Simultaneous Time Travel Starts from the Flower Age

7,000 Words a day is too few, as if we look down upon it

It's a very good book, but I would like to make a small suggestion. Let one die and let them change their mentality. Now they always think that they are the protagonist and don't care about the danger. 1. Are the elders of the demon sect so kind-hearted that they would teach you magical skills whenever they meet? Too taken for granted. It's like meeting a rich man with no children on the road. He asked me to give me a share of his property. 2. When I met the man-eating Yu clan, I was originally fighting, but when I saw it turned into a child, I immediately lost my guard. It was like being blown up by firecrackers during the Chinese New Year. I turned around and saw that it was a child who set it off. I immediately fell in love with this child and bought him candies. 😰

CSs like Xu Fengnian had better not get too close to him

I just want to see the flowers, that doomsday mixed martial arts thing. It's good to be a cheat, but in the end you want to open three ways? What is this thing? Do you understand the precise targeting of reader types? If you want all three, then you can't get all three! I watched Fanhuaxian very well. Who the hell wants to watch your mixed martial arts show Doomsday Line? I'm so annoyed. This way of writing is disgusting.

How can I put it, the hook is too big and the jump is too fast. The author may have difficulty writing this book after three or four hundred chapters. The characteristic of 99 style is sharing talents instead of exchanging skills. For example, it is like playing Haki in Bleach. Every world has its own world view. Why don't you understand? This is why 99 was the starting point but has never been surpassed.

The previous one was okay, but the appearance of Teng Teng was a bit baffling and she was not the main character's daughter. The three sentences are inseparable from this little girl. All the characters like her and help her feel the heroine of watching the female video again.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 22. The author's writing is very messy. First person and third person are mixed together. Storytelling and novel are mixed together. There are too many punctuation marks. The plot is as cliche as it was ten years ago. Many plots feel like they were written on top of each other and slapped on the forehead. But I can still read it. It is really a book that can be read. If it is not cooked, don't blame me if you eat raw melon and eggs.

1980S literary online novels...

It's smooth, absolutely. If you weren't poisoned to death by Chapter 13, you're considered great.

Writing about mixed martial arts usually doesn't end well. Because time is messed up, most people can't grasp it.

It was written well before, but why did a daughter suddenly appear? I felt awkward all of a sudden, and the content I wrote suddenly became wordy and blank,,,,

Aren't all Xuezhong fans criticizing Xu Fengnian? Just like fellow Douluo people criticizing Tang San. Why is there still a friendship here?

The more I watch, the more boring it becomes. The urban protagonist inexplicably raises a daughter before he has a wife. With so much capital and so much information, he wants to open a supermarket? It seems that the doomsday protagonist didn't even get out of the building before it was released, and the mixed martial arts actor couldn't understand what he was doing. He was neither obscenely developed nor brave and diligent. It was like watching a show, but why did he run to contact Fan Xian? After chatting for a while at the base camp, I thought of leaving it alone and then went to Emperor Wu City. There was a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. There were also some parallel import plots inexplicably mixed in...

It's too confusing to understand. It's about martial arts, apocalypse, and city. I don't even know what I'm looking at. Who is the protagonist?

The author writes the plot very smoothly, but I feel that the other worlds are less described, or the writing is a bit stiff (Is there a discussion group or something like that?)

I traveled to a particularly chaotic world. It was impossible to see Wisteria turn into a child. I immediately let down my guard. I felt that I could absorb the protagonist in Wisteria, absorbing the blood and inner energy of the protagonist. 1. After absorbing the blood of the protagonist, I will give you a description of blood connection and similar appearance. I will add a few words. If you don't change it, it is really poisonous, but you can also watch it if you skip it.

Why must I add a daughter?

With platinum capital, I can't sleep at night, and I am more and more quick.

I just watched it. There are too many dialects. You and I can just be normal. There is really no need to increase the threshold.

"A boy from this world, a cruel dark corpse king appeared in the elf world. He sat on a luxurious toilet made of gold. He often robbed the elves on the way and asked them: Do you think I look like a human being? If the answer is yes, he will sit back on the toilet with satisfaction. If If you answer no, he will become furious and send out his minions to destroy everything. The beautiful elven world is suffering from a great crisis. Please sign a contract with us and become an invincible warrior to resist the Dark Corpse Emperor! " A cute blue bird-shaped elf in the subspace shouted. "I will give you love and tolerance!" A brown and green fat little elf said, blinking his mung bean eyes. "I will give you courage and strength!" A red elf with two horns on his head said, waving his cute little sword. "I will give you happiness and patience!" A purple elf said, swinging his crab hands and tentacles. "And I will give you wisdom and magic!" The cute blue bird-shaped elf stretched out his colorful wings and said. "Who do you want to choose for the contract?" "As a child, I can't tell, I want to try them one by one!" The bald boy said eagerly. As a result, the bald boy named Walkerma von Hindenstein gained unparalleled piety and power. His love was so strong that he claimed to be the spiritual descendant of the God-Emperor and a living saint. He even made up rumors that he was a descendant of the God-Emperor's illegitimate son... His courage was so strong that he would ride into the battlefield in a chariot, shouting spells while wielding a hammer to kill any dirty scum who dared to touch his luxurious carriage with dirty hands. His happiness is so simple. Apart from whipping himself every day, you don't know what he did to the statue of the God Emperor while hiding in his room... His wisdom is so outstanding. He reads ancient scrolls and scripture files in the Imperial Library every day, and from the treasure house of forbidden knowledge, he understands a great truth: justice will defeat evil, otherwise it will be defeated by evil. "After so many years, what is your choice?" The four elves asked in the dark. "Only children make choices, and I, the greatest gentleman in the empire, the invincible pastor, the light of civilization, the holy Archbishop Walkerma, want them all!" The bald middle-aged man stretched out his big hand and shook it tightly. As a result, his body turned into a skeleton, and he was forced to put on the Bone King's armor and the crown of witchcraft. He cut off his right hand and forcibly attached it to a bone melon. His body was repeatedly pierced inside and outside by the black tentacles ejected until it was completely wrapped. Became Nagash, the Corpse King. "What a greedy guy. I've run out of ideas. Let's find the next person to seduce." The four elves named Nurgle, Khorne, Slaanesh, and Tzeentch discussed this. "Young man from this world, a cruel dark corpse king has appeared in the elf world..." Before the cute blue bird-shaped elf finished speaking, the bard who was stopped said: "Lovely elf, do you think I look like a human being?" "Um... You do!" The bird-shaped elf seemed to have a strange association and replied tremblingly. "The answer is correct! Have you heard of Cathay? I have a long narrative poem of 600,000 words. Please give me some time and listen to my details."

Can the protagonist survive the Law of Balance by traveling through the ancient times? If you can't fight, you won't die in a piece.

All the vegetables are cooked in the same pot. If it is cooked well, it is hot pot. If it is not cooked well, it is pig food.

So awesome. Tablet plus mobile phone

The writing style, plot and character settings are all impressive for primary school students. . . It's hard to describe in one word. . . No wonder no one is watching

New books, please read, collect, all kinds of requests

I didn't want to read the latest chapter after I saw it, it was already broken, it was so confusing! The author wants everything, there are too many plots, it's too confusing and unattractive! The more I watch, the more irritated I become!

The book is gone, buddy😆

Soul Emperor~ (laughing):-D

Fanhua had previously planned to help Banxia and the others after they were deceived. Is this part gone?

I'm really speechless and the plot collapsed.