The Hidden Sequence

Extraordinary people originally came from ghouls, and all extraordinary people and ordinary people are the lambs of the upper shepherd. The "secret method" comes from "power", and if you use the "secret method", you will have to offer sacrifices. The leader of the extraordinary road is the "shepherd", and those who are led are the "lambs" and "apprentices". Naked underworld cultivator.

Shennong said: It's well written, worth reading. I have collected it, invested, and given it a monthly ticket. It will be updated more and more. Fairy tales are a very buggy world. The writing of this kind of mysterious reappearance is really good. But in serial novels, you must pay attention to the high-sequence characters. The strong characters must not be lost. There are no special features. If you don't have special abilities or means, there shouldn't be plots about leapfrogging monsters, and the knowledge in the book is too cheap. Knowledge is equal to power on the mysterious side. The sequence of the protagonist does not have a lot of mysterious logic. Finally, the magic and mystery are added, and some weirdness and absurdity are added. The fairy tale world is so willful.

If you missed Lord of Mysteries, don't miss this book

The front is okay, but the back is a big mess. The collapse was foreshadowed. It was ruined from the beginning when you gained unlimited power. It became even more outrageous later on. Others became your bodyguards. It really made me laugh to death. By the way, did the author think about the rationality of the plot when publishing these chapters? Because he is a bomb, he is confident, and because the fairy tale leverages power, he can get several at a time. This makes people think that other extraordinary people are sb. It has been a mess since the beginning of Alice in Wonderland. The previous abilities can allow the protagonist to have a hearty battle, but the later plug-ins can only give a hearty Akaishi. The protagonist started running around naked as soon as it was released. 🙂

I had expected it, but it started to fall apart after more than 100 chapters.

Isn't it because of self-impression... There are often some authors who just write and let it go, without considering the outline or plot structure (or there may be no outline at all). I feel moved by what I write, and then the reader thinks, "Huh?" I really feel that what I have watched is the finale. Can I really write something newer later?

After reading these chapters, especially Chapter 102, I feel that it is not very good. This chapter reveals that Klein has the status of a god and is deeply involved in the gambling game between all parties. Klein identifies and breaks the game. I feel that the plot is very necessary and the setting is very necessary. This kind of thing can be talked about, but don't make it so obvious. It should be vague and confusing. The author tells half of it, and the rest is left to the readers to guess. Otherwise everyone will think that this book is not long, and the author will cut it off. Of course, the worst thing that I don't want to see is that the author really wants to cut it. The protagonist takes the path of fairy tales, bringing children the dreamlike experience of fairy tales and making the world a better place. This is very good. I still like the path set by the author for the protagonist. Come on, author.

The front is better. But the male protagonist can definitely become a god. There is no foreshadowing for this, it is too sudden. There is a lot of information crammed into just a few chapters, and there are no early hints. Like a deus ex machina. The sudden twists and turns, the writing is very good, it doesn't feel like a new author, how could he do such an immature thing?

Because the plagiarism was too frank, it was difficult for me to judge whether it was plagiarism. 🤤 Overall, it's not bad, but can you slightly change the names and nouns that have a strong visual sense? It's just a name, there's no need to be lazy in this regard!

What's going on? Are you going to stop updating? The author comes out and says something! Very anxious