Teyvat: I Feed on Relics

Did the author read the paragraph commentary? Captain Qin's name is reversed, and his ability to retract weapons is the Eye of God.

Your description of the Qiuqiu people is no longer monsters, but a living tribe of intelligent creatures! They can build buildings, make tools, cooperate in hunting, and communicate and cooperate. After such a description, and then writing about the protagonist knowing his identity as a time traveler, but killing intelligent creatures without any grudges, what does the author want to express?

The biggest problem I feel now is that no one around the protagonist has the Eye of God. It's not like the number of Eyes of God suddenly increased. The people around the protagonist don't even have the Eye of God now. So what do travelers do when they arrive in Teyvat? It will take some time to develop elemental combat skills and so on.

Brother, are you pretending to be a corpse or resurrecting?

If this doesn't work, just write an outline and don't read the comments section yet.

I feel that I can speed up my strength improvement, or directly visit the seven countries before the travelers. This depends on the author's writing skills, otherwise it will not be fun to stay in Mondstadt Novice Village.

Does the author have an outline? I don't have any suggestions to write an outline first, otherwise the plot will feel fragmented.

I will ask some questions for reference, after all the author does not have an outline, but there is always something to consider. Learn alchemy? If you learn alchemy. The country of the grass god—Xumi can give it a try. If you want to extend the mechanism technique. The gear mechanism in reality can be used as a reference, and the unearthed material can be located in the desert of the Red King. Will the protagonist obtain the Eye of God? What properties? What is the use of the protagonist absorbing the spiritual power of the holy relic? Manipulate elements directly? If the elements can be manipulated directly, the author can consider becoming a demon god. In addition, the map is not limited to Mondstadt, Liyue, and Xumi. You can go to other countries. After all, Mondstadt is not the only one with holy relics. (The second creation of holy relics is good, but there should also be some original holy relics in the original work in the middle and later stages.) Then there are none. The above is purely my personal opinion. I hope the protagonist will become an earthly immortal as soon as possible.

Brother, don't die, come back to life quickly

The writing is pretty good, come on, Genshin Impact fan fiction is one of the few that has logical and rational writing. I used to think that those who wrote Genshin Impact fan fiction were all middle-aged teenagers who would always keep a harem. It was really embarrassing. I hope the author will keep it up!

The plot is very rigorous, I suggest you just write an original one

There are really very few books with this kind of slow-paced realism. Can you read two of them a day?

Or a tribe with shamans and abyss mages? ?