Immortality in Martial Arts: Starting with Sacrificing Villains
武道长生：从祭献反派开始
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- Completed
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- 325k Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Male
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- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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Tried!
Generally speaking, it's okay. The first few pictures may be to show the growth of the protagonist, which is a bit slow! After killing the mini-boss later, it started to take off, which was pretty cool. It should be a big event now, and the new author doesn't know if he can grasp it!
A wretched person turns into a desperate person. If he gets all the talents of animals, he can be invincible, but he insists on fighting life and death. This is pure stupidity.
Coincidence is too much
There are too many coincidences, the halo of the protagonist is too wide, and the world revolves around the protagonist
You sacrificed the body, but the body is still there
Can't understand. This is so powerful. If you hang around for a while, you can crush it. Why did Mao go out and wander around openly without improving his strength much? So brainless.
If you have this plug-in, you should go to the battlefield. A big battle will be amazing.
It's great that a newcomer can write like this. After all, there is no charge for more than 120 chapters. It is purely based on love, so everyone will be lenient.
I can round things off a little bit, Chapter 7, are you serious?😰😰
Again, the IQ of the protagonist is shown by lowering the IQ of the supporting character.
? ? ? What did you write? ? Can you write about this subject in a messy way? ?
Chapter 8 is about losing your wits. If you can't think of a reasonable way to escape, don't let the protagonist be trapped in death. Finally, by portraying the villain as an idiot, the protagonist escapes, which seriously affects the reading experience.
Villain, who defines it?
Who is the villain? Everyone thinks they are the protagonist in life, so how do you define the so-called villain?
I didn't see the invincible flow and fast pace. I guess I marked it wrong.
Really, I can tell you right here, if you didn't have absolute force and played tricks like giving a grand burial after death and playing tricks on Qian's family, you could die right now.
Chapter 6 The protagonist escapes from danger. As luck would have it, I encountered a major danger and hid on the way to Langcheng. What's even more coincidental is that while hiding, he was actually met by the servant nurse while he was urinating. What a coincidence? Even if you hide, you will be met by others. Even if you hide, others will see you. Can it be discovered so easily? So what's the point of hiding? It's so blunt, this kind of plot should not exist.