Family Cultivation of Immortality: Becoming an Immortal from a Broken Puppet

You can research disposable puppets that self-destruct. The third-level meat shield puppet has a self-destruct core. Or a third-level melee burst puppet with a self-destruct core. This is a one-stop service.

I've read Chapter 30, and you've created a lot of crises for the protagonist's family. One of the Bai family has not yet been resolved, because the beauty of the clan member Mei Qingling has attracted the covetous conflict between the Zhu family's young masters. Previously, the protagonist followed the ancestor to see the puppet, and there was no explanation for the puppet's problem, so it was foreshadowing. To be honest, it's too overwhelming. Write it like you do. This family is over. The protagonist has no guarantee at all. Because the incident of a clan girl has been exposed early, why did your family keep it secret? It was a waste of effort. This book is off track. Everyone is here for the puppet master. While there are not many chapters left, collect your thoughts and think about the development of the plot before writing.

After reading just four chapters, I discovered a big problem. The protagonist wants to create his own puppet technique, so it is said that the puppet making method was given by Goldfinger. However, he told the family elders that he wanted to create it himself. This part is particularly ridiculous. In the author's article, it is written that even a third-level puppet master cannot create his own, but the protagonist is not even a first-level puppet master. He is just a person who has learned two puppets. He had to create his own. This part seemed too unreasonable, and his family elders did not question it and just let it go. This part was really too poisonous. I didn't want to read it when I saw it. Think about it, a person who has just entered the middle stage of Qi Refining and has just been promoted to the fourth level of Qi Refining wants to create his own puppet. Let's not go into details. At least he can't create his own puppet in the later stage of weapon refining and the early stage of host machine, right? But the protagonist said that he wanted to create his own. Even if the protagonist just said that he got an opportunity from outside, it turned out that he created it by himself. If you created your own first-level one, that's it. But I want to ask, why can you create your own second-level one? And I am still saying this in the middle of my Qi training. I just want to advise you not to be blinded by those good reviews.

The protagonist needs to study disposable puppets, which can be destroyed with a single use and have a large amount of movement. They can be thrown like talismans.

I can only say that the minds of the immortal cultivators you write are not as good as those of mortals. The protagonist's way out is to either go to an unfamiliar city to develop, or to refine a puppet and sell it in a farther city. How can anyone still be in the limelight when their own family is so weak?

I feel that the pressure on the protagonist is too great. How can the skills of cultivating immortals be so loss-making? The profit is too low.

Just break it by yourself. I have to go out at night. Using one to hit the other will cause a bug.

You're copying the one who summoned the little skeleton, right? But there's something wrong with yours. Other people's summons only require mana and physical strength, and they can be summoned infinitely. Your puppet needs materials and knowledge of weapon refining. The materials are limited and require financial resources. You're a garbage protagonist who has no ability to stand up. You'll probably be dead by the time you get better.

Here's an idea, the puppet master shouldn't be so weak without the puppets, he should at least know some secret skills. The setting says that the puppet master is weak without the puppets. Also, the whole plot creates a big crisis for the Mei family and the Bai family, and uses rules and regulations to restrict the Bai family. How can I put it, I've seen too many plots like this.

The market price of the puppet is 15 spirit stones, but the materials cost 13? Where did the philanthropist come from?

Isn't this just following that mecha?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is a bit rough and the details are not in place. If you write 500 pictures, you will probably become a fairy.

What nonsense? Is this the end?

Too much trouble. The upgrade is too slow, the updates are too few, and the protagonist is too hard pressed. Can there be a cultivating family under such a sect? Maybe around 600 chapters.

The 70-year-old son of a sixty-year-old man? 🤔

Puppetry seems complicated and useless. Flying Sword, Talisman, and Spells are more resource-saving than this.

The writing is good, it's not just plain-spoken to impress others, nor is it hidden to try to make me like it. Nowadays, there are books that have a system and they all like Gou Dao. They still hide it and tuck it in. I really have enough.

There is a book about mechas, in which the mecha is broken and the person becomes stronger.

The subject matter is good, but the various channels and systems are imperfect, and it looks like I want to write about it one after another. Moreover, the plot is full of ideas but cannot be written well, the cheats are all annoying, the puppets are just like a cutscene, and the system is also weird.

I suggest you first write a fast-paced fandom series about a family with about 500,000 to 1 million yuan, or else write a book about eunuchs.

Are you ready to take revenge after practicing the evil sword technique?