so I gave up.

The author must not be a holy mother, do not lick the dog, and must kill decisively

It is said that the author Bihai Siyun's previous cars were all cool. The few novels the author wrote before were quite popular, such as The Third World of the Sui Dynasty and The Rise and Fall of the Lord of the Sui Dynasty. They were all popular online novels in the late Sui Dynasty, but now they are not very popular at all. After browsing various major novel forums, I found that the few historical online articles Bihai Siyun had written before were no longer mentioned online, let alone anyone discussing the plot. The third generation of the Sui Dynasty, the ups and downs of the Sui Dynasty Lord, are no longer mentioned on the Internet. The Internet literary circles have stopped mentioning these novels for a long time, as if the author has never written these novels. Bi Hai Siyun's previous novels cooled down very quickly. Basically, after they were finished, they cooled down at the speed of light. Even if they were not popular, their popularity would be gone. The Great Sui Dynasty III was so popular when it was updated, but now it is not popular at all, its popularity is gone, it has been completely forgotten by the Internet, and it is completely cool

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

I borrow a building here to promote my book "Reverse Song Dynasty: The First Prodigal Son of the Southern and Northern Dynasties". I hope all the uncles who are passing by will go and take a look and scold the author. If you think it is good, read it. If you think it is not good, it is best to criticize a few shortcomings. The author will polish it for the next book. Thank you all!

It took two years to write like this. Goodbye

I found out that the author is a complete name-breaker when it comes to naming original little characters and naming various original army names! All the names are really ugly and unintelligent, and they don't fit into that era at all!

So when will it be updated 😭