Super Mechanic: Start by Conquering Hela

I don't quite understand why you went to find these two sisters in such a hurry? Later, you decided to mix the system, and even started a church (you were honest, and you could escape the sprout by just waiting for the growth). Then you went to interfere with Han's business, and you even opened another church in another universe. It's only been a few chapters, but you've opened up multiple lines, and each line has only written very little. It feels like you just write whatever comes to mind when writing a composition, and I have no idea what you're doing. Even the protagonist you wrote does not look like a normal person, but a madman who only acts according to his own will, and only has all kinds of crazy and wild behaviors. There are very few fans of Technician Han, so I endured reading it, but now I find that I can't even finish the paid chapters...

It's really stretched and rough, I can't stand it anymore

After reading Chapter 10, the protagonist didn't feel at all alert about being in the villain's base camp after getting the cheat. This plug-in is not an invincible plug-in. Writing this way makes the author very arrogant.

In Chapter 27, the protagonist and Hela were discussing escaping from the base in the room where Aurora was held. Um, would such an important place not have monitoring and sound recording equipment?

I have finished reading the current chapters, and I feel like I have a few questions. First, the character of the protagonist. I can't tell whether it is confidence or arrogance. The operations he has done so far seem to me to be a bit low on alert. Why is he so confident that the leader will not do anything to him? There is also the operation of the leader's religion. I don't quite understand the meaning. There are many ways to gain the leader's trust. You just need to show value. After all, you are one of the sprouts, so there is no need to make it so awkward. I feel like the author may have been too excited when writing this. Second, I feel that the protagonist's plug-in is not very powerful. Although it upgrades quickly, it does not add any powerful abilities. The combat effectiveness is only at the bottom of the same level. In addition to being more resistant to beatings, although the protagonist can gain abilities by adapting to attacks, they are all for defense, so he cannot always be a sandbag. Although you can share tasks with Han Xiao, it has great limitations. Most tasks require the protagonist to follow Han Xiao. It feels like the protagonist is controlled by others. Moreover, Han Xiao basically has the abilities that the protagonist obtains through tasks, but the protagonist may not have the abilities that Han Xiao has. Moreover, the protagonist cannot view other people's panels and cannot learn skills. I feel that although the protagonist's ability upgrades quickly in the early stage, it is completely inferior to Han Xiao in the middle and later stages, which may make it more uncomfortable for readers. And the protagonist's ability needs to be beaten, I am afraid that this situation will happen later: it is obviously an enemy that the protagonist can beat, but the protagonist does not deal with him in order to gain experience. Later, one of his own people is injured, and then the protagonist angrily kills the opponent, and then regrets it afterwards, but he does it every time. Hope this scenario won't happen. But now what I am looking forward to is what will happen when the protagonist logs into the game, controls himself, or creates a new account and opens a vest to make up for the combat effectiveness. However, the current time in Xinghai and the real world are different. It is still November in Xinghai, but it is already June next year in the real world. I hope the time can be unified as soon as possible. I also hope that the author will update it soon. It's rare to see a fanfic about a mechanic. It doesn't have to be that good. As long as the plot is normal and smooth and doesn't start to make fun of yourself, I believe there will be many people who will read it.

The author has successfully downgraded Super God, the pinnacle science fiction novel, into an urban street stall novel 😐😐😐😐 The sprout is a military management organization, a military management organization, a military management organization! ! ! ! Say important things three times. You are not just bragging about your work as an ordinary company employee. Do you understand what militarized management is?

From my personal perspective, the best thing about Super God Mechanic is not the so-called "Fourth Natural Disaster", and even the writing style is not very good. It is just so fluent that I didn't notice it when I was reading. I think the most interesting thing is actually Han Xiao extracting the enemy's expertise and skills, but it seems that those who write fan fiction don't even write about this at all.

After reading The Super Mechanic, I wanted to look for fanfics but couldn't find them. Come on, the author.

