Versatile Mage: Obtain Shadow Godhead at the Beginning

Your Bo City opening made me sleepy. I regret not making up for it. All the damn people are dead (Lin Yun'er from Girls' Middle School and her sister Wei Mage Lin Yuxin, and you didn't deliberately change their futures like childhood girlfriend He Yu). You didn't stop the Black Church's plan, and you didn't even release any information to Tang Yue and Zhan Kong. In the original work, all those who changed mages happened, and those who changed their lives died. So what was the purpose of your Bo City opening plot? For the Holy Spring? What you have in Bo City is just for breaking through to the mid-level, not to mention you gave back all the rest. Then you might as well arrange a protagonist with a background, and have high-level and ultra-level resources in the later stage. For Mu Ningxue? That can be done in the imperial capital. After all, no one can get into her heart before anything happens to her family. Then, the identity and background of the protagonist can be used to help her and slowly melt her. For Mo Fan? You can definitely contact him in the Magic City, and female characters such as Mu Nujiao, Ai Tutu, Bai Tingting, and Ding Yumian only started to appear in the Magic City. So I don't understand what the plot of Bo City's opening is for. You said that you are a newbie, and it is easier to follow the plot of the original work, so you should make up for the regrets. After all, everyone reads fan fiction to make up for the regrets. As a result, the plot of Bo City is over without the protagonist doing anything (only one more Yu Ang died than in the original work. This character is the same no matter when you write it)

As for the heroine, I can accept whoever I choose, I don't care who I choose, it doesn't matter if I don't have a heroine! As long as you don't give it away (except for Xinxia), if you want to give Mo Fan a wife, only accept insignificant people like Zhou Min! I hope you can avoid the benefits given to Mo Fan in the original work (the one with Tang Yue, living together with Ai Tutu, naked people in the Alps, etc.), Or else don't mention it! I pretended not to know! If you don't have hope for things like Flame Fairy, Lingling, and Apasi, don't write them, and don't give them to Mo Fan! It's okay to give Mo Fan another hook. If it's not easy to write, you really can't create one. You can change it to another one with the same ability, as long as it's not the original one (the ability is the same, but it's not the original person, like Yan Ji. If you want to give it to Mo Fan, I hope you can tell me that the original one is missing or something happened, this one is a new one)

Is it multiple heroines? Who are the heroines?

This is my suggestion after reading a fanfic, and then I thought about some new books that have just been published. Ignore the ones about "Shadow Army" because they are settings in other books (because there are too many words to type. If I want to type it again, I can only post a screenshot here, but I can't find a copy. If you are interested, just read and write about the plot mentioned in it. If there are book friends who want to open a new book after reading it, you can come and kick me. I will pay to read it.

The writing rhythm is good, giving people a slightly fast and just right feeling. The plots that are similar to the original work are skipped a little faster.

It was a bit overwhelming to keep chasing, after all, it was too watery. Watching it once a week feels okay😒

Does Liu Ru have another sister? 🙂 Aren't they twice as happy as each other? 😌😍

The writing is pretty good, I look forward to the subsequent plot 🙂

Just read it, the reviews are pretty good, the name is a bit bad, it's better to change it, why not call it, All France Shadow Reign, or whatever 😰

Chapter 3, forget it, I can't stand it anymore, what is the role of the protagonist's previous life? As for the Godhead, after being reborn for more than ten years, you are still an ordinary person. Even if the system is different, have you forgotten all your previous experience in cultivating Jingqi Shen? Another novice author

It's too slow and not enough to read, author

Author, will you finish this book?

There was no introduction, so I was confused.

From Chapter 19 to Chapter 25, I couldn't stand it any longer, so I took a look and found that I was not the only one who felt this problem in the chapter description. I would change it later depending on how many times the author said it in the chapter description. Then in chapters 26, 27, and 28, there is no change in the fight against Yu Ang. There is still a lot of description of the environment and character descriptions. In the last arena, the surroundings have to be described. The protagonist appears and gives a description of his appearance, "his eyes are deep and peaceful, detached from the troubles of the world..." There are hundreds of words. Battle description, I haven't seen much, it's a turn-based fight, after every move, the audience said three sentences, this one was shocked, that one was shocked, and a few more narrations, I didn't see any effective information, just swipe to jump, eh, how come three chapters are over? What did I see? This is too unpopular and hurtful. The key is the appearance of the protagonist. I write it once with Uncle Mu and once in the ring. They are all one paragraph, and there is no difference. What a misty thing. I can't remember it. It didn't have a profound impact on me anyway, so I wrote a lot of words in vain. The same goes for the description of the coffee shop environment. There are a lot of them at the end of the first chapter and a few paragraphs at the beginning of the next chapter. What's the point? This is water, the free period of traffic is written like this, which makes people feel uncomfortable.

🙂 I didn't stick to the first one. It seems that my poison resistance still needs to be improved.

Damn it, why is my big Tutu gone?

Tang Yue, Yan Ji, Jiang Shaoxu collected?

Is the author here? Is this unfinished writer's account for sale? {"NickName":"The boneless cat who loves to eat boneless fish","UserId":432810988}