Card, Starting Card Dharma Patriarch

Maolin Yingyukun can become an immortal, a monster, a monster, or a demon in mythology. The only difference is his ability. There is no waste material, only the author cannot make it up 😜

It couldn't be a certain eunuch's trumpet again, it was really scary.

The pace is too fast and rushed. Author, you can consider slowing down some plots to allow the protagonist time to develop, instead of forcing the protagonist to participate in one event after another.

This kind of thing that only writes about high-end and not about combinations, and relies solely on quality to crush the fights must be eunuchs. After all, 89 and ten pictures have reached the peak of the strength setting. What's the point of just showing off and slapping people in the face? Moreover, the protagonist changes from an ordinary person to a flawless genius as soon as he time travels. It's really fake.

The writing is okay, but the card design feels very problematic. Cards are formed through the combination of materials. If others fail, the protagonist succeeds. Only after the protagonist succeeds can others succeed. Doesn't this tell others, come and catch me if I have a problem And there are also papers and material combinations. What's the use of having a thesis? Unlike other cards, which involve setting up the background, this book is just about matching materials. How to write a thesis? Writing three Buddhist sutras will lead to Bodhidharma. Is it just a random fabrication? Why doesn't it turn into a higher-level sutra or a Buddhist disciple or a treasure? What's the reason? . . .

Three books combined into one person? ? ?

The rhythm is messy. Will you die if you fuck the pig's feet?

Why did you want to fight the Phoenix Girl in the first place? What does it mean to be controlled by Bodhidharma? If you don't want to be exposed, don't fight. There is no reward for fighting.

The writing is okay, but there are a few things you'd better change. The cards you make only need to upload the materials, and others can make them, so why upload them? Everyone is a master. I really can't stand this poison. I read half of it and don't change it later. I just ran away after reading the free chapter. This is too poisonous.

The curse of the card😃

I'm a newbie... I beg you guys to read it... Reading it is really important for new authors, thank you!

How generous it is! Come on

Either a dragon or a phoenix. Too old

The plot is too blunt, confusing and inconsistent, and there are also big problems with the card design settings.

I met the female classmate "Huang Wushuang" when I was in college, and I was instantly defeated. What era is this article from... I really can't stand this name, goodbye.