It's not interesting. The author made the protagonist look like a loser.

When writing about super gods, one should write about the martial arts system. Whether it is fighting or training, there is a clear writing method. For training, you can use the star furnace exercise method, fighting martial arts to separate the body wave, the physical body to the stars, and the hand to tear apart the battleship.

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Funny, I actually saw someone writing about a super god mechanic 😍😍😍

The author makes it difficult to describe the protagonist in one sentence

Diaosi protagonist, your fandom makes the original work less attractive.

There is actually someone writing about mechanics again. I hope I can continue to write about it and avoid eunuchs.

The protagonist written by the author has a frivolous personality and the plot is loose and uninteresting.

The plot at the beginning of the closed beta is a little unnecessary. It would be too long to sell weapons, steal weapons and catch thieves. Moreover, even if you want to establish your power, there is no need to spend too much time on the protagonist's vest and the player's trumpet. This part of the early transition will not be able to keep up with the growth of B-level players at most. It feels like the core of your plot is still about budding and then trying to destroy the bud and then breed a new bud out of it.

Subscribe to a chapter and comment. I really really like the book "The Mechanic". I have read it several times and I have very few fans. Do you think it would be interesting to write a story before the exploration calendar and before the birth of the Transcendent A Grade? Think about it carefully. You can write about various civilizations for hegemony. You can write about the confrontation between superpowers. You can write about telekinesis, martial arts, superpowers, magic, etc., Forget about the Mechanic, because the original Mechanic is already very good. I feel that there is no need to write a book about the Mechanic. Yes, starting from the exploration calendar, I think it should be very interesting. It would be best to have a panel like Han Technician but you can change it appropriately. There is no need to write about players. You can do more specialties and so on. It should be very cool. In fact, the ability of power and replica is a good template, but don't process it too much. Just write it according to the background of the original work. If you change too many settings as a fan, it will make the reader very uncomfortable. Various civilizations compete for hegemony, superpowers compete, and civilization develops! I feel so good when I think about it, but no one writes it. It seems that the author of the fanfic doesn't make much money. It's a pity. I really want to read it. I have nothing to do now so I searched to see if there are any good fanfics. It's a pity. I have read more than 30 chapters of this book and I can't stand it. There are some problems with the protagonist's character and the various plot designs are not very rigorous. It's a pity. Come on! Waiting for a fanfic like this 🥺

Author, besides Hela, Aurora, Ames, and the female knight apprentice, the heroines of this book must be accepted. Including other female characters, a total of about ten is enough. There are too many unnecessary ones. In the original work, Technician Han is an ascetic who doesn't engage in womanizing at all, so there is no need to leave the female characters to Technician Han.

Why not block Fording (mascot) and Silvia (secretary) in advance? Fording is a star and easy to find. Han Xiao also knows how to block them, and both of them are in the New Ruilan Alliance.

No, isn't the previous protagonist too out of the ordinary? ? ? Why do you feel like you are being pampered and coquettish?

Author, I feel like your Ocean Blue chapter is a bit too long.

In the hunting incident of Wanying, Wanying's super A-level powerhouse, a member of the Ancient One and the Shengyue Organization, Hezuo was also killed by the Shengyue Organization. The original book said that Lackey was imprisoned for nearly ten years and was only rescued by Han Xiao before the start of the Secret War.

Paying me back my hard-earned money is not worthy of the name.

Pretty good, just too little

Come on, author, there are too few mechanics. You are the second one I have seen.

Doing abstraction? Why is this protagonist a bit mentally retarded?

Super God fan, book title "King of Monsters: I Stack Entries in the Sea of ​​Stars"

The idea is quite good and the writing is quite interesting. I am looking forward to how the author balances the story of the protagonist and Han Xiao. Of course, it seems now that the main world also has a lot of drama. In fact, these are secondary. The key is whether this is a logical and self-consistent story. Expect

Author, author, is there Sylvia as the heroine in this book?