Little Master in the Red Mansion

In fact, the writing is quite good, the plot concept is very balanced, and there is no waste of words. The progress has been very good and the details are appropriate. Although the overall layout is not large and the writing style is relatively simple, the feeling of Xiaojiabiyu is very suitable for the mood of reading. There are a few things in this book that deviate from the original work, but the treatment of the main characters is still interesting, making it an excellent fan work.

Waiting for Jia Huan and Jia Cong to be promoted to officials, Mrs. Wang must not go crazy

Do you really think the ancients were fools when copying Song Dynasty poems during the Dragon Boat Festival? After all, Cao Xueqin was also from the Qing Dynasty.

The whole journey was against the wind and it was no fun. What did you write? ? ?

Go to this book to learn Xiantian Kung Fu, this book Changchun Kung Fu, the same start of the children's imperial examination, civil and military breaks. I am Jia Huan, the concubine of the second wife, who wants to marry Sister Lin. I am Jia Shan, the concubine of the eldest family, and I want to marry Sister Lin.

I've been reading for a long time and don't know what to write? I have to study but I don't work hard, I have to practice martial arts, nothing happened for a long time, I have no money and no business, but I haven't done anything... There are no cheats for Goldfinger, it's a piece of shit...

What's wrong with the protagonist's personality?

You are too young at this age. What kind of official position can you take if you pass the Jinshi examination at the age of thirteen? Your hair is not even full.

When you see Sister Ma running away, do you think your writing was really humorous?

To be honest, writing about Xue Baochai with my family like this makes me speechless. Is that right, Sister Qi Lin?

Is this a eunuch? In the Red Mansions fanfiction, Dai Chai is an irreplaceable heroine. Giving Bao Chai away is doomed to cause a large number of readers to abandon the book. Is this because subscriptions have declined and there is no intention to update?

Wen didn't see anything exciting, but he still wanted to build an academy library? Is it too slow to die? You actually want to participate in party struggle when you don't have the strength to protect yourself? I haven't seen Wu Xun's half-point results after that, and I still want to participate in hedging bets. I don't want to mess around. The more I read, the more boring I am. I have written several chapters in one place, and there is no end to the real water. If I continue like this, I have to give up.

The book was okay at first, until I saw the protagonist Jia Shan, whose name is Shanshan...

This book is a masterpiece written by Red Mansion fans. Although there are minor problems, the flaws are not outweighed.

It's a mess, and it feels like there's no outline at all. I just followed the original catalog of The Red Mansion and wrote it like shit.

This book is clearly well written, so why do negative reviews always lead to high praises?

The protagonist is useless. In fact, you can tell from the title of the book. This book will definitely not be successful. The main reason is that there is a shortage of books and it turns out that it is poisonous. The protagonist is portrayed as useless. He claims to be devoted to one person, but he also accepts a bunch of maids, provokes a lot of people and refuses to accept them, and uses Baochai to get married. Is this written by a human? It can be seen that the author does not know how to write about the military at all. He can only write about defeating the imperial examination, but the Red Mansion Tongwen imperial examination will not get ahead. The Jia family's martial arts, the relationship is all in the military. Only the military can quickly come forward and correct the chaos. The Red Mansion is not in charge of the military. He is useless and can only live in obedience. This is the most useless protagonist I have ever read in the same novel. He has no ability at all. He only did one thing during the imperial examination, which was to become a censor and take the Zhongshun book to post sesame cakes. The result was no pain or itching. The reason why the full text deserves one star is because the plot of Jia She and Mrs. Xing's abuse of Mrs. Baoyu Wang turned out to be a eunuch by the author...

There is no end to learning. As a booking boss, if you don't interact with the fans mentioned in this chapter and secondly don't accept the supervision of fans, how can you stand out among the vast number of talented people at Qidian? When you come out to hang out, you have to talk about your power (fans) and background (starting point). What's the use of what you can write! Not even a small (flat) three. Listen to others and eat enough. My heart aches when you see your article. In ancient times, Zou Ji persuaded the King of Qi, but now I am here to persuade you. I hope you will think about it, be careful about it, and do it. A person's state is very important. As soon as I see you, you will achieve great things. You have to work hard and don't fail. One or two chapters a day is not your limit. If you don't try, you won't know if you can't do it. Summary; (Breaking update, you will never be able to pull your hips without fans)

I came here after seeing the scholarly family of Ning Mansion in Red Mansion, Hui Chang in Red Mansion, and the serious brother Rong. This is a trap.

The emotional line is very unpleasant to write! He said that he was deeply devoted to Sister Lin, but in fact, he had already had relationships with several maids at this time. He said he would not have a harem, but he went around flirting with women. He attracted the liking of four or five female characters, but he had no intention of marrying her. In the end, he almost gave her away to others (almost gave her away). Either you are really dedicated and only marry one person; or you open a harem generously. What is the main character written now? He claims to be single-minded, but in reality he is not. He flirts with women but does not marry them, leaving readers hanging. This way of writing is the most disgusting

Aunt Xue's family was obviously in decline, but she was still so high-spirited that she looked down on this and that. In the original work, Xue Pan did not repent at all after beating someone to death. After reading the original work, you will know that Xue Baochai is a standard feudal woman who does whatever her mother says. After Xue Pan got into trouble, Aunt Xue cried again to Baochai, so Xue Baochai probably agreed to everything. If you want to be Xue Baochai's husband, you have to be able to wipe Xue Pan's butt for the rest of your life. So it doesn't matter if you accept Xue Baochai or not.

It's quite beautiful. It's like a eunuch in a book.

What the hell are you writing? I suggest you don't read it if the discussion is less than 1,000 points. It poisoned me to death.

I finished reading almost 200 chapters in one day. Author, why don't you stop me quickly? Reading is smooth, and the whole process is non-toxic. If you like Red Mansion, come quickly!

This is the fanfic that I have seen that the character's speaking style is closest to the original version of Dream of Red Mansions

Fans of B, when a beautiful woman splashes urine on her face, it smells salty, when she splashes shit on her face, it smells like sesame paste. She has been suppressed. She is just a maid and can play tricks on the protagonist. Is this a disease? Masochistic constitution.

The previous book was very good, but I haven't read this one yet. Come on.

Enter the palace, eunuch. Slipping away

It's not even considered a brainless essay, it can only be said to be a primary school student's composition.

It's actually quite well written, but it's a pity that harem stories among Red Mansion fans are the big trend. The content is not very sophisticated, but the story is pretty good. In fact, you are suitable for writing original works. Red Mansions has the original works first, so there is not much room for you to develop. I think you have the ability to write original stories about the two characters, Li Yuan and Qin Keqing. Give the whole fictional dynasty a try.