Who Has Superpowers to Fall in Love With?

Stopped and ran away🤓

After seeing Chapter 13, let me complain, How did this person named Zhang Zhengda come to have so many scenes and so many inner monologues? The more I watch, the more clown-like monologues I get, which makes me crazy.

Introduction 6, "Updated 12 days ago"

Meow~

Is it going to be put on the shelves? So many chapters in one breath. You guys have saved the manuscript😰😰

Write quickly, brother, write quickly! Please, give me one more chapter. It's the last time. I promise it will be the last time. Please, give me one more chapter. I can't stand it anymore!

The biggest problem is the character setting. Why does the heroine have so many things to do? Don't write out all your naughty thoughts. It gives people the suspicion of being a mere charlatan. The heroine is too annoying. The setting of the male protagonist is illogical. People you don't know happen to help the neighbors so much. This can really only be done in a dog-licking way. Love can be described. The only possibility for a man to help a beautiful woman he is not familiar with is to fall in love with her. Except for Pig Tou, not many men are willing to do this to Yan Zi. The biggest problem is that the writing is not pleasant. They use ants as props, which shows that he is not a real Holy Mother. He is too deliberate.

Is it the superpower version of "Who's Falling in Love After Being Reborn"? If so, if there were less swear words, the early plot would be better than that one. I'd like to read it. It should also be popular, right?

I would like to recommend my new book "Chronology, Back to the 1985" The story of an ordinary family, a child with language learning disabilities gradually returned to normal, and gradually began to study hard and grow up! It is an interesting story that is neither bloody nor witty, but a bit exaggerated and reasonable.

It's very well written. It can't be said to be a masterpiece, but it is of high quality. The author said the results were not good. Maybe it has something to do with the title of the book. The title of the book has little connection with its content. It is not easy to filter the target group. The title of the book feels like an urban romance to me. The content feels like an urban fantasy light novel. If you look at the title of the book and don't see what you want to read about urban love, you will stop reading. If I want to read urban fantasy, I won't click on your book title. Just miss the target group. My suggestion here is to change the title of the book. Find a name that is more in line with the content and the target group. Attract your target group. There is some help.

The writing of the characters is too deliberate. They are all created for the sake of shaping.

The emotional drama written by the author is too long, and it is very abrupt. The author should not write about emotions anymore. I really can't understand it.

I feel okay. In fact, the more people criticizing me proves that you, the author, still have merit.