Slime True Immortal

The writing is very good. You can tell that I have been a slime before. The writing is very real and matches my experience of being a slime. Come on!

There are over a hundred chapters, and the cultivation is still in the Qi-training stage. Except for a few NPCs in the world of immortality, no map has been opened. Does this book really have an outline? Foundation building, golden elixir, and Yuanying. . . . . Isn't it really impossible to write so many things later? The writing of Dungeons in the Western Fantasy World is also very strange. It can be written as an adventure and upgraded, but the writing is mediocre and not interesting. The subject matter is indeed good, but the setting alone is not interesting and the plot is not interesting. Where can I get follow-up subscriptions and monthly tickets? I am skipping reading now, and I can't find a single interesting point in the three or five chapters. All book friends are welcome to discuss rationally.

I don't blame you if you called me slime when I was level 1. What did you call me when I was level 99?

The protagonist's family Those who can recognize each other should be no less than 20 years old 😏😏

Have you ever been a slime? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted.

What kind of crappy book is it? You actually start charging for it after it's put on the shelf. An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care about reading the book he writes, just throw it out of the bookshelf and never see it again! ( ¯▽¯; )

In fact, it would be much easier to write if the master of cultivating immortals is reborn as a slime. If you want to add some Taoist methods to talk about the past life, it will be fine. With the current way of writing, too much description of cultivating immortals will offend the readers who come for slimes.

The author may not be skilled enough to open both the Immortal Cultivation World and the Western Fantasy World, and use the special abilities of both sides to create complementary upgrades, and the story unfolds at the same time, but this subject matter is really good, a bit like the combination of the two book themes (This Dungeon Grows Mushrooms) and (I Cultivation to Immortality, But I Came to the Wizarding Time). The author's subject matter is very suitable for writing a long novel.

The first time I met it, it was really nice. The world view setting was very novel, the upgrades were complementary and interesting, and the family relationship was also very warm. Just before it was released, the main character's perspective was gone. I really hated those people looking at the tavern perspective. You can farm if you want, but if you keep recruiting subordinates, the protagonist's own combat power will increase, and farming will not feel like a management. It is very boring, because the protagonist's sense of participation has become very low. The book friends in the back, if you return to the level of free chapters, you can give me a kick.

First of all, the title and introduction of the book are terrible. It makes people think that it is about the so-called Western Fantasy World Cultivation, but in fact it is more like a variant of the 99 style. The protagonist is a human monk in the Western Fantasy World and a slime in the Western Fantasy World. However, the skills and talents of both sides are interoperable Advantages: 1. The tone is relaxed and enjoyable 2. Daily writing is good, with some elements of farming and food 3. The protagonist seems to have a good attitude, not a virgin, but not a bad person either Disadvantages: 1. The current focus is very much on Western Fantasy, and the Xiuxian side is almost used as a tool to provide skills, which is a bit of a waste of the 99-level advantage; if the Xiuxian side can also be expanded and written in the future, and the rhythm is mastered properly, it will be a big advantage 2. Super seedling, chasing book crematorium 3. The writing style is a bit immature, and the jokes are a little awkward in some places, but not serious 4. It is said to be a Western fantasy, but it is not very authentic. Slimes are generally set as the lowest level monsters and are unlikely to have child-protecting behavior... However, everything is based on the author's settings, but I am just not used to it Conclusion: There are many imitators of 99, but apart from the pioneering work, none of them can be read, usually because the world is too complex and the rhythm is too chaotic; this book directly limits the world to two original worlds It is indeed a good idea, I hope it can be written well