Time Travel at the Same Time: How Many Times Have I Traveled Through Time?

Think clearly about what you want to read when reading fan fiction. If you want to be original in the fan fiction, why write a fan fiction?

There are indeed many bugs in Naruto, especially in the movie version. For example, the person who buried the detonating talisman in Konoha must have softened his heart, otherwise Konoha would be severely damaged.

All the heavens and worlds ask for divine magic and Shen Nong to help me. Doesn't it look good?

I think Sarutobi Hiruzen doesn't taste right, maybe he's not old yet

Naruto deviates too much from the original work, I can't watch it

Sixth and seventy-two chapters just made me stupid. What was written before suddenly went crazy. If you were to pave the way for an alien evil spirit to invade the world, it would be okay. It just happened to be a linkage between the protagonist's goal mission and the like. The result was a mess.

The poison mentioned in the book review section actually seems to me to be okay and I can barely accept it. Even if I sell Marvel Wink and add a setting where the main god Wink is the main body and the others are all clones, or the main god is a clone, it silences me. It would be better to write a projection flow, and the main god Wink will be the main body and write the clones one by one. Do you know the author of the setting conflict? I think the most important thing about shared streaming is that you can trust "yourself", work hard to make progress together step by step, and become a big boss, and watch "yourself" show off. What I have achieved today is all due to "my own" efforts! I think this sentence is a shared core! Who can look directly at "Wenke" when the author writes this! The "Winker" from other worlds is just a soul fragment! The sense of immersion is degraded. Even if you write a behind-the-scenes story, if you throw out the settings so early, the sense of anticipation is gone!

Before this hits the shelves, let's overhaul the Harry Potter part.

This kind of Duke novels, Naruto, etc. Have been written too much, and it is difficult to compete with fanfics. After all, not every author has a particularly good writing style like Feng Chaohuang. You can write about other worlds. It really tests the author's innovative ability. Write new things from new angles. Many people just like to read this kind of thing. If you write about that world, you don't necessarily have to write about that world. It's just for a certain ability in that world. If you go crazy simply because of love, then I won't say anything

The Hokage was defeated by a member of Otsutsuki's clan, let alone how strong he was.

The third generation is written like a mafia boss, Danzo is like Ma Zai, a Hong Kong style

I haven't seen Harry Potter, so I don't understand.

It's still about sister, is golf no longer good? Isn't it a drama to write about the entertainment industry?

The third generation is written like time travel, and the personality changes so much. Then some people say that the protagonist is controlled by illusion, but the result is not the same.

The protagonist who is Naruto is the one who shines the most. His ability to achieve things, his perseverance, execution ability, methods, imagination, and mentality are much better than the others. The one from Conan is too decadent and tasteless

The Duke style itself doesn't have much detail on each world, so you don't need to add additional settings... The smart Sarutobi is really good at seeing people.

Can you take in the concubine Eri and Yukiko?

What stuff has been written in the last few chapters, especially the big ball of light? It's too poisonous, so I abandoned it.

Author, do you write about super gods? Get a scientific boss like Dr. Chen

It is particularly important to read the new books every day. The books in the same period are all too strong for me. I beg all readers to read the latest chapter every day and save the children! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

It has been three months since I stopped reading, and this book should be The Eunuch.