The Red Mansion, the Scholarly Family of Ning Mansion

The content and structure of the article are too loose. The form is scattered but the spirit is not scattered. You are saying that the form is scattered but the spirit is scattered. Even the daily articles that I usually read have a core goal to express. You are not going to write an entire novel at once. If it is too rambling, it will appear to be watery. The second thing is to pay attention to the protagonist and the age of the character. The Internet is not a lawless place, and characters of a certain age have to pay a price for being sidelined. No matter how you change the vest network, there will be an archive. Nothing else, I still like to read Red Mansions fan fiction.

It should be a female author, and the whole novel is very makeup-heavy, so it should be a female-focused novel. After all, women's perspectives are often not pleasing to male readers! Men and women have different values!

No, am I the only one who sees the evil point? A noble family wants to become a civil servant? What do you think? With military and political affairs in hand, can this emperor keep you? Then what else do you need from the emperor? You can handle it.

After reading it, it is still extremely poisonous! ! ! The title is The Red Mansion, but it involves the characters of passers-by, and keeps describing the passers-by. The women in the Red Mansions are lightly ignored, and they are also gay. I don't like the beauty of the Red Mansions! Run to find a man and find a woman on the passerby! Poison!

It doesn't matter if you have a harem or not, but the first heroine must be Sister Lin!

Write well The Red Mansion is not about three wives and four concubines. What do you do when you write about The Red Mansion? Left Turn Urban Classification has a lot of pure love stories. It's amazing that some people in historical texts asked not to have a harem, but there is only one hope. It can be amorous, it can be a harem, or even a stallion. I hope that every supporting role can be written vividly, just like the several maids currently appearing are very vivid and have their own characteristics. This is what attracts me the most. Keep the standard and update. I like this book

There are many different kinds of Red Mansions that have been traveled through. I hope this book will be a small and refreshing Red Mansions. How to solve the problem of accepting female students based on their seniority?

After reading two chapters, I saw that the Jia family actually wanted to be a scholarly family, and a noble family relied on civil servants. Do you think the emperor is a fool?

Just looking at the introduction, it's so funny. It's a majestic palace where the patriarch and his legitimate son lose their titles and go to Congwen. Is it Jia Jing who is the first assistant to the cabinet? He has such talent that he can be the first assistant without practicing Taoism? The other one is that he works as a 25th son to squeeze out the civil service group. If his honor offends the civil service group, they will not accept him. The emperor will also think that he is a 25th son and offends everyone. Can he be the chief minister?

Speechless, have you lost your mind when you are broken in love? The few chapters after I lost my love made me look like a tauren. I always arrange some weird plots, are you out of your mind? Please write it carefully. I also spent money. Although it's not much, it's still money. I didn't spend money to see you having fun with someone.

I came in after I clicked on the introduction, because I had never seen Jia Jing before, but it was quite special. I continued to follow it until I saw Wang Ziteng drugging his sister to cause Wang Xifeng to miscarry. I couldn't stand it anymore. I'm going to die laughing, how can a power struggle be carried out like this? Wang Ziteng had 100 ways to change the family, but he had to tell his sister to drug him in front of his staff, and he also used it to slander Jia Jing in a beautiful name. A normal person would do this. Why are you, Wang Ziteng, so ruthless? Wouldn't it be more successful to poison your sister directly without doing anything else? What does it mean to cause your niece to miscarry?

The hierarchy is really confusing, Xichun calls her father the old man. Call his brother "Master". Really convinced. If she wanted to call her, she would still call her master and brother. Even if Jia Zhen is in charge. When he calls Jia Zhen, he also calls him brother. Writing like this can still gain more than 400,000 hits. The starting point is really hopeless.

To be honest, this book should be for women. There is basically no scheming, it all depends on the aura of wisdom. The protagonist doesn't have much to do. Whenever he meets a woman, he always looks like an aunt or a aunt, and he often degrades the protagonist to reflect Lin Daiyu's intelligence. If you ask me to say that the author doesn't create characters with high IQs, it doesn't matter. Praising Lin is too outrageous and will only disgust and disgust her. At the same time, common sense questions are often wrong, which is not what a male video book should be. In summary, there is nothing worth reading in this book except for the writing. The writing is beautiful, but if you look closely at the plot, you will be speechless.

When I read the thirty-six chapters, most of them were about women, or some high-ranking people criticizing things. The writing style was very similar to that of women's videos. It had a petty air, and I really couldn't stand it anymore.

It's pretty good. The content is relatively novel and interesting among the Red Mansions. If possible, the descriptions of others flattering and praising the filial son can be reduced a little. The number is a bit too much and affects the perception. In addition, people like Jia Zhen are really not worthy of it.

The two mansions, which started with military exploits, are still coming from scholarly families? Drunk too😵‍💫

At first I felt more and more awkward as I read it, and I didn't know why, but when I looked at the comments, it turned out to be a female author? No wonder then. The original work was also written by these people, and so is this book. Anyone who has read the original work can clearly tell the difference.

The author doesn't even understand why Jia Jing wants to cultivate immortality, but he still uses this as the basis of this article. It's really ignorant. If he didn't withdraw from officialdom, he might be executed. He was an important minister of the Eastern Palace of the deposed prince. The deposed prince was forced to rebel and then failed. Jia Jing was not executed because his father had a strong relationship with the Supreme Emperor. It would be considered lenient to let him withdraw in exchange for mercy. If he didn't step back and would appear and disappear in front of the Supreme Emperor from time to time, what do you think would happen to the Jia family?

I originally thought that I would travel back in time and try to mend the cracks in the sky and save the building from falling, but after reading a few chapters, I stayed at love and love. What's the point? Can't we live without love? It makes the girls squeal.

Female authors should really stop posting articles to male channels casually. Female channels generally like the entanglements in the process of love, hate, and hatred in relationships. How can I watch male channels? If you want to post a male video, write it according to the male's preference, don't play the same trick as a female video.

Chapter 200, and not a single woman has been recommended.

Trash book, whoever reads it will regret it. I don't understand what's written at all.

It doesn't have the flavor of Red Mansion at all, it's written like a running account

Every book ends in an anticlimax, can you give me a good ending?

The writing is very weird and makes me sad to read it.

I quit before I finished the first chapter. It's pure rubbish.

In my opinion, this book is definitely the best among the Red Mansions novels, no less than House Lady. Daiyu Party members should not miss it.

What does Jia Jing want to do? Who is the protagonist? What is it about? It's so fast-paced that it's like shitting. Can you write something normal? It's crazy.

It's pure tasteless. Why bother to pretend to be a Red Mansion? There's nothing interesting about it, and there's no storyline or character development.

It's too bad. After it was released, it was criticized for five chapters, and then a few more chapters were criticized by various reactions. To be honest, daily life is not good.