A Taoist Immortal Lord Emerges from the Liver

The writing is really good. It is relaxed and relaxed, and the supporting characters are well established. Although the female characters still look too weird, everyone here on the Qidian Chinese website understands it. Compared with other articles of the same type, the tone is lighter and easier to read. It makes people feel better and happier after reading it. It has a rare fairy flavor and is more human. I would like to make a direct comment, hoping to grasp the existing flavor and go further in the subsequent plot.

In the new year and new weather, go to Sanjiang as soon as possible.

If the computer explodes, so does the author?

Is this a computer explosion? This is cut!

Okay, okay, there is no poisonous point for the time being.

The little spirit farmer also wants to become an immortal, so bring me the red envelope

Unlike others, what you write seems to have a sense of stability. Especially the extras are very well written. Others like this will be written as a running account, but you, the author, write this very well. As long as the author is great, you write slowly and maintain quality. Don't mess up the rhythm just for the sake of fast drawing.

May your imagination be opened Wish your writing smooth Please come on I'm leaving again.

Well written, keep it up, your monthly vote has been cast

The author writes really well. Since there are a lot of physical training, there should be a lot of methods for physical training. I hope the author can reflect it later! When it comes to weapons, don't just focus on swords, be more diversified.

The lower-grade storage bag of the pattern series has a load capacity of 1,500 kilograms. How do you store a several-pound bristle porcupine into the storage bag? ?

Come on, come on 🙂

After reading dozens of chapters in one go, I would like to express some personal opinions. Regarding some scenes, the author can write more details, and then leave a line for transition, because sometimes the reading is not careful enough and the book will suddenly go from scene A to scene B, which is very abrupt. In addition, regarding other battle scenes, it is difficult to tell whether they are scenes for the protagonist or scenes for the supporting characters. But the advantage of the author's book is that both the protagonist and the supporting characters have very distinct personalities. Li Chuang's carefree body, Qingyan's girlishness, and the decent fellow farming Wu Daoyou are all vivid, giving people the feeling that they are the protagonists in the book.

I see that the author seems to have been talking about this recommendation, and the conversion rate is relatively low. It seems that the book title introduction is not very attractive. The advantage of this book is that it describes the kind of daily life in the market that is not often described in the cultivation of immortality. The subject matter is relatively fresh; It has a "fairy" feeling; The writing style is quite good, there is no such thing as rushing towards a female character when you see it, the undertaking is quite good, and you don't feel poisonous; The date changes are better grasped, and the details are appropriate, not the kind of moment that lasts forever. Good, or it feels like I am speeding through practice all the time (I just finished practicing in the morning, and someone will come to kill me in the afternoon, and then I will fight and kill for several long pictures). There is no impatient atmosphere, and the transition is smooth and smooth To sum up, the content of this book is On the contrary, the atmosphere is humane, warm, and farming style; the small extra theater is simply the finishing touch, with a fairy-like atmosphere (I read more farming, and this book was recommended by AI Day) But at first glance, the title "Call you XXX, you But >Just tell me some ideas, after all, I don't understand it Whether the book is suitable for my taste, I mainly search based on the tags. If the title is eye-catching, then check the comment area to see if there are any special points, and then take a look at the introduction to see if it says what the content is and what style it is (after all, I can't understand the introduction now) If this book was not a daily recommendation, I would have clicked on it. If I search it myself, I may not click in to read it I have finished reading 50 chapters so far. Come on, author, please update soon! 🙂

The author must not act like a swordsman who is invincible in his class, as if practicing swordsmanship is the only way out! !

Is this a eunuch? 😤

The book is good. Please update it and vote for it.