Konoha's Entry System Ninja

Why learn so many miscellaneous ninjutsu? It's not just for the sake of word count, all the Naruto fanfics published after 2023 are all about watching Konoha's Third Generation, and they're still so gross and disgusting.

Obviously he can be the Shilipo Sword God, but in order to follow the original work, he graduated early and became extremely poisonous.

When I saw this book, Shisui said that he was Kagami's son, and that he was older than Kakashi, I thought? ? ? Wow, my dear, what the hell are the recent Naruto books? There are several books where the characters' ages don't match up. . Fan adaptation does not mean changing the time flow. .

How did the author write that Shisui is older than Kakashi and Obito. . . Have you never watched Naruto?

The skill tree was not chosen well It feels like there are countless small branches without many combinations and matchings. A featureless system. There are no special upgrades for playability. . .

The grenade is too stupid, and its power is worthless. Besides, is the power of the detonator more important? It's concealment. This black pimple grenade may be effective the first time, but it will be completely useless later. The author completely underestimated the ninja and thought he couldn't dodge the marbles.

Kishimoto's biological father, Uchiha Itachi, has been praised by Kishimoto from beginning to end. The author personally believes that he is a good person with a big pattern, and he will give everything for the village. Now all the novels are black Itachi. If you want to clean up the third generation, can you go and clean Itachi? After all, the original setting of Itachi is good.

I finally understand the main reason why this book is not popular. The protagonist's strength at the age of 6 cannot be defeated by any basic ninja, and he graduated early at the age of 6. I know what the author's purpose is in writing this, that is to grab Kakashi's graduation record. The author is completely transitioning the plot for the famous scenes in Naruto!

You dare not kill any of the named people in the original work, for fear of changing the original plot... You finally saved White Fang, and then wrote it to death yourself... Then why should I watch the fanfic? Isn't it great to watch the original work directly?

Six, people are said to have Chinese names, and they are also said to have Japanese names. There really are some of you.

The author's writing style is slightly poor. There are many writing problems. Long-winded, too long-winded. This is a fanfic, some plot changes. Of course it should be, but if you use original characters and change the age, it is acceptable to fluctuate by a few years. After all, Naruto's timeline is a big hole. You are a generation behind. . Shisui. The character setting is full of loopholes, and people say whatever they say according to their age. A child shouldn't speak maturely. The sudden concern is very strange. . Mute. There is a story and a single plot. Characterization is average.

... Naruto sees only half a bucket of water and just imitates others in writing Naruto fanfics? Many settings are wrong. And there is another one, the protagonist is so childish, especially the dialogue with Danzo when he first met, Danzo thought it was very good, I was so embarrassed that I could dig out three rooms and one living room.

The book is not amazing, but it is still readable because of the eloquent stories. But as soon as Shisui came out, I couldn't stand it anymore. The loophole is too big. Shisui is at most 3-4 years older than Itachi and 5-6 years younger than Kakashi.

The timeline is wrong. This is already the biggest poisonous point. I don't know how others can watch it. Maybe they haven't watched it and don't understand the timeline, so they can watch it, but people who know it can't watch it at all. Also, it forces the plot forward and offends the big shots. I just want to ask, this is the only book that offends the big shots and dares to graduate early. After offending someone, you still dare to go out, and you still don't know how to write the word "death". Others dare not do it openly, but you can do it to death behind your back, and others will still be fine, because he is a big shot, and he can only curse a few words at most. But the protagonist still dares to run around and doesn't know how he died. Even a big shot will kill you if he doesn't mess with you! To sum up, many things are forced to serve the plot. What bothers me most now is serving the plot, because writing fan fiction must follow the timeline. When I read fan fiction, I only read it if it develops according to the timeline. If it does not develop according to the timeline, what kind of fan fiction should I read?

Chapter 2 Yakushi Nonou is considered an elder after all. Hoshita Hoshita was pleasantly surprised. He quickly took the notebook and hugged Yakushi Nonou's (soft) waist: "Thank you!" Don't you feel disgusted by your soft waist?

It's too complicated and confusing. Why waste time learning so many useless ninjutsu? Do you think any ninja in the original novel uses so many ninjutsu when fighting? Ninjutsu is more important than mastery. Moreover, learning ninjutsu from a pig's trotter is too trivial. In the original book, 12 Xiaoqiang genin only knew one or two family ninjutsu. In the later period, in addition to chakra, his physical fitness became stronger, and he only knew one or two more ninjutsu. However, Pig Knuckle learns/develops a ninjutsu at every turn, which makes the reading experience very bad and feels like a joke.

During the Fourth War, one family arrived in one village, which was Sarutobi Hiruzen's greatest contribution to the family. During the Third Generation's reign, Hinata was bullied, the Uchiha clan was exterminated, and the Senju were gone. There were not many descriptions of other big and small clans, but Sarutobi was the number one in the ninja world, with more and more people, far ahead. Those who say there are only a few dozen people, that's because only a few dozen were drawn. Other villages only have a few dozen people painted. Are there only dozens of people in other villages? And Kushina's relics are all in Konohamaru's warehouse. Compare Naruto's treatment with Konohamaru's treatment. It can be seen that the Sarutobi family basically sucked everything they could. Anyway, Uchiha swallowed the reasonable one. The fourth generation and the whirlpool swallowed.

It's a bit unreasonable. Danzo realized that if he was really that naughty, how could Minato grow up?

The name Shuichi is too Japanese, why not just call me Shuichi?

I thought I picked up a good book, but I saw that the protagonist's teammate who graduated early was Uchiha Shisui. Really speechless. The protagonist and Kakashi are in the same class. Kakashi is about 6 years older than Shisui. How can they be the right teammates together?

If the timeline is messed up, it's a big poison 🙂

The Nine-Tailed Rebellion in Konoha 51, Obito is 15 years old, Kakashi is 15 years old, Shisui is 10 years old, Itachi is 6 years old. How did the 2-year-old Zhisui team up with the protagonist when Kakashi graduated at the age of 6?

Collecting names of various escape skills and sword skills. It is best to have basic principles. The author will selectively copy the books.

A big battle to collect entries. If you have any ideas, just write them down. The author will selectively copy them 🤓

I took a look at the catalog and found... Kaguya gave birth? ? ? ? ? Is this the Kaguya I thought of?

I would like to suggest that the entry for Fire Release without Seal Release is a bit buggy. It is given after 5 Fire Release Institutes. I suggest that it would be better to change it to an Unseal Release, because your entry is difficult to obtain and the benefits are too high. Then can other escape techniques also require 5 Ninjutsu to obtain a similar entry without seal release? Author, you can think about whether it is a bit too buggy.

Mute

Is there a Shen Nong? How about this book?

Originally it was still possible to watch it, so Nonou wouldn't say it, but Shisui is now four or five years older than Kakashi. Isn't this a bit too farfetched?

Who said that if the Third Hokage doesn't write about conspiracy theories, he has to wash his hands of it. Writing as a framer with insufficient political ability is not acceptable. Which figure in history is either black or white?